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Thread: Need for Speed

  1. December 15th, 2004, 03:58 AM #1
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    Need for Speed

    Need for Speed

    It’s beautiful, as street lights replicate shades of metal
    Across an ecliptic flicker of shifts from break to pedal
    A meadow, grown amid the interior of mobile fantasies
    In a self created world that holds no soul or man to see
    My own reality, driven by the grace of blissful twitches
    Wrist to wrist twisted to hit each fifth of encrypted digits
    Switched incision, to pick which geared engine will give it
    As I sit to fix the mix of scripts that mends what sick is
    Depict this, cerulean skies reflecting stars on hot nights
    Dropped right to stop sight and fading me on spot light
    I top heights, speedometer cracked as I gain clearance
    My smile widened by the designs unfeigned appearance
    It’s I who steers it, controlled by my both my own hands
    May not be known to no man, but I hope to grow fans
    This whole Land, can stand in awe to graze my escape
    As I pave my own ways in the cultivations we’ve made
    Curb to curvatures traced, at my own God envied pace
    Draped like concrete with defeats, as I top every race
    But my stomach drops, I lose sight of this driven image
    As my houses power went out…and took my PS2 with it


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  2. December 15th, 2004, 04:42 AM #2
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    pieces i touched...

    sonik...darker lights

    djb...his religious piece

    drop links and feed. thanks.


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  3. December 15th, 2004, 05:31 AM #3
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    Legendary.
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  4. December 15th, 2004, 07:13 AM #4
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    that was sum nice shit there man, multis were good, flow was good, everythin was hell.

    good job.

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  5. December 15th, 2004, 10:01 AM #5
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    man that was some tight shite!!! sounded like you was driving the real thing so it made a nice twist! some good skillz. keep it up work, lol write one on pacman!
    "Ayo the lyrical law, like you dont already know"


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  6. December 15th, 2004, 01:51 PM #6
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    thanks playas. i appreciate it.


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  7. December 15th, 2004, 02:04 PM #7
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    Great shit. And rofl@the ending, decent shit. Your imagery is great. So is your creativity. Your other OMs should be in Legends, but this site is full of D/Rs, and the real dope cats like you don't get the props and respect they deserve.

    I loved this shit.

    Keep it up Ace.

    Please hit this up:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160309

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  8. December 15th, 2004, 02:11 PM #8
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    i like dis piece player...me and u got similar styles...ya flow was on point, along with ur multis and everything...
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  9. December 15th, 2004, 02:26 PM #9
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    check SS for my reply...
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  10. December 15th, 2004, 02:39 PM #10
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    Nice verse, your multi's were on point. It was a really good ending, completely caught me off guard. The pattern was tight.

    Nice flow, if you pulled it off on wax it'd be solid. Good #'s too, the bars weren't overly done and they all seemed to match up well.
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  11. December 15th, 2004, 02:43 PM #11
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    yo man that was off tha hook man that was awesome keep it comin good job
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  12. December 15th, 2004, 03:47 PM #12
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    thanks for all the feed peepz, i appreciate it, drop links if you want me returning the favor.


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  13. December 15th, 2004, 08:23 PM #13
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    word to mahself. uppin this.


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  14. December 15th, 2004, 08:28 PM #14
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    Very nice Glory.

    I liked the begining, and the verse progressed, so i was very into it.

    Dope concept, leading us into a reality that you destroy at the end.

    Smart.

    *edit w/ link*

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160054
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  15. December 15th, 2004, 08:29 PM #15
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    Lol at an Open Mic about NFS. That was original stuff. Good structure and a consistent peice. It had a great way of portraying images to me. Almost felt like playing the game. A wierd subject but you pulled it off nicely. And the twist at the end was good too. Keep it up
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