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Thread: Soulz-Village Presents: Lyrical-Immoraity

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    Moral Insight
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    Past Elavation Presents: Lyrical-Immoraity

    Da nights leave Black marks on hard souls and bold Games,
    Evil scars the good and relinquish hopes with Cold remains
    Lyrically, I express what ought to be expressed to Sum point
    But watch my morality Crumble..... when moving at gun point
    The Sun replenishes my soul........ all the while im still moving
    My Heart is telling me im winning but my mind is sayin im losin
    wanna be da one of the best.... yet that has not been provin
    The physical body remains trapped....yet my soul is still oozin-
    Im in the trapped mind of state i feel so bad but yet so great
    The motovation is strong too..... but my will power is so faint
    I wanna be somebody who is not judged on how he nos play
    But on da content of his statements and what he has to say
    Lyrical Immorality is impossible no exsistance such as that is
    No such thing as supeior Mc's...no lyrically weighted classes
    Cuz i dont obtain graditude being better than somebody specs.
    Everyone wants to be the best rappers but their not dead yet.
    Im not an Bonafide hustla but be sure you know i meet my plan
    They all wanna be claim best........ But best hasn't even began


    This is just a peice of one of my verses man

    ~1~
    Last edited by Moral Insight; September 11th, 2005 at 02:39 PM

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    It really wasnt lyrically but it was pretty cool.

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    Curze
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    it was pretty nice i like your structure it was kinda wierd on the dark side you was trying to show good shit for a noob though me personally liked it but keep it up your rhyme sceme was basic nice shit though decent keep drop homie ~1~

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    Moral Insight
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    uppin

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