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Thread: the new nigga on RB

  1. #1
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    the new nigga on RB

    ayo the name's ghost, you faggot, musta HEARD of ME
    so EVIL on the mic that Pro-Lifers try to MURDER ME
    to those that don't feel me, let me CHANGE YA MIND
    i rap circles around you FAKE GUYS in a STRAIGHT LINE
    better RETIRE and SHIT, i fill a NINE with CLIPS
    backless coward, i rip ya fuckin SPINE to BITS
    ...abused MANY trees with my PENMANSHIP
    it's like i'm DOIN LIFE cuz i got SO MANY SENTENCES
    if you WELL BUILT ima TAKE YOU APART
    stab ya CHEST, and tell you not to "TAKE IT TO HEART"
    i STAY SMART, think so quick my BRAIN SPARKS
    blast enough IRON into you to make ya VEINS HARD
    i speak rapidly, BREAK BACKS for NUTHIN
    got STALIN in his grave givin me DAPS in RUSSIAN
    never waste rhymes, i just WASTE PEOPLE
    cuz i'm HARDER than trying to make "ARMAGEDDON"'s SEQUEL
    ....i'm HOTTER than the barrel of a 20-SHOT
    HITTIN' you like 20 shots of HENNEY till you BELLY FLOP
    i spit OFF the TOP, leave your BRAINS in tha STREET
    keep you "on ya toes" and LAUGH while i'm CANING YA FEET
    i beat "Thermos" FLASKS at RETAINING the HEAT
    so SICK i made the SANDMAN go INSANE in his SLEEP
    FACE IT, y'all CLAIM to spit "ACID" but ya "BASIC"
    i throw you off tha BEAT 'fore the DJ even LACED IT
    i RE-WROTE the GENESIS, Glif MENACES
    BURNT my tongue on my LAST VERSE and BROKE my PEN on THIS

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

    But this was ok man...I notice you used multies in like every line which is awesome, i love multies...they really help the flow of the piece and make it more complex...the content of this was ok..try being more open with your topics though...Vocab was alright though i thought...But for what this piece was it was alright..Keep at it.

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    da-ha-ha-ha-ha-yum! this was a fucking diss verse and a half and it wasn't even aimed at anyone specific. a lot of killer punchlines, consistent multi's, great wordplay...

    you'd better get to the frontlines and start putting those punches to use man.

    keep posting.

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    This was a nice verse the punches were on point the flow was consistent through the piece which always helps a verse like this.
    The structure and vocab were good so i couldnt say anything to criticise this it was dope.

    Return the favour.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=183323

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    son thsi shti was sick, nigga this shit was sick son. thsi si fa real yo peep my shit son good looks on this poiece nigag you hot son fa real

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    lovin the feed back

    i didnt know that rule that i gotta give feed to other ppl

    so ill go do one now
    and 2morrow the other

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    uppin

    for more feed back

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    Closed, Needs a legit title.

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