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Thread: Raid-R, R., Blockade, Biggie Dee's, and J.A.R. (Song about Crooked life on the edge)

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    Raid-R, R., Blockade, Biggie Dee's, and J.A.R. (Song about Crooked life on the edge)

    Raid-R:
    Pass me the mic dog so I can start
    Dont take it to heart, bart is being mugged at wal-mart
    By a guy whos a bout six foot two, its Biggie
    Still represent Raid-R and crew, now this shit new
    Right off the back of the truck, ur lyrics are whack dude
    Shut the fuck up, before u have to duck
    From waves of bullets fly over u buck,if u live its luck
    Caz u a stone short of a collection, I took it for protection
    For next pres. Election, so i can start my resurrection
    And make it a section of an era to be studied like frog disection
    it will be history in the school book for kids
    looking back on the music I put on these vids
    That are top selling gigs, Whats the deal R., start the bids

    Chorus
    Wannbees,Fakers, Snakers, Haters running around the streets with knives
    Thugs, Ballas, MC, with poped collars, coming around doing drive by's
    Wansta's, Crackers, hicks, and CO jaxer, come around this way to crack
    Jokes on us and super impose us, bitches better watch ur backs


    R.:
    Raid is going crazy with multiple word functions
    making harsh cracks on shit with no assumptions
    I will add some conjunctions to Junct The factory we made
    Caz the shit is straight crunken like a live grenade
    my shit will have u laid out, give him first aid
    Match the style now of that to " Raid"
    R. is coming though bitches, Time to invade

    Blockade:
    What the Fuck is wrong with niggas today
    Call u gay on any given day
    caz they say Raid's ryme styles whack and weighty
    Come at ya bitches like the evil Slim Shady
    Sike Im Wayne brady with a urge to sing
    im the king of the Brady Bunch and Biggie the Queen (haha)
    And dont think u can touch our rings, with ur own catchy jingles
    Caz i will have ur ass shot up, Till ur nerve start to tingle

    Chorus
    Wannbees,Fakers, Snakers, Haters running around the streets with knives
    Thugs, Ballas, MC, with poped collars, coming around doing drive by's
    Wansta's, Crackers, hicks, and CO jaxer, come around this way to crack
    Jokes on us and super impose us, bitches better watch ur backs

    Biggie Dee's:
    Bitches come back and feel my heat
    Caz I will cut u niggas off at ur feet
    take the beat and make in to a home cooked meal to eat
    And eat up R. like he some meat
    im rymin straight from my soul, Make the election polls go for BoB Dole
    Wait he aint running caz Bush in office,
    This bitch aint even trained, he a dam novice
    And his daddy in the offices changes his diaper
    This anti depressant pills are making me hyper
    Lets cypher bitches and see who wins
    Sike I rather stab u bitches with the top of ball pens

    J.A.R.:
    im with this crew and love it so
    I can ryme a full verse blinded folded, fo sho
    and u think u can take the floor, I'll bring this bitch out the closet
    Faster than he can open the door
    ops now dog did I just bite, or is this delemma about to turn night
    I'll start a fight with any nigga at dark
    U'll run away like a bitch, when u hear me bark
    and dont take this as a diss Street Play and Product
    to listen to yall whine, i gotta be high on narcotics
    u hicks with no kicks, all I see is two girls with small dicks
    back off us if u wanna stay in business
    Caz Jax an Rymes still have u on his hitless

    Chorus
    Wannbees,Fakers, Snakers, Haters running around the streets with knives
    Thugs, Ballas, MC, with poped collars, coming around doing drive by's
    Wansta's, Crackers, hicks, and CO jaxer, come around this way to crack
    Jokes on us and super impose us, bitches better watch ur backs

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    Nice flow... Nice collab... Could've used a little more advanced vocabulary but it was compensated for with decent flow and good linking between eachothers pieces. I don't know if you live these gangsta lifestyles - if you don't it takes away from it... Shows insenserity in your rhymes... If you do though then it's cool.

    Nice piece... Some technical parts that need to be addressed I suppose though...

    Peace
    Po'Ethics Lives

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    uppin for some more votes

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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