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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    penmenship(hit n run)

    ARTIST:NONCENTZ
    ALBUM:MOST GIFTED LOSER
    TRACK:PENMENSHIP verse 1 of 3

    ay yo,
    i teach lessons, speak blessings, leave you dijesting
    my dick resson in a session.
    i'll rip you using franchises as my weapon
    NONCENTZ stay handing out beef in the booth like consession.
    who ever testen get the death penalty like a leathel injection
    im that hot if you survive you die by second smoke injestion.
    it's noncentz the flaming legend 757 reppin
    who in 7 bars will show those of you half steppin
    the "stairway to heaven" on a remix with led zepplin
    i'm still spitting flames~on~lames using my oxegen~for~propain
    leaven legions~stained with 3 dergee lesions~in~pain
    or turned to debree~it's~insain......you played yourself like a game
    so your ending credits give acredit to akklaim.
    most of you cant picture the mindframe. or face it your wack
    i could sponsor toilet paper and you wouldnt shit on my name.
    in fact.....
    im about to react like napalm elements/when they impact/
    if you insult my intellegeance/ i'll reinact andl recreate the events /
    that almost wiped hiroshima off the map.
    high jack your train~of~thought and switch your tracks
    from rap to pop singles only printed on wax and adats.
    turn your daps to bitch slaps .....in the form of a high five
    so anyone claiming your ill will have they hand break out in hives.
    your like a lesbians thighs with a man inside.
    trying to act sly on the slide till your fake lives collide.
    that coinsides with career suicide and i pleed guilty of genocide
    cause we both emcees and my homicide '
    on you is the reason your career wont survive.
    but i took an oath i qoute before i get in the booth
    toexpose those foes that deep throat so with no hope
    they couldnt spit wisdom if i knocked out they back tooth.
    im uncooth and spit rhymes your career couldnt recoupe
    have you spoonen your boy in the form of a scoupe
    and beat your ass reptetively like an ending song loop

    hook: you need to check your penmanship
    signing a contract dont gaurentee you memebership
    or hip hop fellowship....
    on the average your either recycled your garbage
    so takes your 5 cents in cash or get back in the trash.
    this the comeback where real rap and wack clash
    real emcees is the new wave making a splash
    like noahs arch for the half heart...
    fo the real this the first strike to take back the art.
    Last edited by noncentz; January 24th, 2005 at 08:13 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    okay i edited the other 2 verses out to make it easier for you l;azy fucks that dont read
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    honestly the verse kinda bored me, decent structure...but just not any great lines as far as text go...now on audio it might SOUND good...all im sayin is as far as text it doesnt look good.

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    damn no one reads
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    tight drop bro.......i liked the openin lines!....good structure and ill disagree with Rodge....it aint borin'........
    VERBAL INTERCOURSE

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    people just be sleepin on yo shit............lol...............nobody reads long verses anymore.. this was dope man..........but because its an actuall verse to a song just put it on audio for all these lazy fucks...................good flow and everything just put it on audio...........stay up man

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    gd drop word i liked, as far as there bein no gd lines thats bullshit, the lines i thought where best where:

    "i could sponsor toilet paper and you wouldnt shit on my name."

    and

    "high jack your train~of~thought and switch your tracks"

    keep reppin word

    PEACE

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    Thanks Im Debating Weather Or Not To Post The Other 2 Verses
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    this shit was hot dogg...i dont know what the fuck that Rodge guy was talkin about!!!!I saw some really hot lines in this piece...shit would really be hot for a audio...hot drop dogg keep it up

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    well hit me up twin i have a remix that id like to collab
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thanks for the love
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    was feelin' this....are you the same W~P from mrblunt? if so, its ya boy S-Nova....if not, i'll just look dumb. Back to the crit tho', had nice concepts and vocab, was kinda lost on the flow, some didnt rhyme, maybe its MY accent. Overall I was feelin it tho, keep droppin.
    Last edited by Veto; January 25th, 2005 at 09:59 PM Reason: clicked submit early on acc.

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