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    Picture this

    hook:
    Can you picture me-
    hustlin rock, on my block, lookin out for the cops
    Can you picture me-
    on the loose, with that loaded duece duece, ready to shoot
    Can you picture me-
    rollin up blunts, right hand on the pump, nigga ready to dump
    Can you picture me-
    ecstasy stacks, coke and crack, meth ice, oxy and smack

    baby, can you picture this? ill leave yo nigga dead/
    niggas call me ecstasy, i put a whole in ya nigga head/
    i been runnin, runnin, i could catch the road runner/
    diamonds all in my watch piece, wit the gold unda/ (werrd)
    now this is what i do to you, put holes up in ya white tee/
    have you leakin liek a bitch, red platters on your nikes/
    im tellin you, fa real my niggas is dicks man/
    we run up on you rob ya pockets, take ya cash and steal ya discman/
    its all hood, america trys to make you picture this/
    mcdonalds hamburgaler was nuttin but a stick up kidd/
    we handle shit so street, puncture, give you a slow leak/
    got so much white behind me be liek mary bo- peep/
    my moms kicked me out, but i was payin her rent/
    now she beg me to come back id rather go to the pen/
    i never had a relationship, i jus fuck a bitch and dip/
    and im still gangsta, i aint even blood or crip/

    (hook)

    50 birds'll make ya rich, aint no doubt about it/
    but niggas'll kill you for that weight, they wont allow it/
    you cud be comin out ya buildin in the dim of night/
    niggas'll ride up on a bike, shoot, take ya life/
    i seen it happen, right in fornt my two eyes/
    thats why i stash under my bed, 1 glock and 2 nines/
    i got more ice then a freezer, but i still keep a heater/
    keep poppin off ya mouth, you be leak a liter/
    more crack then a pavement, you know how it goes/
    2 project apartment rooms, fileld with hoes/
    can you picture how im livin, iced out, range rover/
    when the block hot its nuttin we jsu gotta lay lower/
    round here lil toddler niggas keep 'way from the glass/
    jsu case shots;ll break the window when a nigga get blast/
    you aint hard and thats fa rell ,if you cant picture my struggle/
    and you aint no hustla like me if you cant turn ya product to double/ (ahA)

    hookX 2


    picture this dawgy... rock to the money sign.. still bangin em.. project hallways, 3rd street, 14th.. west hempstead, babylon, elmont queens.. rosedale nigga.. east new york to my blood niggas my crip niggas.. keep doin yo thang... icture this

    *gunshot*

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    nice verse kid i was really diggin tha concept... even tho a lot people write shit like that.... you kept a nigga interested to say the least.... but keep at it!

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    good looks son.. still uppin

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    dont eb sleepin

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    Nice verse Emotion Was Nice...Flow soemtimes was off but the concept was good overall nice verse!

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    You need to drop 2 links that you left DECENT feedback on or credz will close this.. (he wanted some help)

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    This was nice it was the typical thug shit but the flow was nice in this piece thats what stood out to me plus i loved this line:
    I never had a relationship i just fuck a bitch and dip
    Lol i relate to that one lol this piece was nice.
    I think the vocab needs to be upped a bit but the structure and flow are fine.

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    dat shit wuz aiight nigga............outta all da shit i liked da shit jo keep da shit up nigga..............shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit

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    I don't get the whole thug shit, but I liked your hook in this piece. I don't know why, but I could hear it and it seemed like it'd b better in audio too. im not really gonna comment on the rest because I hate that type of piece, but stay up

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    no doubt uppin

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    this was hot

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    first off i dont care where ur from .... i dont know where that even is so why u say it like imma know about it n why does this shit sound like a wanna be 50 cent type of drop?? but im not a bitch like some of yall imma leave some feedback.....vocab needs to be upped in this piece too simple.....more mutlies would of made the read better alot better... didnt really feel the emotion ...although there was pretty good imagery... the hook was decent but i jus didnt like the concept... n e ways decent drop jus next time show more emotion n up ur vocab...~one~

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    YO this piece reminds me of my younger days out on the streets dealing and gang banging.. it went str8 to this thugs heart... if I may ask wat beat did u plan on spitting on this cuz this could make a tight as audio compared to text itself is wat im saying...

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    not sure i need to get a mic so i cna record audios and shit.. good looks on the feed

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    st st still uppin

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