10-12 Lines.
One hour due after check-in.
No recycling.
Let's go.
Typical
Kazz
10-12 Lines.
One hour due after check-in.
No recycling.
Let's go.
yo checking in
were is the poll...............
Checking in.
I thought the poll didn't go up till after the verses get put up?
If not then I fucked up then.
coming in [I]
lookin like he seen a "ghost" its the hype thats got him "shook"
this faggot thought he saw lauren and had to take another look,
he screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin',
its in the past, you need to realise he'll never be alive n kickin',
you forget your place, you faild in gfx, now u'll do the same agen,
fuck tryin,danny daudney aint worth the strain for my pen,
you couldn't stay ahead of me in gfx... in text never mind compete,
little "animals" are dirty, so ill have to sterilize ya "mouth" n' "feet"
you got it hard... you have to rob "cars", seems he hasnt got a choice,
n u a pot head? funny coz this faggot could never "roll" for "royce"
kool
So I chose to go toe to to with this youn'un
should I disperse the cursin' or give him the wal-mart version?
Fuck em I'll reimburse him with abuse
backhands make him flashback to his roots.
This sonic youth gets beguiled* hit with a Sonic Boom*.
Kazz has even volunteered to be your welcome wagon
I even made you a banner.
In invisible ink it says "you suck and I hope you get cancer."
The fruit in the basket is encamped with venomous critters
That will melt your skin get under then feast on your organs like vittles.
You deny that you're pussy, but even clothed I still see the cameltoe
Homo play your role man your gloryhole
and continue to suck slow.
Upping for votes.
i have to vote typical on this battle here, because his lines were more structurized also, he had more creative wordplay as well as lines against his opponent, was a pretty good flow it, and was pretty consistent, saw a few forced lines but overall good shit homie.
next dude, wasnt feeln ya verse, b/c for one, you didnt have a real rhyme scheme to your verse, nothing really stuck out to me, didnt see any harsh or direct punchlines towards your opponent, work on delivery and consistency with your lown lines, get creative homie, and dont use fillers get to your point and make everyone else see what your are trying to say. pz
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If i left feedback on your battles, check out my open battles, drop links and feedback, also dont forget to poll your votes. pz
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typical had more creative wordplay as well as lines against his opponent, he had a pretty good punchlines "he screamed n then silence, now ya hearin the sound of clickin',
its in the past, you need to realise he'll never be alive n kickin'"
yo i got this man
uppppppppppppp......
the vote
come on
vote unknown
home of the crazed
land of the libre
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Omen Rap
Anthem
i pledge allegiance to the pad and the pen to write my raps
and as it goes,i'll write my flows and don't care about wat happens
from the begining to the end
when i start with my pen
it's gon happen again
and again until i send word that i've mastered the pen
so until the day ends and the night falls on my eyes
i will continue to write rhymes so long as im still alive
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(vote or die bitch)
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(vote or die bitch)
yo think people for voting
keep it coming man
as u know i got him
typical enough said
typical won dat 4 better wordplay and punchez
i agree he had way better strcuture then that dude and he had way better punches going on but i say still elevate ya heardi have to vote typical on this battle here, because his lines were more structurized also, he had more creative wordplay as well as lines against his opponent, was a pretty good flow it, and was pretty consistent, saw a few forced lines but overall good shit homie.
next dude, wasnt feeln ya verse, b/c for one, you didnt have a real rhyme scheme to your verse, nothing really stuck out to me, didnt see any harsh or direct punchlines towards your opponent, work on delivery and consistency with your lown lines, get creative homie, and dont use fillers get to your point and make everyone else see what your are trying to say. pz
v/typical
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