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    Just Rewards

    yes its long..but hopefully worth it

    people live in dictatorship, communism and democracy
    two of those do as they say, and one rhymes with hypocrisy
    now britains turnin into a mockery thats gotten to be,
    run so sloppily, gettin on my nerves
    under Americas shadow picture the Union Jack, stars n stripes all merged
    we've become the obdedient spurs digging into the rib cage of the States
    millions protested against the war in the UK, but now were all on the end of the hate
    & now there'll always be a smear of blood on double decker buses
    always be fear embedded in the face of that victim on crutches
    who wished he'd been luckless, and missed his bus that morning
    instead he saw a man explode without warning
    traffic stopped and the emergency services came swarming
    to see a bus shorn in, to a single decker not two
    and then another blast, this time it came from the tube
    and then another and another til peoples amazement grew,
    when they heard that the underground was bathed in blue,
    the blood didn't oxidise from the insane few ,i'm sure that that much is true
    cos nobody could bleed red unless their conscience was clear
    an now bombs are constantly near thoughts that lead to a tear
    sometimes i think how simple shit was
    when the most dangerous weapon here, was a man that wielded a spear
    and he only killed to eat , killed to feast
    hunger owned his thoughts as he slit the belly of the beast
    now a different hungers here to beat a path to Heaven
    brainwashed kids believe that blasts are their last resort to step in,
    through the door of Allahs paradise, to be with their brethren
    from 9 / 11 to the Iraqi rebellion a new bloodshed was born
    & London is bleeding from THAT war, as the terrorists snapped back
    it was nothin complex, jus some public transport and a backpack
    that kept the terrorists plan of attack on track
    but hitting the underground was nothing new
    instead of protectin the landmarks money shoulda gone down the tube
    the gas attacks in Tokyo musta faded from view
    but no matter how tight you tie the knot there'll always be a loop
    we protected Big Ben, the parliament building and downing street
    so bombers hit the working class who were slayed on their feet
    yeh they'll make it back home alright, wrapped inside a flag sheet
    and these events have had me, looking on in disgust
    after a bombin its hard to see thru the dust, as the Labour party falls from trust
    as they lose all touch, from the people who voted them in
    now they're mere ghosts from within,they're reputations are coated in sin,
    as they got caught square on the chin with far eastern knuckles
    if we weren't ready for the ride at least we shoulda been buckled
    instead of havin our feathers ruffled with a Jansport and a one way ticket
    & no matter where he is, now Tony Blair has to live with it
    i guess after the G8 and Olympic bid success somethin had to kill the elation
    and make an ill minded illustration with the capitals stations
    i'm pissed off that,
    tax payers money isn't goin towards the NHS or education
    its that bullet killin a civillian, or bomb landscaping another nation
    & Britains tag partners in this situation in an illegal war
    without a thought for the men and women that have died for,
    a piggyback on Bushs' campaign to settle his old mans score
    whos cold hands oversaw his plans
    and told him you dont get blood on your hands
    if you have colleagues who can act smartly
    in a system that touches the surface, through a third party
    now anger is a big part of me
    i'm sick of the lies politicians kick between them and their henchmen
    i guess its just rewards.. for not enough people voting against them
    thus theres heightened tension,and this saga has years to stand
    ignorance is bliss when the bloods on the other hand




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    phew .. most relevant...fucking pretty nice tho bro.. i tell u i wont be riding on buses and trains for the moment.. plenty of dope rhymes and lines


    some lines are maybe stretched a little


    i'd sat maybe it cudda be formatted a lil better.. maybe given a break with a hook/chorus


    shit iz str8 tho

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    I live just outside London; I'm from Essex. I was thinking maybe of going up to London at some point during the summer, on the train, but I'm too scared. So yeah, this is most definitely all very relevant stuff to me. I think I agree with other dude, some lines were a bit stretched, but I'm not sure if it's just me, the way I read it. Strong topic, if a little uncreative. I liked the message, and the emotion that was put into writing this. Pretty strong, enjoyable read, kudos - worthy of a HOF nomination I think, actually - this month's have been shocking, but I need to get something in there. =/
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    an up on this
    thanks for replies so far
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    nice powerfull topic which you handled very well...can see the emotion and message within the piece and i like to see that...imagrey was good and also a very relevent piece..some line did seem a lil stretched but that can easily be worked on other than that a really nice piece..keep up the good shit homie 1

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    Damn this shit was just crazy... fgee I was feeling this piece alot man... The imagery was just off the hook... The flow was real nice and I liked the multies alot man... I reallly liked how you gave such good details and description damn this was good... Stay up...

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    this did have ill imagery.....good delieverance....vocab was tight....deep emotion and it showed....flowed nicely too.... a few bars were a little stretched but it was still dope....keep droppin tha hottness.~1~


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    Meh Good Shit Here Imagery Was Good Dawg. I Felt Alot Of This Shit Yo uWas Saying. I Like How You Just Stuck To The Topic And Didn't Go Off To A Different Subject. That's Good, Vocabulary In This Piece Was Meh Decent Man You COuld of Did Better. Structure Bad Man Not Really Good If It Was Audio It Would Be Okay But Not On Text Man Fix That Over All Good Piece Man

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