Effect vs Killa Instinct

[Killa_Instinct]

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no crew h8 votes
no dr votes
no feedin
no bitchin
yeh......................

[Killa_Instinct]

weak concepts is wat u extrude, newb battles really gettin to yourself
thinks hes mentally good, but inside need more brain health
he doesnt tell us to judge about his support for euthanasia
tough guy now, but when ur a vegetable itll faze ya
i usually hate to kill by flow, but for little immitants theres exceptions
if this cat threw his all, i still wouldnt feel the effections
heres a quote:

originally quoted by effect
i cant go into the mod lounge..not special enough yet

u neva will be so dont fret, i already make people live in regret
u shoulda thought twice, but like ur nik, u took no effect
cause bitch battles newbs, so this should be hes main aspect

[nolonger]

Shits wack man..murderer?..lol most your shit was filler
you could run with diplomats..
..and still not claim your even close to Killa
my punches heart son..dont belive your from sydney
rearange the letters..
..he cant take the miky but id say hes from dsney
you dig me?spose one thing you work on your game plan
which explains why all his votes came from his aim man
you lame man...you act tough..think your thugish?
id rcycle some lines..but hes already used the rubbish
nurish my punches kid...but dont like them to much
cuase he was gonna bite my lines..
..fuck instead bite the dust.

[nolonger]

1st............................................... .......

[Killa_Instinct]

1st up............

[Mr. Key]

weak concepts is wat u extrude, newb battles really gettin to yourself
thinks hes mentally good, but inside need more brain health
-kinda weak opener
he doesnt tell us to judge about his support for euthanasia
tough guy now, but when ur a vegetable itll faze ya
no
i usually hate to kill by flow, but for little immitants theres exceptions
if this cat threw his all, i still wouldnt feel the effections
-ok
heres a quote:
Quote:
originally quoted by effect
i cant go into the mod lounge..not special enough yet

u neva will be so dont fret, i already make people live in regret
-iiight
u shoulda thought twice, but like ur nik, u took no effect
cause bitch battles newbs, so this should be hes main aspect
-decent at

[Mr. Key]

Shits wack man..murderer?..lol most your shit was filler
you could run with diplomats..
..and still not claim your even close to Killa
-nice name play and opener
my punches heart son..dont belive your from sydney
rearange the letters..
..he cant take the miky but id say hes from dsney
-not feelin it
you dig me?spose one thing you work on your game plan
which explains why all his votes came from his aim man
-decent
you lame man...you act tough..think your thugish?
id rcycle some lines..but hes already used the rubbish
-iiight
nurish my punches kid...but dont like them to much
cuase he was gonna bite my lines..
..fuck instead bite the dust.
-decent at best closer
Vote: effet for wittier hard hittin punches, better structure and flow, and a nice nameplay. Killa Instinkt ur verse had really stretched structure which mad it choppy and ur punches werent very effective, try to come more creative wit ur punches and verse. 1, return the favor, my battle wit joka needs votes

[IAmazeMe]

killa instinct..

weak concepts is wat u extrude, newb battles really gettin to yourself
thinks hes mentally good, but inside need more brain health

^^blahw asnt really feelin this..

he doesnt tell us to judge about his support for euthanasia
tough guy now, but when ur a vegetable itll faze ya

^^forced rhyme that didnt even rhyme

usually hate to kill by flow, but for little immitants theres exceptions
if this cat threw his all, i still wouldnt feel the effections

^^good nameplay mos def feeling this

u neva will be so dont fret, i already make people live in regret
u shoulda thought twice, but like ur nik, u took no effect
cause bitch battles newbs, so this should be hes main aspect

^^weak closer..

eff..

Shits wack man..murderer?..lol most your shit was filler
you could run with diplomats..
..and still not claim your even close to Killa

^^decent

my punches heart son..dont belive your from sydney
rearange the letters..
..he cant take the miky but id say hes from dsney

^^wasnt feeling this

you dig me?spose one thing you work on your game plan
which explains why all his votes came from his aim man

^^ok i guess

you lame man...you act tough..think your thugish?
id rcycle some lines..but hes already used the rubbish

^huh wasnt feelin it

nurish my punches kid...but dont like them to much
cuase he was gonna bite my lines..
..fuck instead bite the dust.

^^ok

overall.. pretty tough battle to vote on...preet decent.. umm need better flow better vocaba nd punches work ont hat... my vote though has to go for..

effect

[Killa_Instinct]

uh asia and ya does rhyme dumbass and u left out the quote which rhymes wit the next line.. vote properly...

[Revel]

KI:
weak concepts is wat u extrude, newb battles really gettin to yourself
thinks hes mentally good, but inside need more brain health
nah...
he doesnt tell us to judge about his support for euthanasia
tough guy now, but when ur a vegetable itll faze ya
blah...
i usually hate to kill by flow, but for little immitants theres exceptions
if this cat threw his all, i still wouldnt feel the effections
meh...
heres a quote:

i cant go into the mod lounge..not special enough yet

u neva will be so dont fret, i already make people live in regret
meh...
u shoulda thought twice, but like ur nik, u took no effect
cause bitch battles newbs, so this should be hes main aspect
okay personal...

Effect:
Shits wack man..murderer?..lol most your shit was filler
you could run with diplomats..
..and still not claim your even close to Killa
okay personal...
my punches heart son..dont belive your from sydney
rearange the letters..
..he cant take the miky but id say hes from dsney
nah...
you dig me?spose one thing you work on your game plan
which explains why all his votes came from his aim man
ehh...played...
you lame man...you act tough..think your thugish?
id rcycle some lines..but hes already used the rubbish
okay...
nurish my punches kid...but dont like them to much
cuase he was gonna bite my lines..
..fuck instead bite the dust.
meh closer...

this was an aight battle...both had decent personals and good structure...KI, i thought your verse was okay...u had good vocab...but u had way too many filler lines to compete...each line had a good set-up, but the punch failed to connect.....Effect, u definitely didnt bring fire here, but ya verse was still decent...lack of filler lines got u the upperhand here...

V/ Effect...

[nolonger]

thanks everyone...............2nd........................ ....

[Haywood Jewblomi]

Effect got this one in my opinion.

Personals: Effect had some really nice personals here, eg.

you could run with diplomats..
..and still not claim your even close to Killa

Punches: Efect had this one too. There were some from Killa, but they were quite basic.
Meta's: Effect got this, for the killer one mainly, but his others were good too.
Multi's: Nobody really had any, so it was a draw.
Wordplay: Effect got this with that disney line. Funny stuff.

Overall: Effect won this one quite easily. I think that Killa could get better with time though.

It would be appreciated if somebody could vote on my battle. It needs some votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155917

Thanks.

[nolonger]

thanks.............................bounce......... ......

[sick_spitter]

effect- i like your verse the bit about sidney disney thing didnt really work for ya... but apart from that i liked your verse creative and clever... came with punches, rhymin was gd, and nice flow and structure
killa- 1st off put quotes and explanations at the begging or end not in the middle... apart from that a decent battle... effect came stronger with punches, and had a ncer structure and flow, so he gets my vote though but gd verse..... return that fava links in sig

[nolonger]

-bounce-..............................................