I'm Still Here(feedback needed)
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I'm droppin this track to let RB know that I and my crew are still here and we ain't leavin for a while so....
We started the expansion on our way to hi rise
Washin the good with the bad through waves and tides,
We had our ups and downs but yet we're still around
Joined plenty of other sites to keep my skillz sound,
we get posts in the forum proposed as questions
"Is Kritikal still around?","How some you guys never wreck shit",
Our image has projected so far and so wide
No matter how bad or good, and we continue to survive,
But we're holdin by a thread and we all continue to thrive,
Only a few are active, dunno about the otehr guys
I ain't gon tell no lies our crew may meet its demise,
But I'm still here through my tribulations and tries
My trials in all its forms takin in occurences in stride,
And no matter what they say It's on me I've had to rely
Inisde-out I've made good where my names mentioned and implied,
I have to say I have enjoyed what I've been a part of
To what Kritikal is now all the way back to the start of,
I've been growin and get smarter elevatin and gettin stronger
And with every verse I drop I get better and verses longer,
I'm keepin the crew goin like a string of White Tee's
I've made friends and enemies and don't care if you like me,
I just wanna make my music exciting and frightening
To those in the path of where I may be striking,
And those who choose to fght me no names shall be mentioned
But when I rhyme I'd just like to exit all worldly dimesnions,
But the tensions holdin me back which soon i will release
Def is here but his crews influence never seems to increase,
I dunno what I'll do but for now I'm stayin and droppin
To help my active members and keep whatevers fryin poppin,
Knowin I'm not stoppin I'll hope that noone get in my way
No approaches me with somethin in the form of complaints,
Well anyways now that you know how it is I'd like to say one thing
Kritikal and Def is still around and we all doin our thing
From elevation to droppin in Open Mic....
And we gon keep doin our thing before our reputation gets hyped....
I know it may be off topic from time to time and all but...it was just my feelins down and dropped for another OM and to let everyone know that we and I are still here however things go from now on...peaceezy...
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Originally Posted by Def by mouf
