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    Post Music's Artists-A Pancakez collab.

    Bob Marley.
    By Bounce


    I ride the tranquil waves of enlightenment, slave to no man
    My guide, the most high, King of Kings and ruler of all lands
    I’ve joined hands with warring politicians an exhibition
    One love above all, a condition of the heart’s ambition
    Ammunition fired through the hired musicians’ jaw
    Raw vocals ignite, catch a fire under a system of flaws
    Ambushed in the night, death calls due to the truths I recite


    Fight with the might of JAH to unite a people thru plight
    Incite a movement with a groove meant to soothe men
    Proven delusions abuse men, when War’s the only solution
    Elocution on wax an old trench town compilation of facts
    A hidden tax not only paid by blacks, but all who fall into
    .................................................. ...........................societal cracks

    Digital attacks..................................................... .................................
    Waged & engaged with the rage I’ve displayed on many a stage
    Caged in the heart of man is the message my music’s engraved
    Enslaved no longer my spirit soars with the heights of the lifted
    Twisted, these blood shot eye’s signify more than just spliffted
    Gifted are the fruit of my loins as they join this battle, I’m living
    Giving breath to the fire I started, not even death.........................
    ......................................could quiet the riot of the dearly departed


    "Emancipate yourself from mental slavery,.................................
    ............................................none but ourselves can free our mind..."

    -Robert Nesta Marley
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    February 6, 1945 - Died: May 11, 1981



    Slug
    by Twixn...
    with rash action ill stumble through searching for passion
    hacking at road blocks put forth by society's false faction
    a soul search in an attempt to bury the coal
    that hold's my feet and stops my steady roll
    yet ill retake control and silently pronoucnce corperate demise
    kick back and watch pleasantly as our freedom and fate rise
    Answering the forsaken children's cries as they sit there
    trying to rebuild a castle from there parents ashes with care
    It's not fair that the new generation must live in our web of lies
    so please step and try to untangle the incompetent ties
    and ill hold onto this mic and produce forth words
    and keep on portraying my message weather or not you heard
    focus the blurred image of life and reaveal what ive learned
    till all have turned to face reality and what weve earned
    i will not sit and wait, until i wind the path of fate
    steer it back into the right derection and end the hate


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    By Sharp.
    Yo creo que la musica es lo mas importante en el mundo
    Rakim handed me a mic to rhyme, he never knew though,
    I'd be the most lyrical reggeaton artista, enemigos llorran
    Cuando tiro rhymes, todos asustados, de Calderon van.
    Latino from Puerto Rico, came out the womb rappin' chico.
    Slow, and low emcee flow, not average, can't hit a C-note.
    Rose from the gritty streets of the Puerto Rican ghettos.
    Y se que soy feo, un ugly ma'fucka', con pelos negros.
    My music is obsolete if it can't make you move and think.
    As you're reading this, the vibrations groove through the ink.
    Self hate laced lyrics fused with latin drums and beats.
    A heavy bass to make sure you car thumps on streets.
    Musician at heart, inspired by those that live through the art.
    Now I spit on the sharks,
    that said I wouldn't ammount to shit from the start.

    murder murder

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    uppin this...

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    Where is the Kurt Cobain verse?
    can I kick it?

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    Edicus was going to do it, but I guess he decided not to, even after he insisted on it... I thought sharp was going to do it originally... Tells you how much I know...

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    Nice shit guys, This was a long peace but it was worth the read. Everyone came proper. I like how everyone was each a diff artists. Good collab. Keep dropping.

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    uppers... downers... the works... god dammit.

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    Lazy bastids in this forum. Interesting project you guys have come up with. More people should try things like this.

    Bounce for some reason I read your verse in like, a Jamaican voice. It's a good thing, it means you got inside the mind of your artist to some extent. The quote at the end probably helped too. Was that from 'Redemption Song'? Anyways, dopeness from you always. Bob Marley was the fucking man.

    Twixn your verse was pretty cool. You didn't get the full picture of Slug across, you got aspects of his character though, I thought. And he is a fairly complicated guy, I would imagine. Great job though on the whole, you've really improved from when I first read your writing.

    Sharp - I don't speak much Spanish. At least, I stopped studying it in school years ago. So that don't help me much - I missed out on a few lines. But still, the Spanish language has a certain audible quality to it, that English doesn't, that helps me appreciate the mood of this verse. Anyways .. pretty good, but I felt that your verse didn't merge quite as well as Twix and Bounce's did. But that's just me.

    Good collab fellas.
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    Bounce you wrote well as always and the Jamaican colours were a nice addition. There is little for me to criticise... You wrote well from Bob Marley's perspective and shared a little piece of him in your voice which was good. I enjoyed this piece.

    Twixn you also wrote well... You communicated well and had a good flow in your piece which made this good. The content was very good and you wrote well from Slug's perspective... You also included a lot of emotion which made this different from the other pieces. Nice piece...

    Sharp I don't speak any spanish whatsoever but I still enjoyed this piece. It was different to the others like Jekyll said but this was in an interesting way... You really because who you were writing through - including the language. I enjoyed your verse the most because I felt that you really tried to become him...

    It's hard to comment as you all wrote through different artists and thus used very different styles to eachother. This was a different type of OM too... It wasn't quite the norm around here which I enjoyed. It was a good collab overall, I liked it a lot.

    If you could leave feed on "Past and Present" by myself and AMEND I'd appreciate it. The link's in my sig.

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    Thanks for all the feed guys...

    Jek, I am glad you caught the vibe, I wanted that to come arcross in the peice, but I wasn't sure a hip ho board would feel it. Im glad you did, Bob Marley has been an insperation to me in just about every facet of life. I wanted to do him justcie since this was a short peice, so far it seems like I did. Thanks again guy's, I don't think I'll have time to drop any peices in here or anywhere on the board, so this is it for a while...

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    i swear i saw that post yesterday...^^^

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    ^Can you please tell me what you read as far as stock values go for yesterday? I think we can make a few bucks off your ability to foresee the future...

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    wow...tht sbit was pretty dope fellas'
    liked Bounces verse tha most but all in all was very good...MAD FUCKING PROPZ YALL'
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