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    No Turning Back

    inceratedoe- self centred

    AJ Diablo- Love is life..

    I took this from Kelis' debut album and the song of the same name. i wanna record this using the beat and her vocals so i included the song's lyrics, marked SL here. its dope song, btw. (SL are sung, stupid)



    Johnny 6-feet
    We're leaving on a spaceship, we finally made it
    To a planet adjectsent, without need for paylsips
    Work a sweat for a cheque, this life could break thugs
    We could try and make love but it still aint love
    Its a struggle for transcendence, finding the real deal
    Is like serving a sentence without one appeal
    I love this girl, but we're try'na find something greater
    Downloading reams of data for a formula Omega
    Later in the workshop, building a craft
    To leave Earth behind and start chilling at last
    I'm a villian for that, and with hope i paint doves
    To come to life and fly away but it still aint love
    We hit the vaccuum, to pack rooms, pea size small
    And glide through outer space, at least we tried y'all
    My thoughts and aspirations are burning this track
    Now the plan is in motion, no turning it back


    SL (hook)
    When in love with someone
    When she leaves you can still feel it
    Since you feel they're the one
    Just close your eyes and you can still see it
    If it's bright as the sun
    There's no turning back



    Johnny 6-feet
    Your highness, i'm yours to star fleet command
    If you want me to love you or start beef and brand
    A potential usurper with your insignium
    Or just get down and dirty with your cirriculum
    If this aint love, then i don't know what is
    We've escaped from reality, let's never stop this
    We're always on the rise and i'm learning from that
    From this life to the next, no turning it back

    SL
    You can search around the world
    For different people for a thing called love
    And you'll return with stories on how they perceive you
    It just wasn't love
    Your friends will say how they often see it
    They ain't talking 'bout love
    Just go inside and figure the many that don't believe it
    Cause it just ain't love


    SL (hook)
    When in love with someone
    When she leaves you can still feel it
    Since you feel they're the one
    Just close your eyes and you can still see it
    If it's bright as the sun
    There's no turning back



    Johnny 6-feet
    In summery, you're my life, you're the sun to me
    A pair of dreamers in love and its fun to be
    At any function we, outshine the competition
    Still on the expedition for the next apollo mission
    Its a small step for man, a giant leap for us
    All the years we keep in lust, we can reap for trust
    Leave our old lives behind in a murderous act
    Eyes fixed on the horizon, no turning it back

    SL
    I don't need your lavish lifestyle to please me
    Cause it just ain't love
    If you notice kings and queens divorce so easy
    Cause it just ain't love
    The world could change if starving mouths were eating
    But there is no love
    When your heart is starving now's the time to feed it
    Enriched with love


    SL (hook)
    When in love with someone
    When she leaves you can still feel it
    Since you feel they're the one
    Just close your eyes and you can still see it
    If it's bright as the sun
    There's no turning back




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    103! 103! 103!

    For a start, Ive not heard the Kelis track, after Ive heard it Ill rethink my feed to this piece.

    But overall I liked it, you had good concepts and a good idea, I dont know if you took that from the song but it really appealed to me and I really liked the way you followed on with the whole love still ain't love... The first verse in my opinion was the best, and you used vocab that expresses really well and you have good imagery and it wasnt really emotional, but you had the twinge of emotion that helped set this piece off. I think you tied in kelis's lyrics really well with you own, I can see you took her ideas and tied your own in with them and it came across really well.

    I will add more feed to this after I've heard the song, but I do like this piece.

    103! 103! 103!

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    yeah, i liked the idea... but i didnt really like the multi's to much.. work on those foo.. but mainly the concept was the best part.. so keep at it!
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    pretty good stucture. very good imagery i liked the topic good flow this was a good peice im feeling it pretty good shit yo. 1

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    I liked this, I thot the structure was good....

    Its a struggle for transcendence, finding the real deal
    Is like serving a sentence without one appeal
    I love this girl, but we're try'na find something greater
    Downloading reams of data for a formula Omega

    Dope lines...do work on the multies tho...will bring out the flow
    Backstabbing,conniving n stealing, put knives in ur ceiling n risk lives to describe how im feeling, demise lies that deprive all ur healing,think i give a fuck ur in a wheel chair trying to derive how ur wheeling?

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    uppin' this^^

    lol @ issue, thanks man. 103!

    but what the fuck you people gonna tell me about multi's? i can do them back to front, upsidedown and in my sleep. get the fuck outta here.

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    This was dope a really different kind of song from you the flow was on point as always the vocab was used well to desribe your feelings and emotions.
    The structure was fine, i normally dont like the relationship/love raps but this was done in a different non corny way so i thought it was dope.

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    Uppin this for Johnny who cant get on much!!

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