God vs. Rule

[Richard Parker]

10-20 Lines, agree on it. Check in by Wednesday.
Battles are due 11:59 eastern time on Friday.
Vote on at least 3 battles & leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote on LLL battles.
I'm not laying out more rules, but don't do anything stupid.

[Rule.]

the irony..

how bout just 10.

[Violent.]

LMFAO... Sounds good. Good luck.

[Rule.]

aight.. its like

i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..
your battlings fallin off bro .. nothing really decent in awhile..
i mean..
check Jr champ match .. all your writtens seem to be Untitled..

[God.]

Czech it...
Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tryin' to bring out the big guns, dawg? Son, you ain't fuckin' with me
I'd bring out my Rule. of thumb punches.. but he's still under my knee
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye
Brings played concepts every day to the table, left w/ nothin' to right
Tab Lloyd's a bigger old joke.. than every cast member on Nick at Nite
So in closing, I'll just comma'll over him, and have Lloyd quotin' my art
& leave this herb so bruised.... that heads won't even question marks
Later

Links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168619
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168614
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168617
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168613

[JACE]

Rule

been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..

God

Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it

that first line was nice by god, but that was pretty much it, rule hadda a pretty coo verse, them six lines basically took it

v/ rule

[Scott B]

Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it

^ dope

been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
dude's appearance is dirt .. kid needs a confidence boost prolly..
& id lend a second hand, but it seems ya already did ya shopping.

^ doper

the u.k line sucked jace

v/ rule though

[$pitacular]

i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..

vs

Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye


and God came harder.

v/God

[Mr. Key]

Vote Rule
saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..

vs

Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it

[Center Sight]

i thought this was close.. rhyme scheme goes to god.. personals goes to rule.. punches kinda even, consistancy kinda even, ima actually have to base this off originality and x factor.. god was more original.. i thought, cuz rule u said dude like 3 or 4 times u gotta stay away from that, one word can make ur verse seem repetetive.. and x factor.. i thought god's opening line was the best line.. so, close but vote=god

[Exculptifactoriusness]

i saw this dude write .. your shits played, & i must confess..
id take a walk in your shoes.. but people'd actually Payless..
been around awhile .. & yet indecision has him playin games..
identity crisis? HELL NAW .. dude's bout to pass Chrit in alias names..
talk is cheap man, and you've wasted every fuckin amount..
God has gathered enough pounds.. ud think he had a UK bank account..

Vs.

Lloyd's just a whore in this league, up to the point he had sex with it
He's the type to struggle to make a deadline.... & fall down next to it
Tab tries to act all thugged out & shit, thinks he'll act like a black guy
Heh, his whole style consists of a voting ring, rock bandana black eye

Pretty decent battle here, but rule had the better verse overall. Better punches and personals, the pounds line was hot. God, you came ok, some reused concepts but overall decent

V/Rule.

[Expo.]

i actually got god takin this..

for oblivious reasons

rule, you my boy and all, but that uk bank account line and payless = no-no's. they weren't BAD, but they weren't effective eitha.. your best line was the personal on the alias's, shit was maddd funny

god, you came good, nothing really played, or whack, and the struggle/deadline line was dope, liked it


like i said, i got God takin this

v/ god.

[God.]

^LOL.. I think he meant obvious... oblivious sounds like D/R

[Expo.]

Lol, yeah, my bad.

[$pitacular]

i actually got god takin this..

for oblivious reasons

now THAT'S funny.