10-14 lines
30 mins after check
check in b4 8pm EST
blind spit
no d/r crew hate ect.
10-14 lines
30 mins after check
check in b4 8pm EST
blind spit
no d/r crew hate ect.
cheky doo
check, 30 mins, go................................
ill hit this b ack wit feed afta you guys battle, g00d luck yo???!?!?!?!
Legendary Song - Winter Snow
i think ur unconcievable, unbeilivable lyricaly deletable//
your stupid and dopey ur broke so bad ur fukin unrepairable//
ur useless rhymes suck so bad i find better junk in purses//
ur verses diseased more ppl than ne plagues or curses//
u think ur the best but this verse put u to the test//
dawg u aint gonna get a passing grade ur gonna fail like da rest//
Yo this dude thinks hes hot hes jsut a gabwatley*//
i dont even know y this dude accepted to battle me//
ur a big doofball u make my stomach lurch ur more retarted than Simon Burch**//
god dawg i was reading ya rap sounded like crap seein that shit made me urch//
ur stoopid ur life aint worth shit u shud kick it with the FAB 15***//
ur a fukin chump ur rhymes are so bad u get gangbanged by queen****//
*gabwatley a cocksucker, thief, asshole
**Simon Burch is a retarted boy in a movie he plays baby jesus and grabs som chiks tits
***FAB 15 repulsive whores from massapequa, who barely graduated from high skool. They are envied by none and hated by all. There is not one generation who looks up to them.Their knowledge of partying is the extent of 15 of them splitting one bottle of wine, than faking drunk and participating in lesbian encounters
****a gay rock band gay is in actualy gay
Hehe, Queen isn't gay, only the lead singer (Freddy Mercury) was. Anyway, my verse:
Let's get this poppin, I'm more shockin when I'm rockin
Than droppin a whole crate of bananas on Munky's coffin
Fool I'm as cool as ice, while you're more like Kellogg's Frosties*
Frail, tryina be sweet, and ya can't find your flow like lost keys
Your verse'd even get devoured** by kids like toasties
Wanna buy my rhymes? They cost G's and I'm chargin Munky the most fees
Ho please, get off my dick before your puss bleeds
I display fine steez, while Munky just climbs trees
To try and elevate, but homie, keep tryin' please
My lyrics are heavenly but sting like divine bees
I hollered, "Get ya lyrical gat, hurry up and shoot-that-thang"
But Munky just stood there like a dumb orangutang
My lyrics came back to haunt ya like a boomerang
And now I'm "Celebratin" the win like Kool and the Gang***
*Frosties are a crunchy, sugary breakfast cereal made by Kelloggs, in case anyone didn't know, hehe
**expression: devoured, eaten, i.e. even kids would eat his verse = write a comeback that destroys it
***Kool and the Gang had an album called Celebrate
1 min dawg
damn dawg wtf 30 mins ur dqed
what are you on about? I posted my verse already!.
lol oops im SILLY!!!
Both go read stuff in LLL. And learn from it.
V/Munky, only because he dissed the other guy, simple as it was. Get your flow/structure right Munky, people READ this, they cant hear YOUR flow. There's usualy a basic way most everyone reads battles so make it that way. Its about what the voters think.
Vazkes, you tried to be creative, but failed and didnt diss him. Like ive said to others, pretend your pissed at him and make him cry by dissin him. But make it original/complex/witty/etc.
Both elevate
nice verse good luck to ya!!!
Blitz, thanks for the feedback, but don't patronise us. I know how to battle, check out the one against double-RR in my sig, if you don't believe me. I just wanted to try something different, just for a laugh. I did attack him, just not always directly and all the plays on the monkey concepts were supposed to be the personal touches, but I guess you didn't pick up on that. Yeah thanks Munky, good luck to you too.
Hmm, using up all my bumps in one go, but never mind. Also, I've noticed that a lot of people on here think they're giving sagely advice when they say "elevate". LOL that's like saying "get better". No, duh! We don't wanna get better, and we would NEVER have thought of trying to get better, if you didn't tell us, Einstein.LOL. If I ever leave advice along the lines of "elevate" and nothing else, please ban me
Munky i like his vocabulary and he dissed his opponet more than the other cat
ELEVATE
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