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  1. January 10th, 2005, 01:32 PM #1
    Mistral
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    genocide/suicide

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164645
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164781









    Kid ya dead, and I'm not talking about ya head gear, but with that said...
    You beatin me? ..the day you'll win would be when Jesus and hell-met!...
    Fuck this fake whore, He's so jealous of me im gonna make him hate more...
    From the way my punches are balancing on his lip just call'em a skateboard...
    Dissing me wasnt smart...Cause i'll give your sorry ass more complications...
    Cause this bitch is covered with so many sores hes a gential wart patient...
    Leaving him seeing the stars and planets with his alignment outta orbit...
    Knocking him over to the ground with the white towel ready to forfeit...
    Jaw all swollen and battered i'll just cock it back and let it swell up...
    Packing hits so fresh for your mouth i make listerine pocket paks jealous...
    ...
    Now the fact at hand isnt really a important issue
    ...when he has yet to even battle a DECENT text head..
    I guess that wouldnt really change even if i dissed you...
    Last edited by Mistral; January 10th, 2005 at 02:11 PM
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  2. January 10th, 2005, 01:36 PM #2
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    last 2 bars and skateboard were dope my man...blat blat blat beefs on.

    *straps on his belt and gets his ak*

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  3. January 10th, 2005, 01:38 PM #3
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks. - K


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  4. January 10th, 2005, 01:40 PM #4
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    haha...oh yes the links lol dont close it!!!
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  5. January 10th, 2005, 03:33 PM #5
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    Nice work......wordplay was there.... flow was nice ...the skateboard and listerine lines was killin em. Good work
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  6. January 10th, 2005, 03:36 PM #6
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    is that a link

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  7. January 11th, 2005, 02:03 AM #7
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    Thanks for the feedback Return, appreciate it.

    And no Infah_Redd that isnt a valid link. lol
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  8. January 11th, 2005, 03:31 AM #8
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    Haha. . .flow was nice, punches were there... skateboard line, nice...overal this was good.. nice drop
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  9. January 11th, 2005, 04:51 AM #9
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    this was weak. i didnt like it at all.
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  10. January 11th, 2005, 06:01 AM #10
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    Fuck this fake whore, He's so jealous of me im gonna make him hate more
    From the way my punches are balancing on his lip just call'em a skateboard
    Dissing me wasnt smart...Cause i'll give your sorry ass more complications
    Cause this bitch is covered with so many sores hes a gential wart patient

    /\/\those lines were good/\/\

    Now the fact at hand isnt really a important issue
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    when he has yet to even battle a DECENT text head
    I guess that wouldnt really change even if i dissed you

    /\/\this was good too/\/\
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  11. January 11th, 2005, 08:41 AM #11
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    this wasn't all that good don't see how cats be crawlin up ur buttox...it wasn't bad either but u didn't kill him like some of these miaus said....respectable nuttin more...pz
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  12. January 12th, 2005, 12:10 PM #12
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    ^^^^^
    Agree 100%
    i liked the listerine line but the multi seem'd a bit forced...the scate board line was meah....but this was not something to be ashamed of, i liked it. just not a 10 like a 6 or something.....
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  13. January 12th, 2005, 02:05 PM #13
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    Good shit here...

    A bit lacking in punchlines...but I know you don't battle.

    This was a good, aggresive type of thing I don't normally see from you.

    Needs set ups and punchlines, like I stated a second ago...

    But you got good descriptive insults, that need better wording, but you wouldn't be a half bad battler if you applied yourself, man.

    "Skateboard" was nice..."Listerine" was a nice meta/self prop.

    Enjoyable...

    Peace
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  14. January 13th, 2005, 02:12 AM #14
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    Thanks guys! I had to edit out a bar or else most of you would know who it was too haha
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