a lil keystlye

[young nov]

im ridin on big blades with low speakers
all black body,all black shoes call it the grim reeper
im grim reepn,tutored you rappers,you retired you been sleepn
i been at it sparkn my heat, you talkn your actions
ill blow your lips on the ground now you the talk of the streets
pull the heat and you dip on your set
loaded clips to your chest, either dip or get wet
im worth a hunnet grand, wear nothing but hunnets man
all my stones 2 faced, so its hard to get trusted man
ya im the writer of writers, hold the heater of heaters
i blow over all attractions, call me evil k'neival

[Mocha Rain]

Nothing stood out. There was nothing that I've never heard before in that entire key. Work on your content, and the way you put it down on paper.

Keep writing.

[Antonio Banderas]

Well, as this was a keystyle, you should pause a second and try to think of somemore creative vocab to incorporate in your writtings... While this piece wasnt too bad, it wasnt to good either.