yo rules are regular house rules,
you spit first,
you spit 20 mins afta check,
10-15 lines,
goodluck
yo rules are regular house rules,
you spit first,
you spit 20 mins afta check,
10-15 lines,
goodluck
Cheeeck... Good luck...
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Po'Ethics Lives
You're whack as fuck... You write lines that are 4 words long,
Here's a line for you "Shut the fuck up" - There's gotta be something wrong.
You're so confused that in your sig you're firing at your own name?
Looking for fame? Not an option - You just dissed your own game...
You wanna be the best rapper? This isn't some story I animate..
I've got news for ya Gat... You're the star of your own movie... You hallucinate.
You're lost amongst my intense rhymes - Surrounded on all sides,
Lies and cries won't help you out - I confide - this is the end of your ride...
Don't be ashamed you're a noweight... Everyone's been there once...
Only difference is you'll be there for the next six months.
Asked me for a battle and saw me merk Wickey then got scared,
You're too open for disses like a kid with his nostrels flaired.
Well it's time for you to speak but we already know you're weak...
The strongest you ever come is when you take a leak.
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eyo hold tight c.v.p, let me merk this fool
eyo deviate u say i halucinate.....all i see is this verse makin you levitate,
i'll raise you like viagra.....then make you fall like niagra,
im drug nigga an u addicted to me.....u wounds u got were inflicted by me,
your whole state of mind is affected by me......your ryhmes are epeleptic 2 me,
like a fit nigga.....youll be shakin when im finished wid u,
you a lightweight..... hence= your rhymes are intense?,
you must be trippin nigga.....dont you figure?,
my styles advanced....... an my lines got bigga,
i aint claimin "G"....bit your nuthin 2 me,
i aint pullin the trigga nigga...you jus shot yourself in the foot,
that rhyme suits last week.......but i switched my style now its you thats weak,
afta this demolition ya rap futures bleak......jus walk back through the door,
iwont tell anyone yo gone jus sneak!!!
alright, I think dev's wasnt to bad. an ok flow, simple punches not that special. gatt on the other hand spit some crazy shit. the flow was nice and the punches were incredible."i'll raise you like viagra.....then make you fall like niagra" was good enough to win it just alone. good battle for both.
V/Gattman
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Wow DR To The Max, Deviate merked him, Props Dev
yo thanx alot blood i'll be sure to vote back on your battles
Seriously, Dev destroyed gattman.
Dev, your structure was flawless. Your punches hit hard, they were original and conherent. I think that you're on much too high of a level to be battling kidslike this.
Gattman, your structure was HORRIBLE. Your rhymes were crunched together and it messed up the rhythm. Everything in your verse was played. I've seen the concepts done so many times, nothing original at all. Your not on dev's level. I think you have potential but try battling people more on you level until you can start battling more experienced members.
v/Dev.
murder murder
aiyo when my name loggin works ill vote....Ight ....Sumshit happened wit it
If i could vote it'd be fore dev. Ok punches (still can make them harder) and good structure. keep going man. 7/10
Now gattman. urs was o.k. structure was aight. there were sum nice rhymes. but there was some self glorifying in it. remember this is a battle. diss him. hurt him. that kinda thing. work on ur punches. keep going though man just keep elevatin.
5/10
Overall: Ok battle. not too bad
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dev
You're whack as fuck... You write lines that are 4 words long,
Here's a line for you "Shut the fuck up" - There's gotta be something wrong.
ight not bad
You're so confused that in your sig you're firing at your own name?
Looking for fame? Not an option - You just dissed your own game...
nice
You wanna be the best rapper? This isn't some story I animate..
I've got news for ya Gat... You're the star of your own movie... You hallucinate.
nice
You're lost amongst my intense rhymes - Surrounded on all sides,
Lies and cries won't help you out - I confide - this is the end of your ride...
ight good
Don't be ashamed you're a noweight... Everyone's been there once...
Only difference is you'll be there for the next six months.
lol..ight good
Asked me for a battle and saw me merk Wickey then got scared,
You're too open for disses like a kid with his nostrels flaired.
lol..kk ight
Well it's time for you to speak but we already know you're weak...
The strongest you ever come is when you take a leak.
ok..
ight good verse...punchs were there not the hardest ones in the world but all connected//flow was passible however some of your lines seemed a bit stretched..so try n sort them out ight...other than tah overall good verse..give it a 7/10
gat
eyo deviate u say i halucinate.....all i see is this verse makin you levitate,
i'll raise you like viagra.....then make you fall like niagra,
eh?? lil confusin
im drug nigga an u addicted to me.....u wounds u got were inflicted by me,
your whole state of mind is affected by me......your ryhmes are epeleptic 2 me,
to much self glory
like a fit nigga.....youll be shakin when im finished wid u,
you a lightweight..... hence= your rhymes are intense?,
eh?/ didnt even rhyme
you must be trippin nigga.....dont you figure?,
my styles advanced....... an my lines got bigga,
thats ur problem..lines too long
i aint claimin "G"....bit your nuthin 2 me,
i aint pullin the trigga nigga...you jus shot yourself in the foot,
um okish..weak
that rhyme suits last week.......but i switched my style now its you thats weak,
afta this demolition ya rap futures bleak......jus walk back through the door,
iwont tell anyone yo gone jus sneak!!!
lil stretched..
ight wernt feelin this verse to be honest...lines were too stretched and punches never really connected..n some of your lines were eh??..work on the punches also aim them at ur opponent n dnt tlk bout ur self...ight no hate just sayin...pz
ight im go with dev for harder punches n a overall better verse
v/dev
hit this up for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182634
for real it was a good battle Deviate he came kind of simple and your flow was good but really you punches where not so great and on the the other hand gatman he came with crazy shit and had good flow and way better punches and it was a good battle
You're whack as fuck... You write lines that are 4 words long,
Here's a line for you "Shut the fuck up" - There's gotta be something wrong
that was kind of aweak open but alright 5/10
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eyo deviate u say i halucinate.....all i see is this verse makin you levitate,
i'll raise you like viagra.....then make you fall like niagra, that was such a good opener and had good flow and a good punch
v=gatman for better flow and better punches
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keep votin on this battle everyone please.... iknow ive won
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