I'm blessed to write tight verses

[MXC]

I learned from the best so my turn up next.
Nigga get in line its time I earn some respect.
Recognize or realize your place in my space.
The only reason you eaten with me is cause I hate wasting plates.
The only reason you making doe is cause I hate cooking.
In school it was either Home EC, Home sex, I ain't take cooking.
My homies looking created a cushion now I'm pushing a Benz.
Not only am I whipping I'm tripping in Miami with my friends.
Yeah I grin still cant believe it all y'all.
Now I got ends can I still need it all y'all?
Naw what else do I need what else do I greed.
I'm in every article they read they say my art flows like the breeze.
When they talk of me its how can we get a piece.
When I walk the streets its only to jump-in my Hum' V.
Stretch too the curb cause my text is like the word is.
Church is what they holla I'm blessed to write tight verses.






http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184638
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185067

[M Pulsive]

it was an aight verse...self glorifyin is so gay but ok verse...

keep elevatin...and postin...

[MXC]

good lookin

[MXC]

uppin yo

[Stat.]

Blah.









Elevate kid.

[G-Money]

wtf is wrong with this nigga??^^ n e ways... this piece was okay...vocab was decent... if u would of added more multis it would of been alot better... some of ur lines were streched... keep elevatin and droppin.... ~one~

return the favor...http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184907

[Stat.]

You are worse then he is so dont tell him to elevate.

[warchild]

This was a decent verse the flow was nice in the first 6 bars but then you got inconsistant with it so that spoilt it for me.
The structure was fine the vocab needs to be worked on.
The flow was nice to start off but next time you write try and keep it consistent and try to write some metaphors or punchlines.

Return the favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185131

[MXC]

thinks for y'all respond to this spit

[MXC]

morefeed back

[Retarded]

you suck dick shut the fuck up and erase this crap before u embarass urself

[$RiChMoNeY$]

Yea You Was Aiight It Was All Self Braggadocio Though

[MXC]

thanks n e ways

[MXC]

uppin

[Issue]

Im not gonna hate on this piece to fit in, I liked it. I especially liked the wasting plates line, and though you rhymed the same word occasionally, it wasn't that bad and you came off of it pretty well. Im not gonna say elevate because its played to much here now, just try to use the potential you have. Next time you drop, drop something emotional or something fun or just different, see which style suits you best and keep doing your thing

Issue - Withered Rose
I think i already asked for that.