Divine Divergence (f/ Lyric and un_conscious_one )

[Laureate]

Unconscience - Itallics
Subconscience - Regular


Divine Divergence

the east wind howls, forcing each green blade to bend
yet dogs urination leaves a mocking trend
a certain blood flows, hidden deep within a graze
its vein to thick for a pretending padre to save
lobes of string bring pre-constructed cognition
only developing some other false omniscience

Trees sway in the wind, swirling thoughtful whims
Leaves twirl on the breeze of pondering hymns
As I look up to the sky, sun streaming through clouds
My soul trembles at His gaze, always peering down
I’m a borderline Catholic, A Sunday school teacher
Feeding knowledge to children, a studying preacher

black scars lay behind forcing beliefs through whipping
a split sea wall held, miracles they wish to be mimicking
blind white eyes can hide somewhere inside
their book towords heaven, revealing a false guide
Led me into confusion, so I know where to run

My soul is possessed by the spirit of One
I believe in Him, and religion must follow suit
Broken record in my head, won’t allow it to mute
The Divine shines light on all who choose to listen
Wisdom penetrates the walls of Hell’s prison

forced thought creates a leapords running bite
which will in time bite the preachers wage
and as their moribound chains leave mind’s sight
Light will lumify from freedoms gaze

Invisible ceilings keep my ego tightly devout
Enclosed by colored windows and lightning rods
Obese faith in cramped quarters leaking out
Keep me safe from where the demons trod

dilute dreggy ink as it drips and leaves a page
White emptiness satisfies urges until old age
And its unique passage…lends reasons to stay

I stand strong, until the ground gives away
I pray to the Heavens, hoping someone hears it
I’m afraid of ghosts, except the holy spirit

in an isolated field I’ll burn the book of hell
a solo mind nourishment till death I’ll dwell

One without the other, chances are remote
Exhaling toxins, as smoke rises with my hopes

and cry for a angel floating with maverick wings

Descending for believers, purifying havoc’s Kings

blood edged knives,
................................caked in the lost faith
Fate produces and creates,
..................................bodies hung in drapes

[Bloom.Quist]

Dope.

[Foreshadow]

Damn this was a nice piece. I liked how both of you had such good details and such good imagery. Un you did a nice job I wasnt expecting this type of work from you maybe because I havent seen you post before but this collab was a real good one and it should be hall of fame.

[un_conscious_one]

^thanks for that

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[un_conscious_one]

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[un_conscious_one]

bump, drop a link,

[Mesmerize]

wow, really nice peice guys, i especially liked the ending. Some parts were a little confusing but you guys held this piece together nicely. The imagery was great on both parts, along with the choice of words. I also liked the idea to this. Very nice collab guys. keep it up.

peace,
Mez

[Kaotic Theory]

wow this was a nice piece i was confused a bit during the opener but continued to read and it made more sense,i didnt xpect this from un conscious one but i did enjoy your style and imagery added to the piece,lyric you did great also...you continue to impress me with every piece you drop straight dopeness....your imagery and all was on point...i was loving this collaberation and was surprised of the outcome i didnt think this would turn out that great do to like others said i havent seen much from un consious one, but thanx for the good read guys it was my pleasure....

peace

[Laureate]

thanks everyone

[Mantra]

This was pretty good. Not spectacular in my opinion
but good none the less. And even though Lyric already
explained to me what it was about, I still think it
was fairly easy to interpret as your typical questioning
faith type of thing. Though in a not so typical fashion.
Regardless good job to both. Lyric, you went a bit more
straight forward with your lines as I’ve come to expect
from your style of writing, Which wasn't a bad thing at all,
whilst still managing to instill some good points about
the subject. While on the other hand I felt Un's was a bit
more cryptic in how he chose to get his thoughts across, though
not to the point of bogging down the message. Again nice
job to both. Overall I was feeling Lyric's just a tad more
though, not to take away from Un in any way, but I think
maybe the word choice or the way lines were constructed
turned me off to some parts. No offense, that's just my
opinion as a reader. The end however would have to be
really my only major qualm with the piece. I dunno what it
was about it, but I just wasn't diggin it. Seemed maybe
out place compared to the rest or like you were just trying
to wrap it up or something. In any case I would have liked
to see more of a resolution to the whole dilemma at hand
rather than an abrupt ending. Anyways, all in all
a good read, and a nice first glimpse at how Un gets down, lol
keep it up fellas.

-peace