RB had gon down so i kouldnt set it up until now..
aight:
>10 lines
>check-in right away
>verses due in 30 minutes
>blind spit
>house rules
g/l and this is my check-in
3x
lyrically_insane
RB had gon down so i kouldnt set it up until now..
aight:
>10 lines
>check-in right away
>verses due in 30 minutes
>blind spit
>house rules
g/l and this is my check-in
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check but could it be an hour
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him beatin me now thats a lost cause/
people standin for you but you aint gettin applause/
20-0 now that shits gottts end /
its prolly cause he only battlein freinds/
his elevations hit its peak it on a descend/
you think you tight now this fool playin pretend/
hes just pissed cause he cant comprehend/
i was supposed to win wasnt that the intend/
send you home packin cause this is over/
run this bitch over like i was in a land rover/
ya i know this verse was gay i just wanted it done
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Ya blow harder than hoes, sorry bro but that’s just tha way it goes
Kuz if you showed yo true kolors, then well be blind by tha rainbow
You cant blaze! Your whole krew left you but you still claim ‘A.K’s’?
...14 and 14, Kinda weird how your loss colum is a replica of yo age
......Make you feel blue, me beating you twice is 100 percent true
Wack ass foo, 'x' marks tha spot but not even pirates is diggin you
I aint here to play around buster Im just here to make you suffer
.......You lil weak ass twig, my media player has way more 'buffer'
You HAD a weak ass krew and now you tryin to diss Lost Cause.?
Battle hadn't even started and already you said you can use a loss
...you said an hour!.....WTf....w/e i had to quikly type this...
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im suprised this is gettin slept on uppin#1
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1 really good fukin battle both was mad close i cant really tleell
"The writer is the engineer of the human soul."
uppin come on people
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Weak shit....damn....aight
3x- Basically, ya verse was garbarge. Came weak as shit. U need some elevation bad man, or something. Flow was aight, the structure was horrible to. Elevate man...do something
Insane-[b]Aight verse, weak too though, Nice structure, decent punches and wordplay was aight. Good personals and flow was pretty good. Verse was aight, not ya best at that.[b]
Overall:Insane
Reason: One sided battle like usual. Insane punches came a lot harder towards 3, but 3 didnt do shit anyway. Basic battle, but could of been a whole lot better. Keep it comin
3x - Well you were right about one thing... that verse definately was gay. If you're 20-14 and battled that much, don't you know not to use slashes and not be so simplistic. A lot of your shit like running him over with a land rover was kinda gay and completely ineffective. I don't know if this is how you usually write, but work on coming with more direct and witty punches.
Lyrically - The rainbow and x marks the spot lines were aight concepts but I've seen them before. The age thing was kinda eh. The closer was a nice twist to an otherwise not that great concept. Overall, not a great verse, but you prolly didn't try that hard seeing your opponent. You had concepts and set them up to hit which is more than he can say so you take this.
Vote - Lyrically
Please hit the sig, thx
Also, Lyrically...20-0? I want to try to give you that first loss soon... let me know if you're down
thanks for the votes ill hit those up lata
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I think insane won this straight out with better punches, 3x just sucks, vinsane
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3x, your verse wasnt that good man, your punches missed alot and your structure was terrible. Elevation kid.
Lyrical-Not your best at all but enough to destroy him. Some of your bars made me laugh, again good structure and personals. Another win under your belt for sure.
V/Lyrical...............oh and here man Mic vs. Black Stylz
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3x - Well you were right about one thing... that verse definately was gay. If you're 20-14 and battled that much, don't you know not to use slashes and not be so simplistic. A lot of your shit like running him over with a land rover was kinda gay and completely ineffective. I don't know if this is how you usually write, but work on coming with more direct and witty punches.
Lyrically - The rainbow and x marks the spot lines were aight concepts but I've seen them before. The age thing was kinda eh. The closer was a nice twist to an otherwise not that great concept. Overall, not a great verse, but you prolly didn't try that hard seeing your opponent. You had concepts and set them up to hit which is more than he can say so you take this.
Vote - Lyrically
This battle was weak!
Insane had a overal WAY WAY WAY better verse, 3x your verse was just garbage! insane took this with better punches, personals, structure, flow, EVERYTHING was better on his end
v-Insane
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