Industry vs. Dirty Prose

[Mighty King Esca]

10lines
1 hour blind drops after checks
no biting/feeding
no dickriding
no Crew votes/Hate votes.
NO UNEXPLAINED VOTING(copy/pastin bullshit)

Good luck.

[Mighty King Esca]

Checkin-up

[Dirty Prose]

In....

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[Dirty Prose]

RB Went down......

Ya gettin thrown out like deportee's, i skip past you with ease
From the looks of your verses, i'd say your in the wrong industry.
dam kid your no-one, i see he scraped wins from Noobs,
I know you only young, But your already yesterdays news.
if you ever spit first on the mic, they'll call you mr. whackman
Put so many uneeded dots in ya verses, Wheres PacMan?
Face it, your dumb as fuck. and fat as hell part'na
I'll sugar coat the facts, in hope you'll get smarter
I aim to kill, and trust me kid, in fights i never miss the spot
to be honest your not really a hasbeen, more a never-was.

[Mighty King Esca]

Definition:*
2 Entries found for prose n.

Pronunciation Key (prz)

1. To speak or write in a dull, tiresome style.
2. Ordinary speech or writing, without metrical structure.

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Merk this herb-crop on the spot. No improvement. Ya elevatin miserably.
You drop nothing but slop, Id say you livin up to your name.. Literally.*
{NE 1 > you} this simple mathmatical equation states the true fact.
…and if ya wanna get technical.. {TNL= The ‘Square-root’…of Wack}
Rappin bout’ straight-up lies and exaggerations, Its no secret this kid-blows.
Nothin but textaspirations of hot-air, so his shit just foggin up my windows
You’z a net hoe! Not even good at actin gangsta, phony thug sportin a ‘e-Fro’
Spit-warm? Naw this Bitch-cold. I Tried readin ya piece but my screen froze!
Dirty aint no text-rebel, Incapable to ‘produce’, faggot you’re sterile.
You really are on The Next Level-…beyond the bottom of the barrel.


(sigh) murdered-it'

[IllestFreestyler]

holy shit...hot battle and very close battle....really tough to judge

Industry- good lines here and there......sketchy....need to mimprovement yo verse by making it flow throughout....yo vocab was decent...yo opener was tight but yo ender needs improvement.....i give yo verse a 8/10

Prose- that was a sick verse....yo came good and you came hard...yo vocab was better and yo opener and ender were both tight.....i give yo verse an 8.5/10

Vote= goes to Prose for the facts that i stated above and for more punchlines

[IllestFreestyler]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...lestFreestyler

Return the favor man please i need to close this battle up.....thanks man...vote honestly if u think i lost then vote against me...i dont want wins that i dont deserve

[Caesar Augustus]

well truth is I hate judging battles like these cause they so damn close to call, but hey

heres how I see it:
Ya gettin thrown out like deportee's, i skip past you with ease
From the looks of your verses, i'd say your in the wrong industry.
dam kid your no-one, i see he scraped wins from Noobs,
I know you only young, But your already yesterdays news.
if you ever spit first on the mic, they'll call you mr. whackman
Put so many uneeded dots in ya verses, Wheres PacMan?
Face it, your dumb as fuck. and fat as hell part'na
I'll sugar coat the facts, in hope you'll get smarter
I aim to kill, and trust me kid, in fights i never miss the spot
to be honest your not really a hasbeen, more a never-was.


I thought this was a good verse to be honest u had a nice structure and consistantly through some decent punches ur structure was good but when I read it i felt ur flow kinda got slowed up at the points in bold I just thought those words seem a little forced or didn't really rhyme great but like i said a better then average verse


Pronunciation Key (prz)

1. To speak or write in a dull, tiresome style.
2. Ordinary speech or writing, without metrical structure.
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Merk this herb-crop on the spot. No improvement. Ya elevatin miserably.
You drop nothing but slop, Id say you livin up to your name.. Literally.*
{NE 1 > you} this simple mathmatical equation states the true fact.
…and if ya wanna get technical.. {TNL= The ‘Square-root’…of Wack}
Rappin bout’ straight-up lies and exaggerations, Its no secret this kid-blows.
Nothin but textaspirations of hot-air, so his shit just foggin up my windows
You’z a net hoe! Not even good at actin gangsta, phony thug sportin a ‘e-Fro’
Spit-warm? Naw this Bitch-cold. I Tried readin ya piece but my screen froze!
Dirty aint no text-rebel, Incapable to ‘produce’, faggot you’re sterile.
You really are on The Next Level-…beyond the bottom of the barrel.

yo i think u did a good job too i liked the definiton u started with explain alot of ya verse u had good punches and good structure as well I really didn't feel u got caught up at any point but the last 2 lines another nice verse that made this battle hot



when it comes down to it both verses were good and it was close so after looking closly at the battle to industry for havin better personals i mean he mentioned his crew the definition of his name and just seem to dig deeper into Prose
V/industry

[Mighty King Esca]

Upping for votes. 1st time.

[KoKaiN]

Ya gettin thrown out like deportee's, i skip past you with ease
From the looks of your verses, i'd say your in the wrong industry.
haha coo start
dam kid your no-one, i see he scraped wins from Noobs,
I know you only young, But your already yesterdays news.
meh ight, but not hard
if you ever spit first on the mic, they'll call you mr. whackman
Put so many uneeded dots in ya verses, Wheres PacMan?
meh okish
Face it, your dumb as fuck. and fat as hell part'na
I'll sugar coat the facts, in hope you'll get smarter
aint feelin it
I aim to kill, and trust me kid, in fights i never miss the spot
to be honest your not really a hasbeen, more a never-was.
haha coo closer

Merk this herb-crop on the spot. No improvement. Ya elevatin miserably.
You drop nothing but slop, Id say you livin up to your name.. Literally.*
okish open, coudlve been harder
{NE 1 > you} this simple mathmatical equation states the true fact.
…and if ya wanna get technical.. {TNL= The ‘Square-root’…of Wack}
haha i like
Rappin bout’ straight-up lies and exaggerations, Its no secret this kid-blows.
Nothin but textaspirations of hot-air, so his shit just foggin up my windows
no real punch to it
You’z a net hoe! Not even good at actin gangsta, phony thug sportin a ‘e-Fro’
Spit-warm? Naw this Bitch-cold. I Tried readin ya piece but my screen froze!
no
Dirty aint no text-rebel, Incapable to ‘produce’, faggot you’re sterile.
You really are on The Next Level-…beyond the bottom of the barrel.
coo close

This battle wasent that good really, kinda close but this battle went to prose, simply for his opener and closer, porpz on em.. keep up niggaz

vote: prose

[DaTrusHurtz]

Dirty Prose - The opener you had was a pretty simple concept, but a nice nameplay and a good punch. The pacman shit I was definately feeling even though he doesn't really have unneeded dots in his verse lol. I would have used that on someone like me who uses lots of dots. The final two bars were good two. Overall, you didn't have any really creative wordplay, but you had solid punches, a good verse.

Industry - You also opened strong with a simple nameplay that was nice. Your second bar wasn't feeling much.. like too forced it seemed. The screen froze line was aight, not bad not great. The closer was a simple personal, good job with that. The windows line I didn't like though. Nice wordplay, but not a hard punch.

Overall - Very tough battle to vote on, you both came decent and you both have a similar style of using personals, not much wordplay really, and are very direct with the punches, but someone's gotta win. After reading them both a few times, I just think Dirty Prose's punches were a little more direct and harsher so he takes this.

Vote - Dirty Prose

Return the favor, thx

[Taeisbeast.]

DP-Meh. Verse could of been a whole lot better. Need to work on ya structure, which messed up the flow. Nice punches and personal attempts. Good job on that. Nice flow at times, but could been better. Overall it was decent.

Industry-Sigh. Not bad i guess, but i thought i was reading the dictionary for a moment. lol. Not bad, aight punches and flow was ok. Need to work on ya structure as well. Punches and the flow was so-so, but went down hill at times. Your rhymes didnt come hard as they should of came. Decent verse.

Overall: Draw

Reason: Both in my eyes came the same. In some cases, DP had nice punches and Inds, had some as well. Both didnt come equally as hard as one another should have. Structure needs to be worked on, which will increase the flow and lead to direct punches. Keep it up. Good job. 1

[Dirty Prose]

Ta for votes.........


Uppers.................

[Urban Warrior]

my vote goes to industry... i was jus feelin his rhymes more... both good tho... and like i sed industry had da rite verse at da rite time..... return da fava... Battle of da beef urban warrior vs 13th disciple

[Vaskez]

Ya gettin thrown out like deportee's, i skip past you with ease
From the looks of your verses, i'd say your in the wrong industry.
--not bad
dam kid your no-one, i see he scraped wins from Noobs,
I know you only young, But your already yesterdays news.
--ok
if you ever spit first on the mic, they'll call you mr. whackman
Put so many uneeded dots in ya verses, Wheres PacMan?
--lol
Face it, your dumb as fuck. and fat as hell part'na
I'll sugar coat the facts, in hope you'll get smarter
--not bad
I aim to kill, and trust me kid, in fights i never miss the spot
to be honest your not really a hasbeen, more a never-was.
--hehe, not bad

vs.


Merk this herb-crop on the spot. No improvement. Ya elevatin miserably.
You drop nothing but slop, Id say you livin up to your name.. Literally.*
--heh, ok
{NE 1 > you} this simple mathmatical equation states the true fact.
…and if ya wanna get technical.. {TNL= The ‘Square-root’…of Wack}
--not bad
Rappin bout’ straight-up lies and exaggerations, Its no secret this kid-blows.
Nothin but textaspirations of hot-air, so his shit just foggin up my windows
--not bad
You’z a net hoe! Not even good at actin gangsta, phony thug sportin a ‘e-Fro’
Spit-warm? Naw this Bitch-cold. I Tried readin ya piece but my screen froze!
--1st line good, 2nd not really feelin it
Dirty aint no text-rebel, Incapable to ‘produce’, faggot you’re sterile.
You really are on The Next Level-…beyond the bottom of the barrel.
--not bad

very close battle, but based on the above, I reckon prose just edged it