Industry .vs. Marcus Aurelius

[Mighty King Esca]

10 lines
Blind drops due 45 min after both check ins. (check within a few hours max)
No dickriding
No biting/feeding
No recycled lines.
No crew/Hate votes
no Unexplained votes.

Good luck.

[Mighty King Esca]

Check-up

[..Vendetta..]

Check Check Nigga......................

[Mighty King Esca]

MA-Marcus Aurelius
MK-Mindz Kollide

Mindz Kollide a crew? or..

Just a trend MA’s whoring. Stay silent not spittin better suits y’all.
Cuz MK’s wack end of story. All agreed… Our feelings are mutual.
Bitch spits corny shit that dont work like ‘get-laid-fast’-statements.
This faggot has more filler-up in a verse, than lowprice gas-stations.
You need side-comentary on ya weak disses to help us understand..
So hire Peter-Pan then he can explain why ya punches…Neverland.
This kids lines are re-rapped gifts aint taken serious and unwanted.
S’why we all know this herbs verse is neither present..or a-counted
Got 57 varieties of wack,ya behind in rap playin ketchup like Heinz.
Poor-rhymes...Id give charity but only if ya had well..fair-lines.

*mutual/mute you all
*Well..fair-lines/ charity welfare-lines.

[..Vendetta..]

Chee Nigga

Only Time He 'Wrap' Good Is A 'Subway Sand witch'
Call Em' A 'Mermaid' Cuhh This Kid Is 'Half A Bitch'
Only Time He Got 'Real Beef' Is With A 'Hamburger'
Call Me 'KKK' When I Pop Up This 'Nigga A Scrambler'
I Call You 'G-unit' Cuh You Wont Go Far With 'The Game'
Lame Call, Cuhh Industries Is Played Like Your Name
I Left This Kid 'Laying Around' Just Call Em' A Circle
In One Bar I Had Em 'Shaking' Like A 'Jello Commercial'
You Aint No Vet, I Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins
Kid Your Style Is Played Like Rap Battles Ambience Skins

[Guyanese Solja]

indutryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[Jawn Raw]

Industery
whoa first battle ive seen from you and well the first 4 lines were weak if you woulda upped them a little more you might have got this it depends but anyway overall your punchlines were hitting good nice wordplay some decent vocab but your wordplay really stood out there and i was feeling that it was just them 4 or so lines that didnt work so you lose my vote. but keep workin on that cause you had some very good wordplays n shit.

Marcus
hmm a different aspect you came from here your flow was very good decent vocabulary ya stucture was pretty good and i was feeling ya punchlines they were hitting a little but more harder the burger line is played but your other lines fitted it out so it was overall a very good verse from you and i was really feeling it. keep battling your getting better and better everytime man.

v/ Marcus Aurelius

[KoKaiN]

Just a trend MA’s whoring. Stay silent not spittin better suits y’all.
Cuz MK’s wack end of story. All agreed… Our feelings are mutual.
meh, not a good start
Bitch spits corny shit that dont work like ‘get-laid-fast’-statements.
This faggot has more filler-up in a verse, than lowprice gas-stations.
haha coo
You need side-comentary on ya weak disses to help us understand..
So hire Peter-Pan then he can explain why ya punches…Neverland.
omg played, peter pan lines LOL, i remember when i used one when i first came here in JAN 05, copt the mean shit for it
This kids lines are re-rapped gifts aint taken serious and unwanted.
S’why we all know this herbs verse is neither present..or a-counted
decent
Got 57 varieties of wack,ya behind in rap playin ketchup like Heinz.
Poor-rhymes...Id give charity but only if ya had well..fair-lines.
lol

Only Time He 'Wrap' Good Is A 'Subway Sand witch'
Call Em' A 'Mermaid' Cuhh This Kid Is 'Half A Bitch'
meh nah
Only Time He Got 'Real Beef' Is With A 'Hamburger'
Call Me 'KKK' When I Pop Up This 'Nigga A Scrambler'
nah
I Call You 'G-unit' Cuh You Wont Go Far With 'The Game'
Lame Call, Cuhh Industries Is Played Like Your Name
nice
I Left This Kid 'Laying Around' Just Call Em' A Circle
In One Bar I Had Em 'Shaking' Like A 'Jello Commercial'
haha coo
You Aint No Vet, I Got More Referrals Then You Got Wins
Kid Your Style Is Played Like Rap Battles Ambience Skins
ahaha

pretty close battle for a moment there, i thought i was gonna be giving it to indust, but M.A u came back with your last 3 barz, good shit..
indust, u couldve had this man, u just were to un-consistant, it was like meh bar, good bar, meh bar, good bar.. ya feel..
M.A u lucky man..

vote: M.A

[Lay Doubt.]

eh, i'm not gonna break this down too much.

Industry used a "Neverland" punch.. that's sooooooo played.

Marcus, fix your style man.. use set ups relevant to your punches instead of trying to drop a punch in every line.. guess your mermaid / half bitch line got it for you. the laying around / circle line had some potential.. but you had it as your set up.

v/ Marcus Aurelius

less played and harder.

[Untold.]

Hmm...

Indstry: Nice lines man. Good concepts and some pretty good punches. You had good structure and some pretty nice word play. At times I was feeling it and at other times, I just thought some of the verses were play'd.

MA: Some nice shit as well. I belive you had more consistancy and harder punches. I have seen better from you. Good structure and well, alot of the same that I said for him. Your verse didn't seem as play'd or wack and was jut better.

Vote/ MA

[DaTrusHurtz]

Industry - Probably one of the best verses I've seen from you. Everything was decent. Problem is, that's what it was... decent. Nothing really stood out as a lot of the concepts you had I've seen before and didn't really stand out. I mean you aren't the first to think of the neverland thing haha. Good verse, but you can still elevate more.

MA - You had some weak shit to start out and it looked like Industry was gonna merk you, but you finished strong. Unfortunately not strong enough as saying you'll leave him shaking like a jello commercial is creative, but not that harsh. The closer was good, but that's about it.

Close one, but I disagree with y'all, I think Industry got this

Vote - Industry

[Siar]

am i blind why are so many people votin for MA get off the niggas dick industry you gotem nigga

[rile1]

ok Marcuz u came hella weak and ur shit looked like it was copied and pasted barely any good punches at all, so ima go with Industry cuz he had better punches, flow, and all-around better stuff, Marcus u need to elevate dude

[rile1]

oh and please RTF!! Ive been waiting on tha come get it one for like 3 days dude actually 4 just please RTF!

[rile1]

u idiots u guys made it 420 votes now I cant vote but can u still RTF??