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    Exclamation World Full of Attrocity-Lyrically Insane ft.StatQuo08,Red

    yo this is basically the same one as tha last but i think the problem we had about getting feedback was because it SEEMED longer than it really was!....so here go a new one.....



    Chorus:
    when the mind talks thats when the truth comes out
    for so long we held it in but now feel the urge to shout
    the urge to release my opinions on the streets
    we'll go to war in order to achieve world peace

    Red_:
    Its Bad, U gotta Watch ya Life Unfold into Undesirable Scrutiny
    and Hearin Gun Fire Random until tha sound aint new to me
    Dont Jump aint scared of Death, of tha street is what u taught
    Materialized everything, u can get Mugged over what u brought
    Society aint made menace its contain in our households
    go to Jail Get Raped, Killed, Or get Beat Till U out Cold
    Strugglin Life, is it worth Dyin cause of some false thoughts and belief
    gettin Killed Over Spoiled Milk and Politics Started Tha Beef
    U shoot Back Hoping now u kill whatever u aim
    Killing Ya Foes But what inside ya Soul Still Remains
    u still Living In hell whats worth Killing u doin them a favor
    go to jail over some bullshit that probably wasnt even major
    remove this globe from my ass,i'm tired of being fucked by the world
    when my ink leaks and my pen speaks you can take it as gods words
    voices go unheard defying constitutional rights causing an internal mind fight
    turn the world upside-down so it feels like i'm above the speed of light
    pregnant women kicked and left with dead foetus from an unlawful abortion
    kid slave and child extortion exposed amid prostitution and lies
    birth ain't a gift just the activation of the countdown to when the
    offspring dies

    Chorus x2

    Lyrically_insane:

    A yo sky’s the limit.. empires is infinite u try to survive in it,
    When man defies the opposition and dies to stay alive wit grip,
    when greedy eyes is rich there’s always people full of lies n shit
    I’m talking organizing hits… the power grows as the size inflicts,
    Get caught up in all kinds of shit… all for a prize to get…….
    The time for sacrificing kids… wondering if life exists….
    U couldn’t know this issue of worth.. until u notice its you
    Only God depicts you to the path u choose and hopes u get through,
    And those against u..you’ll neva know who got unfocused split views
    Ones who provoke and misuse guns u might get smoked within crews,
    is it worth it for ya mother to watch ya death unfold on the news………..
    world full of attrocity neglected by the politics of democracy
    corrupt timocracy consuming all our property
    improperly adding strength to a so called bureaucracy
    hypocrisy the way free speech is stopping me from making my speech free
    misinterpided amendments need revision to overcome this undoubted difficulty
    newspapers headline 'killers and rapists', front to back in this sphere of cruelty
    almost fooled me but now i see life as a decease, we all cursed with death
    been living walking backwards hoping i don't run into my last breath
    no intentions of being the last one left and i ain't afraid to die
    we're all trapped in a prison for the civillian enclosed by the sky
    make up the truth so i technically don't lie about not knowing the truth
    i wonder how the world would have evolved if Adam ate artificial fruit

    Chorus x1

    StatQuo08:

    A spoken mind equals the truth, its hard but you best believe it,
    isn’t it ironic how were willing to disturb peace, so we can achieve it,
    who needs it?..come to think of it I don’t think ive ever experienced peace,
    government continues to take our soldiers to war w/out hearin our plees
    everyone knows it but we lose focus this entire world is atrocious,
    I look into the eyes of niece, tears down my cheeks as tell her its hopeless,
    She told me she was sorry for bein born and if she could she’d change it,
    We’re in danger, I got a suicidal sister and ive grown up a deranged kid,
    Ive never spoken about problems when I try to relate, but we all got em,
    I never spoke about death and the incident w/my father,how they shot em
    I try not to touch on those subjects because it hurts just to write it,
    I try to talk to others about it but when my tongue slips I bite it,
    But now I have the urge to shout it, the fires there I just gotta ignite it,
    My mother is racist and she hates how I act when im rappin,
    I asked her about the night her and my father conceived me she replied...
    ...Accidents happen…

    Chorus x2


    here go my links:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173150
    and the OM...I'm Serious by Tha Joka...........cant get tha link
    VERBAL INTERCOURSE

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    Damn ill have to read more of this later... it kinda started of a bit boring but halfway thru da first verse it starts going nice and dramatic shits is sho mad tite.. ill read mo later too long for my time

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    yo cmon ppl...may be long but its werth it................upping

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    Red: you went good at the topic, flowed nice..vocab was strong, emotion was there, you came pretty good with your verse... nice!

    Lyically insane: You had very good multis, also came strong with emotion.. it flowed well, vocab was good..was a good read, nice drop!

    Stat: multis were very good, ya verse was nice and creative, flowed very nice, emotion was good... last 2 lines were good...

    oh and the chorus fit this very good, props to whoever wrote it... all came very good with their verses, i personally think Stat killed this, but all came good! was a good read, hope to see more... good drop!

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    Mostly agreed with Abusive....

    this was a very nice piece...

    I felt you through most of it, mostly stat's verse.

    Red came alright, the chorus was meaningful. Red started boring but got better through it, stat came nice... Lyrically insane's was good too.. It flowed well all in all ... It was good. nice meaningful open mic. I enjoyed it... Came boring in some parts but fixed itself up before the end.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=2116338
    ^ Honestly.

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    good shit niccaz keep it comin

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