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GATTMAN SPITS FIRST
gattman
Lyrical Genocide
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2 hours to spit after check in...check in today...
no biting
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hate votes
GATTMAN SPITS FIRST
yo checkin in i spit first right within 2 hours, good luck homey
no worries...
lot of people calling you out.. vote on a battle or 2 to get credz
eyo hold tight c.v.p an all of bham massive,
eyo this aint lyrical genocide fool....its literally homocide,
its no coincedence.....im producin murderous incedents,
you cant co-excist wid me.....cause u dont persist like me,
im arrestin yo soul wid my rhymes...you mentally in my custody,
a million niggas couldnt set you free.....im the end of humanity...world war 3,
its judgement day bitch.....an im the jury...all that shit you talk unleashed my rap fury,
you can have a lawyer present....during proceedings,but you cant get away from the shit you been feedin,
whats that?....yo pride started bleedin.....good...im only givin you wat u been needin,
thats a rap demolition.....destroyin you was my mission,
i bet u wish u had a premonition....stay away from gattman cause he straight killin,
i'll try to wrap this up politely....i neva wanted beef homey....but how dare u take me lightly,
disrespect me again...id love to see you try....if you run yo mouth again...kiss your ass goodbye!!!
This dude don’t know shit about bustin slugs wid a gat
You aint a fucking thug, you never made a man topple flat
You don’t know the street, just like we all know you cant freestyle
You steel prewrite your shit, you got it from a fuckin stockpile
And this aint WW3, cuz you aint worth spitten strong for
You talken about lawyers but you cant comprehend something you can afford
And take you lightly? Fucking right, how many tuff thugs you know in the UK?
So until you cant buy better rhymes, step down, wait a few days till payday
So I’ll speak for the people when I say just say, shut your mouth
Keep talken you fuckin herb brit, its about to be lights out
srry yo, i got cought up for real
we'll let the people do the talkin fool, uppin1 people
Gattman:
eyo this aint lyrical genocide fool....its literally homocide,
its no coincedence.....im producin murderous incedents,
you cant co-excist wid me.....cause u dont persist like me,
im arrestin yo soul wid my rhymes...you mentally in my custody,
a million niggas couldnt set you free.....im the end of humanity...world war 3,
its judgement day bitch.....an im the jury...all that shit you talk unleashed my rap fury,
you can have a lawyer present....during proceedings,but you cant get away from the shit you been feedin,
whats that?....yo pride started bleedin.....good...im only givin you wat u been needin,
thats a rap demolition.....destroyin you was my mission,
i bet u wish u had a premonition....stay away from gattman cause he straight killin,
i'll try to wrap this up politely....i neva wanted beef homey....but how dare u take me lightly,
disrespect me again...id love to see you try....if you run yo mouth again...kiss your ass goodbye!!!
good structure...not that much word play...all around it was good
Lryical Genocide:
This dude don’t know shit about bustin slugs wid a gat
You aint a fucking thug, you never made a man topple flat
You don’t know the street, just like we all know you cant freestyle
You steel prewrite your shit, you got it from a fuckin stockpile
And this aint WW3, cuz you aint worth spitten strong for
You talken about lawyers but you cant comprehend something you can afford
And take you lightly? Fucking right, how many tuff thugs you know in the UK?
So until you cant buy better rhymes, step down, wait a few days till payday
So I’ll speak for the people when I say just say, shut your mouth
Keep talken you fuckin herb brit, its about to be lights out
Good work on working off of his shit...the ww3 shit...all of that piece
vote//Lyrical Genocide
reasoning: Both was aight from both of these guys...nothing spectacular from both of yall....think the structure was the best from Gattman...but not that much tho...all around i think it goes to L.Genocide...
uppin1
lets get some votes... ill return da favors
i would vote but knowbdy been checking out my newest battles in the front line im out i might be back to vote
i vote genocide becuase his shitcame a little bit harder and his verse overall was better his vocab needed to be better but his punches hert gat and it was a pretty good battle overall genocide 8/10 gat 6.9/10 im out ENOUGH SAID
upppin 2
lez get votes
post a link, ill spit an honest fair vote that will not be DQed... come on.
favors will be returned...lets get some votes
up3
weak battle...Imma go wit Lyrical Genocide becuz he had bette rpunches and his shit made snese at least really weak battle....both elevate pz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v/Lyrical Genoicide!!!
Lyrical Breakdown
Gattman:
eyo this aint lyrical genocide fool....its literally homocide,
its no coincedence.....im producin murderous incedents,
you cant co-excist wid me.....cause u dont persist like me,
im arrestin yo soul wid my rhymes...you mentally in my custody,
a million niggas couldnt set you free.....im the end of humanity...world war 3,
its judgement day bitch.....an im the jury...all that shit you talk unleashed my rap fury,
you can have a lawyer present....during proceedings,but you cant get away from the shit you been feedin,
whats that?....yo pride started bleedin.....good...im only givin you wat u been needin,
thats a rap demolition.....destroyin you was my mission,
i bet u wish u had a premonition....stay away from gattman cause he straight killin,
i'll try to wrap this up politely....i neva wanted beef homey....but how dare u take me lightly,
disrespect me again...id love to see you try....if you run yo mouth again...kiss your ass goodbye!!!
You really need to work on ya punches and personals but mostly on ya structure ya verse was all ova the place if your gonna stack ya verse like that jus write'em in bars its alot easier to follow but ya verse was way betta then some of the otha shit you've posted especially that try out you did for the Arsenals but overall ya verse wasn't anything special
Lyrical Genocide:
This dude don’t know shit about bustin slugs wid a gat
You aint a fucking thug, you never made a man topple flat
You don’t know the street, just like we all know you cant freestyle
You steel prewrite your shit, you got it from a fuckin stockpile
And this aint WW3, cuz you aint worth spitten strong for
You talken about lawyers but you cant comprehend something you can afford
And take you lightly? Fucking right, how many tuff thugs you know in the UK?
So until you can buy better rhymes, step down, wait a few days till payday
So I’ll speak for the people when I say just say, shut your mouth
Keep talken you fuckin herb brit, its about to be lights out
Ya verse wasn't anything special either but ya structure was good so thas a plus you didnt really have any punches but you did have some personals and you fed a lil off his verse and thas not good but overall ya verse was betta
v/goes to L.Genocide for contain'n a well structure'd verse and comin a lil harder with his verse cuz he's was more like a diss then battle but Gattman was a lil too s/g in his
elevation is a must
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
Uppin... One More And We Can Call It Good
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