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Due Sunday May 1st before midnight eastern time
Street_Play
Jem.
10-14 lines
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Due Sunday May 1st before midnight eastern time
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Pz.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=189092
hit this battle up its hot!
yo this should be good...come on n spit
Jem can play street so dont think ima struggle with you G..
looks like a 5-1 victory for me, why?
... you already got one vote from that groupie ^^..
40-6 wow im impressed if thats realy your battle rate..?
6-40 there we go typo fixed now the scores straight..
your to pussy to check and just a no show fag..
please sign hear _________ to show,
.. you conceed it aint no autograph....
Apo's just no hopers rejected by other crews..
see your a boi on the road to success..
so ill put it in your terms, just follow Blues Clues..
i figured out your bio and its pretty much your a filler..
your worthless without an occupation..
its times like this i think King Herad had the right idea..
was gona go 10 but may aswell go that extra step..
and ask you Street_play,
..am i realy that big of a Threat..?
Pz.
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l.J.L.... Just another league of jealous losers, tryin to reign supreme
their thought of victory's, over whelming shame is a tarnish'd dream
jem's r prized jewels however this jem's no longer special..lost significance
fake vet posin a threat?? nah between u n herbs i fail to see the difference
stoop to ur level of wackness, play follow the leader, an study ur movements
after spittin ur verse feed was dropped with an endless list of improvements
you try too hard to succeed son therefore you let ur stupidity shine through
even your crew doubts you. son why? cus ur verse is wack n it defines you
the fantasy world in which you live has your whole god damn mind twisted.
child pornography... N molestation, is the only time you ever spittin explict.
its time to wake up son stop dreamin im playin judge, objection's over ruled
Your old shool?? nah dawg your not old school, you just been old schooled.
pz. out
Jem can play street so dont think ima struggle with you G..
looks like a 5-1 victory for me, why?
... you already got one vote from that groupie ^^..
40-6 wow im impressed if thats realy your battle rate..?
6-40 there we go typo fixed now the scores straight..
your to pussy to check and just a no show fag..
please sign hear _________ to show,
.. you conceed it aint no autograph....
Apo's just no hopers rejected by other crews..
see your a boi on the road to success..
so ill put it in your terms, just follow Blues Clues..
i figured out your bio and its pretty much your a filler..
your worthless without an occupation..
its times like this i think King Herad had the right idea..
was gona go 10 but may aswell go that extra step..
and ask you Street_play,
..am i realy that big of a Threat..?
^^Blah, This was a weak verse, Wasnt really feelin it.
vs.
l.J.L.... Just another league of jealous losers, tryin to reign supreme
their thought of victory's, over whelming shame is a tarnish'd dream
jem's r prized jewels however this jem's no longer special..lost significance
fake vet posin a threat?? nah between u n herbs i fail to see the difference
stoop to ur level of wackness, play follow the leader, an study ur movements
after spittin ur verse feed was dropped with an endless list of improvements
you try too hard to succeed son therefore you let ur stupidity shine through
even your crew doubts you. son why? cus ur verse is wack n it defines you
the fantasy world in which you live has your whole god damn mind twisted.
child pornography... N molestation, is the only time you ever spittin explict.
its time to wake up son stop dreamin im playin judge, objection's over ruled
Your old shool?? nah dawg your not old school, you just been old schooled.
^^Iight verse, Nothin special, You elevatin a bite, Wich si good. Alot you can still work on tho. Overall decent verse if anything.
V/Sp
uppin
the second verse was lyrically better, more complexity to it but i thought that the jem line was a pretty weak personal, it was well structured however the lines were long, it didnt affect the flow to badly, the first verse wasn't lyrically spot on but there were some nice concepts, overruled sadly by the last line of the second verse...damn that was nice..return the favour please and vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=189321
Def Poets
uppin
uppin leave links
V/ SP... Niether of you are all tha special... Practice some and get your game up...
uppin 4....com'n yall stop sleepin on this shit...
street took this for sure, he came alot harder with personals, and punches........
he was alot cleaner on concept..........
good battle............ v/street
Legendary Song - Winter Snow
last up...
aight streetplay had much better lines,his flow was off and his structure was a little, too
Jem had some pretty weak lines and a couple didnt even rhyme, however better flow
overall, v/ streetplay ( if i could )
rtf HONESTLY in a battle in my sig plz
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