dont get it confused

[warchild]

all the sensitive ears would love to hang me quick/
other rappers lyrics sag more than a grannys tits/
ive got a bad head but the best flow/
i'll shoot you with a flair gun and watch ya chest glow/
i just kidnapped a bitch, got paid, but it was hardly a ransom/
yo, i kill more pregnant bitches than charlie manson/
i just ripped out someones throat, they wish they could whispher/
now im gonna put em head first through a wood chipper/
then start laughing at the brain and skull/
im always gonna be underground cause fame is dull/
i got a lot of problems so i leave throats slit/
im on my way to rome to make the pope sick/
i spit hot rhymes over thirty beats/
the devils watching me, gods watching the dirty priests/
my knife is scarring crews/
my rhymes are eating muthafuckas like arwin mewes/

there aint no mc as cold as me/
some people respect but some people detest my poetry/
im welsh, but dont confuse me with dylan thomas/
im more than mental, all my rhymes are a written promise/
i make fake fucks cry and brutes edgy/
they fuck with me they better have their suits ready/
im for the psychos like me, who light weed/
im the shit, you and ya crews hype g/
i smash little rascals off the face of the earth/
my flows are unbeatable yours are waiting for birth/
im not happy so im about to kill tommorow/
lifes more than a bitch, and its a hard pill to swallow/
if you my enemy you may run/
then i'll leave you with more holes than saddam hussains sons/
listen bitch im living in a padded cell/
im bouncing off the walls mad as hell/

this is just another couple of verses i wrote a while back just a couple of punchlines i thought ud like, my structure is off a bit on these verses but my flow is as tight as ever, wattup.

[The Drifter]

Lol.. pretty dope man.

my knife is scarring crews/
my rhymes are eating muthafuckas like arwin mewes/

When I read that I like was like 'Ooooooooooooooooo.. shit!!' Classic.

Good flow as always.. some nice lines in there man.. good shit.

Peep the Poetic Scriptures forum.. the only thing I've posted is in there.. I upped it earlier.

[warchild]

links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161583
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161742

[warchild]

for all you who read this arwin mewes was that guy he killed and ate a guy that he met on the internet i think he was from germany or something, and dylan thomas was a poet from wales just thought id tell you so u will understand the punchlines.

[YoungTuan]

that shit was hot...keep up the good work

[Jay Mel]

good flow and shit, keep up the work

[freshouttaafrica]

i was feelin that shit i aint get nothing tiwsited good punches too
it was tough for me to catch the flow but you need to stop with the nursery like flow glow quick tits you should like keep rhyming with words that sound similar to eachother holla atcha boii

[Chronic Cancer]

Yo Warchild, Dope as hell, Keep up the good work, oh yea, good overall verses, good emotion, how it should be done. yo hit my battle with F.A.M. up....

[Dan Dare]

One of provoke's homeboys eh? Dopeness..

Well this is okay you know - nothing amazing, a couple of hilarious lines I liked a lot, but pretty simple rhyming structures, overall, and some of it was just blegh.. pretty good stuff in places though, cause I really don't know how long you've been doing this for. I think you have some potential. Keep writing my man.

[VETERAN]

SOund like a punchline rapper verse. You had some good punches in there, only thing is you would start a certain topic with the first half of the bar and then say some unrelated shit on the end of the bar. I think you should just make your bars on the same topic. I'm not good with names so i didnt know that arwin meres guy but nice punches, pretty good.

[warchild]

cool thanks for the replies, i was getting slept on when i first started posting but now people are starting to recognise me which is cool. these verses i post up on here are just my funny rhymes, i think my deeper stuff is much better but like i said b 4 i dont like 2 b serious all the time i like doing punchlines, metaphors the lot, much appreciated all ya replies id like a couple more though, my next post will be deeper peace.

[Omniscient]

Shit was hot man....like da flow and the vocab in it....hot punchlines in it too...nice drop man...keep it comin dogg

[Ghetto28]

Nigga that shit was ILL ----------- 1

[Hailstorm]

it was funny and had great flow the rhymes were smooth. only one complaint: you cant just use couplets, use the same rhyme pattern more than just twice. other than that that shit was sick

[F.A.M.]

okay the beginnin started off with the gratuidist(spellcheck) violence,,kill a bitch all that but then you picked it up real quick with i started feelin it it wasnt no eyday gangsta kill rap ya know what im sayin ...u started insertin real life events bout dirty priests and hussain son...you carried that it was a good drop...