5 bars max
verse do within an hour of checkin
3-0= k.o 5 votes to win otherwise
no crew, hate votes
and no feeding
check check
u spit first my friend, good luck
TJP23145
~Abstrakt~
5 bars max
verse do within an hour of checkin
3-0= k.o 5 votes to win otherwise
no crew, hate votes
and no feeding
check check
u spit first my friend, good luck
ou're scared straight as soon as G Rap penetrates
You wanna escape, but you got a date to meet fate
Run for your life when I'm starting
Suckers are getting turned to missing motherfuckers on a milk carton
Danger, when I rearrange and change a face, ace
You're being replaced by a stranger
I injure, and escape like a ninja
You got struck by a fucking revenger
A bullet inserted in your head, a shot got
Murdered, nobody seen shit, nobody heard it
Fuck around, the price is more than McDonald's pays
And you can sing my blues to Billie Holiday
Put your ass in my path and I'm a blast it
Mind over matter, I burn like battery acid
Terrorizing, sizing up the guys-a
Finger on trigger, when I pull it, a bullet flys in
G's a madman, came from the Badlands
Crush niggas in my bare hands like beer cans
Leaving a gash like the New York Slasher
Showing my inches in a trench like a flasher
You got a problem, I'm a problem solver
Solve more problems with a .357 revolver
Come near you pay dearly
And I can barely hear when you talk so speak up clearly
On a sole role, the golden mic holder
And I flatten your ass just like a steam roller
Pity for niggas I waste
Try to disrespect, get the taste of a neck brace
I got your ass on target
You got beef? You better save it for the motherfucking meat market
Rhymes choke you like a headlock
If a sucker's asleep, I turn his shit into Bedrock
Come on son, get done in
Niggas are running like the redcoats is coming
I enlist punk niggas that want some of this
And what's left is the breath of a death wish
thats my linez
can u read 5 bars... anyway
tpj's as bad as it gets, smashed with lyrical dents
your verse is like your name.....cause neither make sence (ouch)
your a fucking dr and no that doesn't stand for doctor,this is a schocker
i've seen more PUNCHES in a fight between ARMLESS boxers (your verse is weak)
tjp is left to roast. in the mits of a verse hotter than most
your ip was the only positive thing in that whole post (it's a postive number)
this should be closed already, but i'll leave it open iight?
your the biggest dope in site, i've seen better disses reading open mics!!!!
closer.
if blinds read your verse, it still wouldn't be felt....i'll spit flames to you melt
the only was you'd win is if you went back and
voted 5 times for your self!
exlanation^ blind people read by feeling....brail
anyway uppin for votes
how many votes do we need to win this battle
reply soon
i posted that at the top already
uppin for votes please
uppin for votes please
thanks
cmon sum1 gotta vote
uppin
once again uppin for votes ( i voted in a bunch of battled already, return the favor)
uppin the votes
i will return the favore back to you
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iin
im gunna give this one to abstrakt first of all he followed the rules he had nice flow and also good punch lines
V/ Abstrakt
ps rtf please
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Timotheos
i voted on your battle with ahhh...anything else pm me a link (dont post it in here)
1-0 uppin
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