lookin 4 sum commentsz

[Destiny]

this Diamond cummin str8 from da hood i spit wun verse n i got u shook/.

i shine the brightest,rhymes is the tightest tighter than a baby's eyelids/.

Im the streets disciple ma words hotter den the earthes core fuck it

i hurt more people then the first world war/ Nuhkaz who step 2 dis

bette cum correct cuz i b flippin quick enough 2 fit a wun hour rap

on a minute track/ im a lyrical livin legend i rap undergroundz im da

queen but just like 50 said i aint been crowend/ if u got a glass jaw

shut yo mouth/ i crush yo bones slam u in the dirt any bitch who

battles me is guarenteed to end up hurt/ im unstoppable

i'll make you self destruct like a message in mission impossible/

i dont talk shit unless i could back it up n no bitch wants 2 fight me

cause she get smacked the fuc up/

[CrazyCarl]

This was alright. Put your lines in single space, and start the next line after the rhyming word. Saw "im da queen", took me a second, then realized you were a chick. Some things didn't rhyme, but keep at it.

[Destiny]

lOlz yea ima gurl im da underground queen like i said i aint been crowned lolz.. im still tryna get ma game up b4 i start battling so i kno i got a shot at it..these niiggaz in here r really good n i dont cum up 2 sum1 unless i cum correct .. feel me?

[Destiny]

Im destiny the killa queen i have no fear/

bicthes quick 2 talk shit but afraid 2 cum near/

My flowz so tight and my stylez tha best i give u 1 verse n put at rest/

shorty fuck the rest this is between me and u, i'll take yo man n keep

mines 2/ Mami wake up n realize u trailer trash ur style is whack

i spit so phast makes u wish u can thrOwback/

iz gunna b continued.. aight gimme ur commentz no hattin but still speak da truth

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Destiny]

oo aight

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163298

[Charli Brown]

Im destiny the killa queen i have no fear/

bicthes quick 2 talk shit but afraid 2 cum near/

My flowz so tight and my stylez tha best i give u 1 verse n put at rest/

shorty fuck the rest this is between me and u, i'll take yo man n keep

mines 2/ Mami wake up n realize u trailer trash ur style is whack

i spit so phast makes u wish u can thrOwback/

iz gunna b continued.. aight gimme ur commentz no hattin but still speak da truth

U on da right track mami, jus try n put more focus n emphasis on yur message n spits..arato...