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10-16 lines
No crew/hate/dikeride
No recycling/biting
Your ass is first due in 30 minutes
Look lets get 4 real beating off is not a sin so how can u label urself a sinner//
I label my self a winner cus i massacre Flyweights like you, u cant fly like a butterfly my shells will hit you//
ill cut ur whole face open if you tell me you crip to//
But lets stop all this hood talk let me attack you with subliminal content that'll make u nervous//
Superb spit birthed like it was my semen u fag always tryna see men//
And how u come back when u was never noticed like mase from harlem and i quote this "you wasnt welcome in the first place so how we welcome you b ack" u some fat faggit nigga that think he can rap//
and after battles fuck a dap u will get smacked//
Dude sn is drsoss learn to spell put ur face in a shell//
My first rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154874
For a noob your shit aint too shabby.. but for blues man not rapping,
I don't give a fuck about what your packing.. but in the Bronx "things are happening,"
Yeah things like your verses.. Reppin the ultra wack,
Cuz people could tell your nervous.. But we need to cut ya some slack,
Your still in the learning stage.. I guess it's slow development,
I can't blame you for your rage.. I'd get pissed too if my raps were delicate,
See you comment on my spelling.. you can't even spell school, (look in his info)
Over that you've been dwelling.. you recover off faggot drool,
Was your rap 10 lines?.. I don't think so,
Here's your only chance to shine.. you blew it though,
Lemme end this right now.. before i waste my skills on you,
Not that I'll run out.. But it's best to conserve, before I hurt you.
Ok Uppin #1 Folks.. Also Check Out My Sig For My Other Battles
UPPIN TWICE.. again check out my other battles
good all around spittin i can't yet vote but when i can my vote will be goin 2 ssinnerisback just beacuse he did just about grabb it for me he expanded his vocab more n explained his arguments more werent that many punchlines all around but when there were again ssinnerisback dun better on them 2
Ego
Look lets get 4 real beating off is not a sin so how can u label urself a sinner//
I label my self a winner cus i massacre Flyweights like you, u cant fly like a butterfly my shells will hit you//
Yeah quite good,
ill cut ur whole face open if you tell me you crip to//
But lets stop all this hood talk let me attack you with subliminal content that'll make u nervous//
hmmm not sure!!
Superb spit birthed like it was my semen u fag always tryna see men//
And how u come back when u was never noticed like mase from harlem and i quote this "you wasnt welcome in the first place so how we welcome you b ack" u some fat faggit nigga that think he can rap//
first line was funny the rest was good.
and after battles fuck a dap u will get smacked//
Dude sn is drsoss learn to spell put ur face in a shell//
nah, but if that was your first rhyme!!!fuckin welll done!!
ssinnerisback
Yeah things like your verses.. Reppin the ultra wack,
Cuz people could tell your nervous.. But we need to cut ya some slack,
A better opener
Your still in the learning stage.. I guess it's slow development,
I can't blame you for your rage.. I'd get pissed too if my raps were delicate,
okay, didnt rearly rhyme
See you comment on my spelling.. you can't even spell school, (look in his info)
Over that you've been dwelling.. you recover off faggot drool,
nah didnt rearly like that
Was your rap 10 lines?.. I don't think so,
Here's your only chance to shine.. you blew it though,
yeah..i supose!
Lemme end this right now.. before i waste my skills on you,
Not that I'll run out.. But it's best to conserve, before I hurt you.
Poor ending.
i think that you both did well, ego bourght some hot shit for a newb but ssinnerisback won it wid experience, some more elevated vocab and some good personals,
please vote or leave feed back on my battle wid jay uu ego!
"Ayo the lyrical law, like you dont already know"
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lol emceed u voted 4 him coz he voted 4 you lmao oj dog.... lol we need more voters innit
You both did okay... I felt ego's but he ruined the whole goddamn thing with his extra long lines. Completely wack'd it. Sinner you had a couple good personals.
Ego - meh, good punches and all. but fucked it up with your lines:
"Look lets get 4 real beating off is not a sin so how can u label urself a sinner//
I label my self a winner cus i massacre Flyweights like you, u cant fly like a butterfly my shells will hit you//" first line lost my vote. 4.6/10
Sinner - Punches were average, But at least you had a personal and didnt spit it incorrectly. Rhymed you with you though. Kind of evened out my voting. But I have to admit you aint wack the fuck out of it. 5/10
v/ ssinnerisback No hate Ego its just for your first spit you need to prepare it right.
Uppin #3 you people.. i'll hit ya'll back i promise you
Ego:
Look lets get 4 real beating off is not a sin so how can u label urself a sinner//
I label my self a winner cus i massacre Flyweights like you, u cant fly like a butterfly my shells will hit you//
^ looked good at first but lost it
ill cut ur whole face open if you tell me you crip to//
But lets stop all this hood talk let me attack you with subliminal content that'll make u nervous//
^ iight
Superb spit birthed like it was my semen u fag always tryna see men//
And how u come back when u was never noticed like mase from harlem and i quote this "you wasnt welcome in the first place so how we welcome you b ack" u some fat faggit nigga that think he can rap//
^ dont know what your bars are lol iight though
and after battles fuck a dap u will get smacked//
Dude sn is drsoss learn to spell put ur face in a shell//
My first rhyme
for a noob not bad but need to work on your lines they are horrible cant find your bars......
Sinner:
For a noob your shit aint too shabby.. but for blues man not rapping,
I don't give a fuck about what your packing.. but in the Bronx "things are happening,"
^ good first line went bad on the second
Yeah things like your verses.. Reppin the ultra wack,
Cuz people could tell your nervous.. But we need to cut ya some slack,
^ nice kinda stretched
Your still in the learning stage.. I guess it's slow development,
I can't blame you for your rage.. I'd get pissed too if my raps were delicate,
^ nice
See you comment on my spelling.. you can't even spell school, (look in his info)
Over that you've been dwelling.. you recover off faggot drool,
^ lol nice
Was your rap 10 lines?.. I don't think so,
Here's your only chance to shine.. you blew it though,
^ not feelin
Lemme end this right now.. before i waste my skills on you,
Not that I'll run out.. But it's best to conserve, before I hurt you.
^ iight ending
this was a good battle both came out realy good just thought that ego lost flow and his bars was messed but good fight ego
V. sinner
i would have to vote ego because it is his first rhyme and he knew exactly how to land those punchlines. his lyrical and rhyming ability was nice, also i liked sinner's because he did better than usual. nice to see you elavatin', keep at it, you might be able to call me out one day, lol. just kiddin bro, but this is what i like to see, ego, i can tell your goin places, call me out some time. v-ego
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Uppin #4 right here.. vote and leave a link
ERRRRRRRG... I HATE USING MY LAST UP! somebody vote please and we could get this over with
ego you started off okay with an okay diss had ok structure..culd been better flow though..and it got wack from the middle to end bars were stretched. work on structure and punches.
ssineer you had an ok spitt, pretty consistent with flow and disses..they were really simple but effective enough to get this win.
vote-ssinner
hit my battles up in the sig, thanx
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