Poetry Here's To You

[Foreshadow]

Poetry
I write at least one of you everyday
But you don’t know me
I study your every move for hours
I know you inside and out
Or at least I think I do
But you really don’t have a certain emotion
Poets pawn off there problems and grievances on you
And you have no choice but to take it
A poet’s choice of words in poetic form
Only highlights his ability
With no acknowledgment like you were strangers
Fame and fortune
Torture those who speak your words
Emotional trapped within you cell of confusion
Grasping life and the opportunity
To fully feel poetry in motion
You help the writer vent anything
No matter the subject
A poet will tell you his darkest secrets
Even the ones he or she’s afraid
To tell there friends
It’s tough knowing you know my whole life
And all its struggle
But still you never pass judgment
I thank you for that
Your helping me become a Def Poet
And I owe you the world
I will never be able to give you anything
But my heart and all the emotion in it
You helped define me as a person
And I want to thank you for helping me
Through every time in my life
And actually caring about it

[Andrew..]

Some imagery in the beginning of this. Nice content. Not much to say fam but nice drop keep at it!!

[Foreshadow]

Thanks for the feedback wise

[SIMPLEsweet]

woow im really lovin this :] nice drop. its so true
& i agree with wise, nice imagery in the beginning!

[Foreshadow]

tHANK ALOT UPPIN.....

[spokenoh]

Really good poem. I enjoy how you are one of few writers who realize that simplicity is the most complex way of expressionism. I wasn't bothered by any ridiculously long words used out of context, or a terrible amount of grammatical errors. You kept this an honest poem, and just let it come out freely. That shows your passion for poetry. Keep writing.

[Kaotic Theory]

word thsi shows alot man....like spoken said it shows you have a lot of passion for poetry and dedicate your self to writing,i love this peice and in many ways i feel the same way on poetry,the emotion and expression of imagery was nice man ,not a bad read at all its pretty solid,i also loved the fact how you expressed on this peice how poetry helped you, and how poetry plays a big part of your life.....nice read man

[Foreshadow]

Thanks alot Spoken & Kaotic

[BLUNT WRAP]

Foreshadow Very Good Poem Good Wording Explaines Lines I'm Feeling Dat Poem Alout Cause You Explained How Its Helping You-very Good Poem

[poyzonivey]

i like the personification in this. Good poem

I appreciate that you took the time to reply
but please try to lengthen your responses a bit
in the future
Thanks

-Mantra

[Foreshadow]

Thank You Poyz & BW