Industry vs. Lord Journal!st

[Mighty King Esca]

10lines
30min blind drops
No DICK RIDING
No hate/crew votes
No unexplained/copy n pasted votes.

Good luck.

[Mighty King Esca]

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[aSap iLL]

................This cat couldnt make it in the industry , if he read his name....
Its a shame you've been in rb for a month , and your looking for net fame...
Got the crow in ya sig, guess he's your idol..Or do you like gothic men..
But you wont come back to life... cus if you did id beat you again and again..
Your not worth my time.. living in chi-town..Guess kanye's your idol..
ROFL...My rhymes y'll make you insain.. i gaurenee after this you'll be suicidial...
Why'd you take out your merked list? cus your names going on mine..
cus ill click my nine..and have ya body sketched out by that white line..*
You think your the "ILL" evolution...but you seem you havent "changed"..
Cus the only "ill" you'd ever get is if you turned mentally deranged...

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When people die they outline your body with a white marker

[Mighty King Esca]

Lord Journal!st
Battle Record: Hidden.(at the time)

Used the force, but punches have no-impact like dent-proof car doors.
No remorse but Nerd when it become cool a be obsessed wit StarWars?
Fuckin fail to merk herbs n garbage, let alone proven vet’s and bosses.
S’why journalist writes like he got something to hide..his wins n losses.
Come played-out insane, droppin weak n every single sentence is lame.
Sayin I spit the wackest shit is true…each every time I mention ya name.
Journalist more like a crook-cop, ridin dick even found MY screen name.
Bitch don’t have a good-shot…. Even tho he beggin for votes on AIM.
Told ya bring the A-game. But son keep trying cuz ya aint found’er yet.
Galaxy far-far-away ya shits so out-there need be postin on the outernet.

[Kaotic Theory]

industry
your lines were kind of childish,i mean i liked the first line buyt the rest were elementary from my view,you need to upp ur creativity and vocabulary,the aim disees and personals are somewhat played also but nice attempt,your structure was decent...

jounalists
the 2 punches about someone being his idol was sorta annoying but ey i got over it,the punches were decent....you didnt need mush hear,your structure was okay also,u had maybe acouple good personals but not the best,your closer was hot i was liking that

jounalists get my vote,he came stronger

v/LJ

[(BLACK DIAMOND)]

MAN I HAVE TO SAY THAT THIS WAS ONE HELL OF A BATTLE BOTH BROUGHT THERE GAME HOWEVER ON HAD TO WIN AND ONE HAD TO LOOSE
I THOUGHT BOTH WERE GOOD AND FLOWED NICE SO THIS IS HOW I CHOOSE MY WINNER
REASONS
Industry
FLOW=8.5
STRUCTER=8.5
ORIGINALITY=8
STLYE=8
OVERALL=8.25(REAL GOOD)
Journal!st
FLOW=8.5
STRUCTER=8.5
ORIGINALITY=8.5
STYLE=8
OVERALL=8.35
V/Journal!st
NO HATE
JOURNALIST CAME SLIGHTLY HARDER AND STRONGER
RTF I ALWAYS DO

[Mighty King Esca]

................This cat couldnt make it in the industry , if he read his name....
Its a shame you've been in rb for a month , and your looking for net fame...
Got the crow in ya sig, guess he's your idol..Or do you like gothic men..
But you wont come back to life... cus if you did id beat you again and again..
Your not worth my time.. living in chi-town..Guess kanye's your idol..
ROFL...My rhymes y'll make you insain.. i gaurenee after this you'll be suicidial...
Why'd you take out your merked list? cus your names going on mine..
cus ill click my nine..and have ya body sketched out by that white line..*
You think your the "ILL" evolution...but you seem you havent "changed"..
Cus the only "ill" you'd ever get is if you turned mentally deranged...
.vs.
Used the force, but punches have no-impact like dent-proof car doors.
No remorse but Nerd when it become cool a be obsessed wit StarWars?
Fuckin fail to merk herbs n garbage, let alone proven vet’s and bosses.
S’why journalist writes like he got something to hide..his wins n losses.
Come played-out insane, droppin weak n every single sentence is lame.
Sayin I spit the wackest shit is true…each every time I mention ya name.
Journalist more like a crook-cop, ridin dick even found MY screen name.
Bitch don’t have a good-shot…. Even tho he beggin for votes on AIM.
Told ya bring the A-game. But son keep trying cuz ya aint found’er yet.
Galaxy far-far-away ya shits so out-there need be postin on the outernet.[/FONT][/B]

lol, there's no fucking credibility in Frontlines I swear to god. Can a mod just dq me from this, Journal can take the win and press it on his conscience. He dropped weak, I'm a little bit better than he is. We can both live with that. fuck it.

[Awdo Grafh.]

IP: 2029 97B3


industry
Gay lines kid, played and shit....Work on more mutlis, and harder punches.,..youll get there.

jounalists
Pretty nice verse, u can use multis in ya shit, but i was feeling it, Alot harder than industrys....so yea u get the win man.

jounalists get my vote,he came stronger

v/LJ
__________________

[Karma `Shootya]

^lol at class of '02

lord journalist
not feelin your shit. you put ROFL in your verse. I can't tell you how lame that is. your whole net fame line, isnt that what your doing? its kind of redundant. the wording terrible. i mean if you cleaned this up it might resemble something worth reading. crows mean gothic? you put a kanye set up and your punch has nothin to chicago, or kanye, or one of his songs? be like 'i'll shatter your jaw' or put one of his songs in. your last line was coo.

industry
i mean same shit as journalist in the sense that wording was sloppy. this line was sick tho.

Fuckin fail to merk herbs n garbage, let alone proven vet’s and bosses.
S’why journalist writes like he got something to hide..his wins n losses.

and i liked the begging line cuz he begged me to vote on AIM. i mean your verse was twenty, if not thirty times better then journalists. and you dont put a ! in your name. I really ashamed that Kost would vote so poorly.

v. industry

[Da Closes 2 GOD!]

REASONS
Industry
FLOW=7.5
STRUCTER=8
ORIGINALITY=8
STLYE=8
OVERALL=8 that shit was gasngsta 2 me
Journal!st
FLOW=9
STRUCTER=10 i need to work on mine
ORIGINALITY=8.5
STYLE=8
OVERALL=9
V/Journal!st
NO HATE
it was a real close battle
RTF I ALWAYS DO
MAN I HAVE TO SAY THAT THIS WAS ONE HELL OF A BATTLE BOTH BROUGHT THERE GAME HOWEVER ON HAD TO WIN AND ONE HAD TO LOOSE
I THOUGHT BOTH WERE GOOD AND FLOWED NICE SO THIS IS HOW I CHOOSE MY WINNER
REASONS
Industry
FLOW=8.5
STRUCTER=8.5
ORIGINALITY=8
STLYE=8
OVERALL=8.25(REAL GOOD)
Journal!st
FLOW=8.5
STRUCTER=8.5
ORIGINALITY=8.5
STYLE=8
OVERALL=8.35
V/Journal!st
NO HATE
RTF I ALWAYS DO


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=196703

[M-Steady]

Man If I Could Vote, The Dude Journalist Be It Fosho.....
No DR shit, his Flow Was Better And didn't Come As Played
Or As Forced As Industry.....
Vote: Journalist

[DaTrusHurtz]

Front Lines is wack as fuck... I shouldn't have to vote on battles to make sure the correct person wins, but fuck I"m going to.

Journalist - The beat him again and again thing made me chuckle for some reason. I don't really know why. The rest of your verse was pretty eh and played. No need to explain your stuff man. If you have to explain it like you did for that bar, it's prolly no good. Not a bad verse, but only okay.

Industry - I thought this was some of your better work, nice verse. The idea of the opener you used is a simple idea I've seen many times before but it was executed perfectly on him and was effective. The journalist line prolly could have been worded better with fewer words and more flow, but it was a nice concept. The outernet thing I thought was kinda corny. Rest was aight.

Overall Industry I feel came more personal and with harsher concepts and definately got this, just telling it like it is.

Vote - Industry

[DaTrusHurtz]

Journalist you already voted so don't worry about it and Industry I know you can't vote on it cause Marcus is in you crew, but please just drop some feedback on it anyway and say what you liked and didn't. Thanks

[Phanonymous]

journalist dog u got experience on the site.......thats what surprises me....no hate or nothin but u really need to step up ur game.....not so much vocab and lyric-wise....but ur flow is like idk....not really appealing at all.....i know when freestyling with other heads in person, that the way u have words land and how u time out ur punches is vital to gain the audiences liking.........im not talkin about structure and the way ur verse looks on the page.....fuck that that dont matter to me as much as the placement of the punch in ur lines.....even if it isnt ya know....nice as shit like lyrically.....it will sound a bit better if everyone of ur lines fits in time with the line before it.....kinda confusing but i think u understand......

anyway industry dog ur shit is always somewhat pretty nice......but u aint all that.....again no hatin....just honesty and fairness in my comments.....elevate ur flow, vocab usage, punchline placement.....i did like a few of ur lines tho.....semi-funny personals.....ur opener is what had me...when talking about personal punches....

v/industry--for focusing more on direct hits on his opponent.

[untold]

Vote - Journal

Your verse was nice and had nice punches in there. Nicely structured verse from both i felt and both flowed well. It was a close battle but in the end it jsut came down to who hit harder and i thought it was Journal.