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Last edited by Richard Parker; August 20th, 2014 at 09:09 AM
Dope message. Nice rhyming. All around the content was good in this. Really liked it. Sorry for my lack of feed, but I gotta get ready for a soccer game.
Po'Ethics - Est. 2004
soccer games = ill
unless you don't score
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If I capitalize the title to this, will it get more replies ?
this flowed real nice
I was feelin it
I liked the messages u put in here
nice multies too
stay up and keep droppin
BEST OF YJ
Holla at cha Boi
Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga
Can't Forget yall
Luv sick
I can't Believe It(RIP Denise)
where is MTC in maryland ?
MTC is MonTgemory County
BEST OF YJ
Holla at cha Boi
Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga
Can't Forget yall
Luv sick
I can't Believe It(RIP Denise)
oh, I live in Baltimore.
Guess It Is
...What? - Feeble
I Don't Need A Sig?
See, this is the type of shit I'm hoping to be capable of in a few months. This was a well written piece, and the subject matter accents the style and finesse in this piece.
Nice, Feeble. Just...nice.
since you havent really gotten any feed on this i will drop a lil.
alright it was good. in some parts i got kinda turned off becuase it sounded like a childrens book. i dunno some of the multi's seemed a little elementary. the message you delievered was nice. i like the story that went along with it. the vocab was a little subpar, but not bad because it fit the tone of the story. at some points you made it seem like this happened all in one day and in other parts it seemed like this was almost an ongoing thing between aquantinces..< i cant spell........... overall i liked it. the end two lines really saved this piece. it was good but that was just enough to make it good enough to be self nominated....lol.... at least i know why you did that know it sucks getting no feed... speaking of that......would you please return the favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166753
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good message............i liked the vissual you gave........nice flow...........nothin bad to say about this at all
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...1&page=1&pp=15
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^ No. why ? you dropped two lines of feed, and probably didn't read the piece. so, go to hell.
It was good. You did well on vocab. Good message and keep being yourself. Structure was good and you have potential. Keep dropping. Good ending.
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