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    Mixup

    Mix^
    Oblivion status as the Zone opens out
    Encircling a bad ass, Feelin his mouth
    Working on the mic with a Justified sound
    Stumblin on peace, Swervin out wide Beats
    Alluring all the right electrical cell-heat
    Pumping the life, connecting the streets
    from A. to those Beep, Beep, Beep s
    "Why hip hop? simply put hip hop is me"
    And so Pressly should have watched out...
    Cuz here comes the next kinG of trikle out
    Now He just gotta take the Mix-up, over and out
    BLAM.
    God Fuck what a mess up, them obits damn dumb,
    they must of switched bodys- my bro and a someone.

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    Last edited by Dios de Hip Hop; June 1st, 2005 at 05:20 AM

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    Oblivion status as the Zone opens out
    Encircling a bad ass, Feelin his mouth

    nice wording here.nice opener

    Working on the mic with a Justified sound
    Stumblin on peace, Swervin out wide Beats
    Alluring all the right electrical cell-heat
    Pumping the life, connecting the streets

    nice vocab an flow was nice .

    from A. to those Beep, Beep, Beep s
    "Why hip hop? simply put hip hop is me"
    And so Pressly should have watched out...
    Cuz here comes the next kinG of trikle out
    Now He just gotta take the Mix-up, over and out
    BLAM.
    God Fuck what a mess up, them obits damn dumb,
    they must of switched bodys- my bro and a someone.

    this bit was kinda confusing flow was real nice here.

    overall it was kinda nice vocab was really nice an you flow was realy good should make it longer thow bruv 16 lines is minimum. stay up thow.

    p.s check out my open mic "problems"

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    ^ He's right about the minimum line thing, but since this wasn't a bad drop I'll let it slide. And that's two links not one. Please.
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    yeh, i got bored with all the shitty peices.
    ill get on that, thank you for the slide...jungle gym next?

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    it was kind of short but it flowed well i liked it for it's simplicity
    but think it could have been a bit longer

    "Why hip hop? simply put hip hop is me"
    And so Pressly should have watched out...
    Cuz here comes the next kinG of trikle out
    Now He just gotta take the Mix-up, over and out
    BLAM.

    that's probably my fave part just cause how it came together but u should consider recording this and expanding it too would be a good song people can feel too

    6/10
    Last edited by Sandy; June 2nd, 2005 at 01:32 PM

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    arise.
    ty for the feedback.

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    Let 1 person slide, why not let all the Newer members then too?

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    Because the newer members are wack.

    You are right though.
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    I didnt mean to like re-verse your decision, But its not fair to the newer members because we let the older ones slide on things. It shouldnt be like that.

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