The Rules U Stated In Front Lines
DA RHYTHMAGICIAN
DOUBLE RR
The Rules U Stated In Front Lines
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Aight Go Ahead And Spit
Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit
You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win
I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross
It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed
You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches
When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits'
Treadmills aint keepin ya 'waist in fit' two of us and u place in fifth
Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz ya rhymes iz shit
Them Coochie Lips, wouldnt Flip the Script, If it was just one Page
Cause i'm Wine, an your old cheese, ya get WORSE WITH AGE!
Quik spit
iight u can spit now
u betta hurry up n spit
u said 10 lines 20 mins to post
itz been ova 20 mins
u can get dq'ed if i wanted an easy win
u best not punk out
3-0 iz an automatic KO
this line
You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches
When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits'
wasnt supposed ta go ta an extra line so just read it as it is right above
Double RR
i am giving u 10 more mins ta post
i am tryin ta be nice but if u dont post in 10 mins, i am gana report it ta IR and have u dq'ed
Listen Real Close So I Can Show U U Cant See Me
Even Though I Know U Wanna Be Me
And It Makes Me Sick
Cause The Only Thing U Ever Beat Is Yo Dick
I Will Lay Yo Ass Out Until U Tell The Feds
Or I'll Keep Firin At U Until U Drop Dead
Or Would U Prefer Just Suckin Dis Dick Instead
Im Puttin In Work And I Just Kirked
So Somebody Call Dis Niggas Motha And Her That Her Son Got Merked
uppin fa votes n feedback on dis battle
i murked him and he didnt even spit 10 lines like he said
Uppin 4 Votes
Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit
You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win
I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross
It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed
You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches
When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits'
Treadmills aint keepin ya 'waist in fit' two of us and u place in fifth
Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz ya rhymes iz shit
Them Coochie Lips, wouldnt Flip the Script, If it was just one Page
Cause i'm Wine, an your old cheese, ya get WORSE WITH AGE!
^^Dang son this was nice, I thought you were wack lol until i read this, nice beggining, i loved that first bar lol nice. The end was kinda gay but i loved the begging of this. At first i thought the verse was gunna be wack but then you came strong nice job.
7/10
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Listen Real Close So I Can Show U U Cant See Me
Even Though I Know U Wanna Be Me
And It Makes Me Sick
Cause The Only Thing U Ever Beat Is Yo Dick
I Will Lay Yo Ass Out Until U Tell The Feds
Or I'll Keep Firin At U Until U Drop Dead
Or Would U Prefer Just Suckin Dis Dick Instead
Im Puttin In Work And I Just Kirked
So Somebody Call Dis Niggas Motha And Her That Her Son Got Merked
^^Dang son you got merked LMAO talking all that shit and still murdered. For real tho if you want to get better, try throwing punchez that arn't played, beating your dick* very played one of the most played lines ive ever seen. The ending was your best line stil very wack tho. Elevate. stay up
V/ Rhyme
RTF
thanx fa da vote
still need more feedback n votes ya'll
remeber 3-0 iz an automatic KO
DA RHYTHMAGICIAN
Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit
You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win
opener killed him
I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross
It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed
Excellent word play
two of us and u place in fifth
Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz ya rhymes iz shit
Deliverance on point
Double RR
Listen Real Close So I Can Show U U Cant See Me
Even Though I Know U Wanna Be Me
And It Makes Me Sick
Cause The Only Thing U Ever Beat Is Yo Dick
I Will Lay Yo Ass Out Until U Tell The Feds
Or I'll Keep Firin At U Until U Drop Dead
Or Would U Prefer Just Suckin Dis Dick Instead
Im Puttin In Work And I Just Kirked
So Somebody Call Dis Niggas Motha And Her That Her Son Got Merked
You had no puncees and your structure was everywhere
Vote:DA RHYTHMAGICIAN
I bleesed this battle so bless mine holla at the kid
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when u get 100 posts vote on dis battle Young Gold
good feedback though
thanx i will use it in the near future
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