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Thread: Battle of the gentlemen: Mr W.Rite vs. Mr. Key

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    Battle of the gentlemen: Mr W.Rite vs. Mr. Key

    10-20 Lines, agree on it. Check in by Wednesday.
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    Is chilly chill Mr. Key's Avatar
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    Check, how bout 12
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    12 sounds good..

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    Is chilly chill Mr. Key's Avatar
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    This is the only time i can drop today, good luck and drop soon

    25 to Life, ya age coincides with ya chronic stay on RB
    I guess your lifes' jus not Write........without a damn IP
    Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
    But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?
    You got a smooth drive to victory, d/r's will always vote for ya
    Makin my chances of winning a shot in the dark...
    ................................that hit rites black ass in Georgia
    25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
    Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress
    A gentle-man match is the perfect type, you've been soft for years
    So its always a treat to see u Rite.....when all ur cookies are cleared!
    A comeback? Its too late bitch, ur times done jus logg off the site
    Cause every one gets a turn at Greatness.....to bad ya Mista write
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    you aint a serious threat to me, cus I’m so raw and past fame
    the naked eye might think you’re dope, until it saw your last name
    yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
    but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
    to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
    when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
    step ya game up pimp...take my advice...before its too late
    told him to get his shit together... he went and got his suitcase
    he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
    last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005

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    Mr. Key

    Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
    But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?
    25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
    Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress

    Mr. Write

    yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
    but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
    to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
    when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
    he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
    last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005

    i got writey-poo here

    v/ write

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    Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
    But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?

    vs

    to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
    when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster



    imo.... and the doper punch is W.Rites.

    v/W.Rite

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    next level, check the roster line hands down best of the battle

    dope shit

    v/ w.rite
    .. im back

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    vote W. Rite eassssssssy

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    25 to Life, ya age coincides with ya chronic stay on RB
    I guess your lifes' jus not Write........without a damn IP

    decent. write nameplays = played.

    Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
    But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?

    good. lol.

    You got a smooth drive to victory, d/r's will always vote for ya
    Makin my chances of winning a shot in the dark...
    ................................that hit rites black ass in Georgia

    nope. seen the 'shot' thing a lot, and this wasnt a good variation of it.

    25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
    Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress

    good.

    A gentle-man match is the perfect type, you've been soft for years
    So its always a treat to see u Rite.....when all ur cookies are cleared!

    another nameplay? write nameplays = played. you should've already known this.

    A comeback? Its too late bitch, ur times done jus logg off the site
    Cause every one gets a turn at Greatness.....to bad ya Mista write
    a decent line. good nameplay, but half your lines here have been nameplays..im tired of seeing them.

    your main flaw was way too many nameplays. the work in progress and the DM/ Deja vu thing were both good bars, the rest was blah.


    you aint a serious threat to me, cus I’m so raw and past fame
    the naked eye might think you’re dope, until it saw your last name
    decent.

    yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
    but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
    again, decent. seen the steal thing before, decent variation.

    to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
    when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
    good..

    step ya game up pimp...take my advice...before its too late
    told him to get his shit together... he went and got his suitcase
    lol, nice.

    he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
    last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005
    filler..

    write, you barely beat this guy. both of you had two good lines in my eyes, writes next level line was the best of the battle i thought. mr key could've won this if he had dropped some of those nameplays, they got old fast, like three months ago theyw ere old.. had u dropped some of those and come up with some above average stuff instead you would've won.but this was actually a good battle, 4/10 bars from each were good, im not complaining.

    v/ write

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    i dont see how this was an 'easy' win... am i crazy?

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    Check the roster. Only good line of battle.
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    it wasn't an easy win for write. both had two good bars, but the rest of mr. key's stuff hurt him, i.e. all the write nameplays. thats why write won. but if the other voters think he won easy, they think he won easy. either vote yourself or don't post about it.

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    ^Word, thanks center, but its all about learnin from my mistakes tho, gotta get outta the jr. mentality, lol, good battle Write, 1
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    Key gave em a nice challenge, but i got a seat on the bandwagon too here.. write got this..

    Deja Vu line was your best Key .. but your closer, felt it was pretty forced. had a interesting idea to it though.


    write had more quotables, and a stronger verse.. roster line, and opener was humorous.. just came better imo.

    good battle though.

    v/ write

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