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Verse #1:
Gene Pool comin back, cataract to the attacks/
of these wack kats, white or black, it don’t matter bro’s/
I’m steppin over the blows, dodgin the throws/
and I’m still striking at every bone with lyrical flows/
like a destined love, destiny best be rested above/
lusting for some tongue, spit sick, ills in all of us/
cuz I’m here to rap, not to understand the flak or the crap/
surrounding whatcha can’t picture that will or won’t fight back/
standing for what I believe, I’ve seen futures diminish in dreams/
I’ve seen people go crazy embracing drugs they’ve gotten for free/
like it’s a god, given and clogged, minds beginnin to thaw/
from the freeze, troubled and speed, coupling like scraped knees/
they bleed incentively, with consistency on why not to believe/
so let’s just take this back to the start, beginning to end/
fuck it my friends! Let’s just battle until we all dead/
cuz it doesn’t matter about emotion anymore/
it’s not about give and get, we just wanna explode/
implode on the downloads of data we store in are brains/
like multiple lacerations we fall victims in our own pains/
Hook:
welcome to act one, act one motha fucka/
believe, corrupted visions here to help you see/
this shits just the first act, the first act bitches/
you know, corrupted visions droppin the new flows/
and if you ever wish to question the antics of are minds/
infringe yourself on style and send yourself back in time/
Verse #2:
Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/
cuz I’ve just about run out of time to be messing around/
no more can I handle these fakes who think they can bounce/
so I sit and count em ounce by ounce, pound by pound/
of how much arsenic I need to put all these bitches down/
just call me a killa on a holiday, strayed to vacant occupied space/
packin nothin but my fist and some mace, ready to do damage to ya face/
cuz like history, I’m the maker, the re-creator of stability and peace/
possibly be the stronger of the weak of destruction and havoc I reap/
and when I speak I speak words deep sinkin in to seep/
beneath the skin to melt you in concepts of granite and teeth/
when I’m smashing you because bitches like you can’t handle the beef/
so step back, lay back, and get off the rap, cuz the mic can’t hold/
Gene Pool hear spreading influence with words through your souls/
and I only got so much medication to distribute for possible use/
but most out of abuse, lack optical invoice and they can’t pump the juice/
so who’s problem does this shit become? who’s problematic number 1?/
Look son, cuz to me you’re the one done from spinnin turntables and puns/
Hook:
welcome to act one, act one motha fucka/
believe, corrupted visions here to help you see/
this shits just the first act, the first act bitches/
you know, corrupted visions droppin the new flows/
and if you ever wish to question the antics of are minds/
infringe yourself on style and send yourself back in time/
Verse #3:
but still I push, push to press Bush and Canada’s goods/
to the border across, waiting out the loss of Kerry, it’s flawed/
and misinterpretation, got us all caught up in complication/
it’s latent for sociological war and civil manifestation/
so let’s just be patient here for a second or two/
cuz droppin bombs is the last thing that I want to do/
but fuck it, this is an all out attack, government flak/
got civilization carrying the world on our backs/
and we walk around wondering what the fuck is that?! It’s wack!/
Canada scandals ridin up are ass, Bush ready to level rebel attacks/
and were just to sit back and watch our family’s get capped/
for some war that doesn’t even involve, but still were grippin are balls/
pullin along a belief that doesn’t recall anything but 9 11/
a tragedy that will never be lettin forgettin but truth is/
Bush, a communist, distant to the problems of his incompetence/
but the problem is, that Bush, a problem that derives policy’s/
lies of deceit and crime that go blanketed underneath are eyes/
and what’s more to say, Canada standing at blame for mad cow gettin away/
and mad cow just a fiction past the fact that are lives are in danger everyday/
kinda makes you wonder what the fuck is wrong with our society today?/
But that ain’t it, cuz prime minister martin’s a fuckin dick/
and there’s one more bone to pick to get the thorn out the side/
just walk into parliament and stick a fuckin knife in his eye/
but no that’s a can’t do, not that I would really want to but still FUCK YOU!/
Martin you back stabbin prick, go back to france with all them french shits/
we don’t need em, we don’t want em, can’t have em hangin around/
if they wanna split? Then get off are land and go back to your hometowns/
and listen to the volume once more that I’m talkin to you/
clustered like bombs, singin but I know you lost your point of view/
for the public, ya love it, I bet, no regrets or respect, it’s for the best/
it’s Canada, it’s nothin to worry about, 100 mil that we can’t account/
for the sponsorship scandal, I’m sure you basterds got it all figured out/
while sittin on your bags loaded with cash in your million dollar homes/
break it and say “fuck the hobo’s livin on the streets out in the cold!”/
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