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  1. December 22nd, 2004, 02:55 PM #1
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    The power of the pen

    It’s an alibi escaping death masking perception
    unstable intentions are too insecure to mention
    so the pen is my tool to vent with for forever
    never gonna give up the art that tethers together
    my cerebral artist and logic are unstoppable
    like Jordan breaking away to an open goal
    I dunk conception of life and it’s mysteries
    masterfully mastering many monumental miseries
    altruistic ambitions absorbing all ambit arteries
    clotting pain in its path and conjoining dissonance
    the tool seems silent but look through the messages
    gifts given by the gifted gave me the subliminal
    so I mold and control with meaning unbeknown
    im the foam atop the oceans waves I stay exposed
    prone to change outlooks like blind mens white poles
    polar capsules, begin forming inside my mind
    then the idea is broken into water over the time
    the water allows the octopus to live and breathe
    secreted ink goes from in him to the pen I need
    proceed to grip and put to paper with pen strokes
    change the world without ever having a word spoke
    finish my formulated final and watch the pen smoke
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  2. December 22nd, 2004, 04:12 PM #2
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    upping real quick before i go to work i will get links tonight
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...09#post1926809
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161758
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  3. December 22nd, 2004, 04:20 PM #3
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    i like this, matter of fact i like it a lot. it was real nice vocab, flow could have been better maybe if you worded a few things differently, but it was still crisp. really felt it, cept i don't know what "ambit arteries" means, maybe i'm an ignorant asshole tho, so don't sweat it. hit me up:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post1926673
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  4. December 22nd, 2004, 10:12 PM #4
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    damn i wish i was like that lol
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  5. December 23rd, 2004, 03:31 AM #5
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    lol thanks gentlemen
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  6. December 23rd, 2004, 10:47 AM #6
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    ok sup the opener fo this is phenomenal jsut took me in quick

    It’s an alibi escaping death masking perception
    unstable intentions are too insecure to mention
    so the pen is my tool to vent with for forever
    never gonna give up the art that tethers together

    You know how to say FIRE .... lol shit that was hot

    my cerebral artist and logic are unstoppable
    like Jordan breaking away to an open goal

    i didnt like that at all .... i mean good vocab in there no duobt , but it didnt ryhme


    I dunk conception of life and it’s mysteries
    masterfully mastering many monumental miseries

    DAAAAMMMNN great wordplay and fucking great vocab

    im the foam atop the oceans waves I stay exposed
    prone change outlooks like blind mens white poles


    im don lol this is great 10 outa 10

    it goes on like that for the reas of you verse to good ....


    show the love backhere
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  7. December 23rd, 2004, 11:39 AM #7
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    this was tight, the flow was average but the rhymes just flowed well bar after bar, u used a lot of big words some i didnt know wat they meant, hey i never went 2 school so my vocabs limited, it was a tight post, peace.
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  8. December 23rd, 2004, 01:15 PM #8
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    thanks for the feed fellas
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  9. December 23rd, 2004, 01:35 PM #9
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    damn my got dropped right after i upped it.
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  10. December 24th, 2004, 02:30 AM #10
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    can i please get some more feed
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  11. December 25th, 2004, 03:21 AM #11
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    upping again
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  12. December 25th, 2004, 03:08 PM #12
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  13. December 25th, 2004, 04:21 PM #13
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    Good Shit Man, I Liked It, Especailly The Comlex Vocab, I Had To Have A Dictionary In Front Of Me To Comprehend Some Of Overall Good Post Keep It Up.
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  14. December 26th, 2004, 11:53 PM #14
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    thanks uppin
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  15. December 27th, 2004, 05:11 PM #15
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    sadly this is my last up i really want some solid feed for this so can you please gimme a lil something.
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