.Epic. vs. Jay Says...

[.Epic.]

rules:

10-14 lines
blind
30 mins.
no dr's
no crew v's

.gl.

[.Epic.]

check

[Seedy]

Chekk

[Seedy]

Why do you RAP IN THE FIRST PLACE?-go PRACTICE YA WORDPLAY
you say you're straight from hell? well I'ma send u BACK TO YA BIRTHPLACE
Rippin you is effortless, and it looks like ya ON THE BRINK OF DEMISE
*EYE-LASH* out at you…and your career is over IN THE BLINK OF AN EYE
I'm a SNIPER SPORTIN CHROME, I could kill you with my CYPHER FORCE ALONE
Then I'll lyrically rape him.. with my dick lubed with "HYDROCORTISONE
carbon copy, I'll pull a RIGHTEOUS SWORD FROM STONE to "SLICE A BORING CLONE
fuck ...I'm pro-drug.. Watch I blaze the NEXT-L like a "TYPE OF CORDLESS PHONE
The shit I WRITE IS MISSIN SANITY... I doubt the bullets I SNIPE'LL MISS YA FAMILY
you rappin all wrong so I'ma leave ya whole *METHOD-DISSED* like a "TYPE OF CHRISTIANITY
They can't even hold the pen that this POET'S TOUCHIN,My lyrics will "COBRA CLUTCH HIM
Matter fact,just write my rhymes on ya sperm cells, that'd be the only tight FLOW YA BUSTIN
NOTICE SOMETHIN?... My rhymes'll eat the flesh of this punk like a LOCUST TOUCHED EM
be serious.. ya rhymes is far from sick.. u might as well have mixed ya ink with ROBITUSSIN

[.Epic.]

Yeah Jay you said it with the way you approached me
hey Epic, I cant battle and get "shit on" lyrically*
call this dude a blue jay...............................
..spits rhymes til he's blue in the face and still sounds fake
the dude crumbles like dried up cake, its a disgrace
i just have to throw weak punches to shit on his face
just go away, and shit, dont even play games man
you dope? then why are all the herbs ya biggest fan?
I mean, it is what it is...you're just stuck at wack
you can't even wreck herbs, and dude its a fact

[.Epic.]

*-says "shits on you" in his sig. it also says "it is what it is"

[.Epic.]

up 1

[.Epic.]

c'mon now lets get some votes....up 2

[Seedy]

Uppin this

[.Epic.]

up 3...lets get some votes please...

[Dead Serious]

Damn, this shit was unfair.


Jay Says...



Why do you RAP IN THE FIRST PLACE?-go PRACTICE YA WORDPLAY
you say you're straight from hell? well I'ma send u BACK TO YA BIRTHPLACE
Rippin you is effortless, and it looks like ya ON THE BRINK OF DEMISE
*EYE-LASH* out at you…and your career is over IN THE BLINK OF AN EYE

The shit I WRITE IS MISSIN SANITY... I doubt the bullets I SNIPE'LL MISS YA FAMILY
you rappin all wrong so I'ma leave ya whole *METHOD-DISSED* like a "TYPE OF CHRISTIANITY
They can't even hold the pen that this POET'S TOUCHIN,My lyrics will "COBRA CLUTCH HIM
Matter fact,just write my rhymes on ya sperm cells, that'd be the only tight FLOW YA BUSTIN

Damn, those were some REAL nice punches right. I liked the concept and originality on all ya punches dawg. You kept hittin homedude real hard and he never stood a chance. Your structure was perfect at the beginning but then you fucked it up a LITTLE at the end. Some lines were just longer than others, but it didn't fuck up ya flow too bad. You had the better personals and wordplay so this was easy shit for you. Stop picking on noobs.

Epic

Nothing.

Rhyme scheme was too simple. Every punch and set up that u had was on some elementary rhyming shit. I didn't like the punches at all due to the lack of wit. The structure was decent, but u didn't have anything to put in there. It was a boring verse through and through.


v/ Jay Says, cuz Dead said so.


Hit up the battles in my sig honestly.

[Seedy]

Thanks man, i need more votes....

[F5]

jay-nice line wit a ok flow(could be worked on) and the punches were weak put hard enough fo da win. ups to ya nice job and nice wordplay.

epic-ure verse was weak were punches are concerned and that lost it for u.
elevate and try later homie.

v/jay

[Seedy]

Up this shit

[Seedy]

uppin