Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
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[only those with a battle this week]
Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
check, full 20(10each)
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=188503
*more coming when available*
Last edited by Slowhands; April 29th, 2005 at 12:31 AM Reason: links
Last edited by Telekinetic; May 1st, 2005 at 04:01 PM
Last edited by L.I.; May 1st, 2005 at 09:17 PM
Telekinetic
Ahh yes, the "I wanna battle a vet" kid, & mend'll drop the ball
cause out of the 600 threads you made, you fuckin lost to all
pick a spot and fall, cuz before this match i never heard of ya
wait, yes i did, when you bit concepts from Mystery~Murdera
merkin ya, its no sweat, and please guy put down the pencil
cause for a kid whos half kinetic, you still have NO potential
I'm a skeptic to this witch crafter, didnt mean to doubt ya nate
but i'm a beleiver now..
as you physically move yourself down the ranks
L.I.
is this a bye week? w/ 2 generic shits that ride the shelf
theres Telekinetics, then this fuck that cant define himself
its ok Gabe, we know your a geek but no need for despair
...cause technically, LI is still one line from being a square
i think hes scared, this rageless fag needs to face the facts
that when he took rap serious. . . . .it didnt take him back
your soundpage is wak, stick with text, its not hard to tell
that your either retarded or just goddamn retarded as hell
Both
I was actually scared of this battle
only cause im a homophobic
and thought about your chances at this vet
. . . . .and how you both'll blow it
so thanks for showin....
only an intrest in what i use to pee
so yea, you fuckin suck
and should start a thread about gettin back the junior league
Last edited by Slowhands; April 28th, 2005 at 10:02 AM
Amend
Last week my verse was shit, you said it when you voted
Them lines took 20 minutes... while you got fewer quoted
When it comes to headlines this kids trash won’t faze me
I’m like the Sunday edition... I’ll beat that bitch ass daily
Always been a weak fuck but I guess this sperm evolved
Your the biggest dick on the site... no literal terms at all
Truly OLD school with personals, still I’ll own a contender
While you drop shit about me that even I won’t remember
You cant take the beating block head, is that understood?
My punches are superstitious, so knock on fucking wood!
L.I.
Kid your a rookie fuck... still on some special ed shit
&wouldn’t know how a procreate watching sex ed bitch
Assault& battery’s past but I’ll still assault ya battered ass
Like in the periodic table... L.I. just makes the battery last
Kid your skill is in question... no L.I. who or L.I. what
But if I was you... I wouldn’t show what fuckin L.I. got
Here I’ll help you dude, like rehab... just give it up
Do it for yourself... we’ll even pretended to give a fuck
Amend sucks but even he’ll take ya verse an mug it
I got one good line left& you’ll swing at the end of it
AMEND
AM aint got shit on me, kicked to the curb dude
Just to make END's meet......the heel of my shoe
This pussy aint winnin, mood swings leave ya wit no hope
I flip on him like PMS........while he only PM'S fo' votes
Pure ass dog, you a bitch type, known as a mistress
& when ya rhymes got ya in deep shit
................................we couldnt tell the difference
U got no shot at making it, face it, ya sentenced
I'll give yah .500 reasons to quit rap
. starting with yah next win percentage
Quit coppin peeps lines, get off my shit and think g
Told the kid bite me, and he said 'aight, link me'
Tele
This kids a bitch, any girl could whoop his ass and son em
I aint talkin wake-ups when "Tel falls at the crack of Dawn"
You were done after your first post, over time all u do is get fake
Cuz this Rook went straight at ya Chess right after the check, mate
You cant be beat in battles huh? Kinetic'll neva retire
He only fit to be a ghost....writer that never gets hired
Its been a fun merkin yo, playoffs are here, its shine time
& now hes got the hot hand...after writing down my lines
Wackness rubs off on kids yo, so avoid Tel at all costs
Its straight contagious, see, even yah custom title walked off
L.I., ya first verse, you had alotta played shit, but your verse against Tele was better. Still, out of all three of the verses here, you need to work on ya shit the most. Amend came pretty good here, with some nice personals and then some funny punchlines. Liked that square line, made me laugh. Tele's verses were both pretty good two, but neither of you had enough to outshine Amend here. I liked ya shit Tele, but Amends shit hit harder, and closer to home. Words of advice. L.I. kick any lines about PMing for votes, or AIMing for votes...its been done to death, i dont even think with a fresh flip, it would be that appealing, also, kick lines referring to someone as shit, and for the most part, custom title lines, unless its just an amazing concept. And uh, Tele and Amend, you guys are doing ya thing, but stay coming harder. V/Amend.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
AMEND
I'm a skeptic to this witch crafter, didnt mean to doubt ya nate
but i'm a beleiver now..
as you physically move yourself down the ranks
its ok Gabe, we know your a geek but no need for despair
...cause technically, LI is still one line from being a square
vs
Tele
When it comes to headlines this kids trash won’t faze me
I’m like the Sunday edition... I’ll beat that bitch ass daily
Truly OLD school with personals, still I’ll own a contender
While you drop shit about me that even I won’t remember
Kid your skill is in question... no L.I. who or L.I. what
But if I was you... I wouldn’t show what fuckin L.I. got
vs
L.I.
U got no shot at making it, face it, ya sentenced
I'll give yah .500 reasons to quit rap
. starting with yah next win percentage
Quit coppin peeps lines, get off my shit and think g
Told the kid bite me, and he said 'aight, link me'
I got Telekinetic winnin this, edged it....
v/Tele
merkin ya, its no sweat, and please guy put down the pencil
cause for a kid whos half kinetic, you still have NO potential
and it's over.
v. Amend
I'd say second is Tele by a bit, for that nice "L I got" line... really gotta work on your wording though, especially like that assault and battery line could have been nice, but you really fucked it up.
Last Word
I must last... word
Votes...
amend:
its ok Gabe, we know your a geek but no need for despair
...cause technically, LI is still one line from being a square
tele:
Always been a weak fuck but I guess this sperm evolved
Your the biggest dick on the site... no literal terms at all
You cant take the beating block head, is that understood?
My punches are superstitious, so knock on fucking wood!
LI:
You were done after your first post, over time all u do is get fake
Cuz this Rook went straight at ya Chess right after the check, mate
vTele
Up...
It's 2-2
No it's 2-2-0
^Didn't want to make you feel bad.lol
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