10 lines min
Due "right now"
No feeding
thedopestmutha
Furious Stylez
10 lines min
Due "right now"
No feeding
aiight yo..checkin in. ur startin right
slap this fool like a...
Pregnant bitch, watch me leave his waters burst/
Battle me? You must be thedumbestmutha to ever walk the earth//
he's tough? I have him switchin ideals/
when I put him under pressure like a fat bitches high-heels//
Don't worry, It'll be over soon hoe/
When I gash you and used barbwire to sew the wound closed//
Use a meathook to spear your mangled flesh/
and display you as a trophy kill from here to Bangladesh//
shatter bones when I smash your sorry ass/
But I know your a fan, so I'll autograph your body cast//
You come up short, like I left your knees severed/
Now watch me feed what's left this stupid 'mutha' into a tree-shredder//
i read ur rymes, theyre all right, id even class them fine/
but wat u stealin 4 bitch give ashanti back her lines/
fuck sorry........i leant on my keyboard and hit enter. that aint my spit tho
Make sure to add a reference for that Ashanti thing, cos I have no idea what you're talking about...
this aint even a battle imma just fuck u then flee/
cuz u rap like ur a bitch not another mc/
my rymes cut u like butter, its just the gutter in me/
i slice thru ur bones like chainsaws u just stutter and see/
the 'dope's' the only difference between ur mother and me/
cuz she fucked u just like i did on this topical beat/
so for reference, i suggest that u remember wat my name is/
to tell the feds how i fucked u like a lyrical rapist/
ur a pussy, u got a track listing on every gay mans playlist/
i look at u and see wat the defenition of a fake is/
i strip ur credebility like ur house gets stripped by bailiffs/
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Soul Syphon vs. thedopestmutha
Upping for votes please (#1)
Not much else to say, could someone please vote on this? Is this 50 characters?...Ahhh.
Pregnant bitch, watch me leave his waters burst/
Battle me? You must be thedumbestmutha to ever walk the earth//
Not really witty, doesnt show much here 3/10
he's tough? I have him switchin ideals/
when I put him under pressure like a fat bitches high-heels//
A little played, Ive heard that before 2/10
Don't worry, It'll be over soon hoe/
When I gash you and used barbwire to sew the wound closed//
Hoe and Closed doesnt ryme, But better then your first 2 bars 4/10
Use a meathook to spear your mangled flesh/
and display you as a trophy kill from here to Bangladesh//
=/ Still not getting strong punches in. 4/10
shatter bones when I smash your sorry ass/
But I know your a fan, so I'll autograph your body cast//
Nice, best of the battle. It should have been your closer tho 8/10
You come up short, like I left your knees severed/
Now watch me feed what's left this stupid 'mutha' into a tree-shredder//
Ummm not great for the closing bar =/ 5/10
Overall 5/10, he didnt show a whole lot, but the body cast bar was pretty nice
this aint even a battle imma just fuck u then flee/
cuz u rap like ur a bitch not another mc/
Fillers 2/10
my rymes cut u like butter, its just the gutter in me/
i slice thru ur bones like chainsaws u just stutter and see/
Hmmm it isnt too bad but It doesnt make me think on it or laugh.... 5/10
the 'dope's' the only difference between ur mother and me/
cuz she fucked u just like i did on this topical beat/
Nah you need to get some good metaphores in here... 3/10
so for reference, i suggest that u remember wat my name is/
to tell the feds how i fucked u like a lyrical rapist/
I got to admit its pretty funny 6/10
ur a pussy, u got a track listing on every gay mans playlist/
i look at u and see wat the defenition of a fake is/
i strip ur credebility like ur house gets stripped by bailiffs
Thats your best Metaphore in the Verse and its not great, the "Definition of Fake is"
Lines are so played out its pathetic... 5/10
Overall 5/10
Vote/ Ferious for more use of metaphores, they werent great but at least he has an Idea of what hes doing
uppin this. pls vote
uppin this again.
F.styles
Pregnant bitch, watch me leave his waters burst/
Battle me? You must be thedumbestmutha to ever walk the earth//
^^Good punch and nameplay
he's tough? I have him switchin ideals/
when I put him under pressure like a fat bitches high-heels//
^^lol but a lil played
Don't worry, It'll be over soon hoe/
When I gash you and used barbwire to sew the wound closed//
^^No real punch just threat
Use a meathook to spear your mangled flesh/
and display you as a trophy kill from here to Bangladesh//
^^Eh not really feelin it
shatter bones when I smash your sorry ass/
But I know your a fan, so I'll autograph your body cast//
^^Eh nah not feelin that
You come up short, like I left your knees severed/
Now watch me feed what's left this stupid 'mutha' into a tree-shredder//
^^Nah man........
thedopestmutha
this aint even a battle imma just fuck u then flee/
cuz u rap like ur a bitch not another mc/
^^eh not feelin that man
my rymes cut u like butter, its just the gutter in me/
i slice thru ur bones like chainsaws u just stutter and see/
^^Eh
the 'dope's' the only difference between ur mother and me/
cuz she fucked u just like i did on this topical beat/
^^eh good nameplay on your name
so for reference, i suggest that u remember wat my name is/
to tell the feds how i fucked u like a lyrical rapist/
^^Decent
ur a pussy, u got a track listing on every gay mans playlist/
i look at u and see wat the defenition of a fake is/
^^lol good punch
i strip ur credebility like ur house gets stripped by bailiffs/
^^Eh
This battle was decent i think both of you did okay but i think thedopestmutha took this because he was more consistant.................
Vote- thedopestmutha
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furious-
slap this fool like a...
Pregnant bitch, watch me leave his waters burst/
Battle me? You must be thedumbestmutha to ever walk the earth//
ok opener
he's tough? I have him switchin ideals/
when I put him under pressure like a fat bitches high-heels//
lol
Don't worry, It'll be over soon hoe/
When I gash you and used barbwire to sew the wound closed//
ouch..lol
Use a meathook to spear your mangled flesh/
and display you as a trophy kill from here to Bangladesh//
uhh nah
shatter bones when I smash your sorry ass/
But I know your a fan, so I'll autograph your body cast//
good flow, no diss
You come up short, like I left your knees severed/
Now watch me feed what's left this stupid 'mutha' into a tree-shredder//
wut is this horrorcore...lol
overall 3.5/10
thedopest-
this aint even a battle imma just fuck u then flee/
cuz u rap like ur a bitch not another mc/
uhh aight
my rymes cut u like butter, its just the gutter in me/
i slice thru ur bones like chainsaws u just stutter and see/
good wrdplay, no diss
the 'dope's' the only difference between ur mother and me/
cuz she fucked u just like i did on this topical beat/
wtf, nah
so for reference, i suggest that u remember wat my name is/
to tell the feds how i fucked u like a lyrical rapist/
nah no lyrical that's weak
ur a pussy, u got a track listing on every gay mans playlist/
i look at u and see wat the defenition of a fake is/
ok diss
i strip ur credebility like ur house gets stripped by bailiffs/
uhh ok.
overall 2/10
Furious came more creative but both needed better punches not just gruesome disses. This looked like a horrocore battle but i'm grading on it bein a regular one. so, furious had the more appealin verse with a couple ok disses.
vote-furious
yo uppin this agian!!!!!!! leave links 2 ur threads and ill vote in them
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