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    Running from the Unknown

    Running From the Unknown


    We have always been inquisitive creatures... there have always been things we have not understood. However in recent history the thought has arisen that eventually the universe will be comprehended in it's entirety. This is not an idea which I ascribe to. Nevertheless, in the interest of fairness... check it out...

    my passive brain flexes at practically the same nexus
    as thought turns to actions - surpassing archaic hexes
    I’m laughing at what vexes the massing of both sexes
    no riddles here - electric thoughts and atomic bodies
    conscience is delusion - so I understand John Gotti
    mind’s strong from pilates - avoidin’ foolish mistakes
    got no problem admittin’ I’m merely a fish that grew legs
    and instigated a new age as man appeared in two waves
    hid from meteor fusillades an’ ate dinosaur’s huge eggs
    then survived the ice with flames within a few caves
    where our unquotable grunts and opposable thumbs
    gave rise to the thought that we were notable once
    but it’s all biology - DNA makes it quite plain
    our physiology keeps away mistakes of blind faith
    men made God - opposing thought’s religious illusion
    in each mirror I see fastidious evolution...


    It's all mathematics... numbers don't lie, formulae don't lie, science doesn't lie... religious nutcases lie... check it - verse two...

    six creative days? seems a sick plaintiff’s haze
    we’ll crush that notion ‘neath a molecules date
    once we chronicle the pace at which follicles decay
    within the layers of limestone the history is recorded
    eons upon eons of unsolved mysteries horded
    by the miserly contorted formations and structures
    auspiciously refuting the verbatim instructions
    from people who plucked pens from feeble duck limbs
    it's as ridiculous as modern tales of abductions
    so here's an abrupt end to your faulty judgments
    ok - the cosmos was birthed and isn't infinite
    but you throw "God" in first - without incident
    it's simple shit - in that case - please - what made Dios?
    oh - you hate that keynote 'cause you've no riposte
    you see - we know that science will confer the payoff
    there's no pattern or plan - the universe is chaos...


    How many mountains must crumble into the sea? How many stars must explode? How many leaves must wither in decay before you admit there is no master plan, there is no...

    ENOUGH OF YOUR LIES - YOU WILL DENY ME NO LONGER
    AVERT YOUR EYES FOR YOU CANNOT SEE YOUR FATHER
    AND LIVE - YOU WEAK MORTAL - I GIVE YOU A DREAM PORTAL
    TO PAST EVENTS - NOW OBSERVE THE WORLD'S MAKING
    I LASHED ELEMENTS TO MY PREFERRED PERSONAL WAKING
    AND REALIZED DREAM - FOR MY OWN EYES HAVE SEEN
    WHAT THE FUTURE BRINGS AND EVEN WHAT YOU WILL THINK
    I AM THE ALPHA AND OMEGA - MY POWER IS GREATER
    THAN YOUR COMPREHENSION - NEED I FIRST MENTION
    I SPOKE AND IT CAME TO BE - NOW YOU FAIL TO NAME ME
    AS YOUR MAKER - YOUR LORD - YOUR MASTER -
    YOUR GOD
    I NEED NOT CATER TO YOUR POOR, INACCURATE HEART
    BUT I WILL NOT SMITE YOU - THOUGH I HAVE AMPLE REASON
    GRANTED YOU RECANT YOUR BLASHPEMY AND DO OBEISANCE

    hearing voices - worn out - head's startin' to nod
    I know without doubt... there is no God...


    The evidence of a creator is all around us. We see it, we hear it, we smell it, we taste it, we feel it... Must he speak personally to each one of us? They would deny him still. Only a fool could deny the creator. And the only difference between an atheist and a fool is that the atheist at least has a choice...


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    This is on my soundclick... a few minor changes have been made as neccesary for the beat - thnx for reading...
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    Last edited by SMZ; November 19th, 2004 at 12:10 AM

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    Nice Vocab Alright Construction Into Your Piece Kinda Went Over Edge Trying 2 Say Your God I Say Thats An Overstatement.

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    You have outdone yourself. Flow, imagery, meaning, metaphors, emotion, voice, all dope. Top Ten easily. Good shit my man. Peace.
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    thnx - I return favors - let's get some replies...

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    There were some outstanding lines here.
    The rest were very good as well,but lines like this are excellent:
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    my passive brain flexes at practically the same nexus
    as thought turns to actions - surpassing archaic hexes
    I’m laughing at what vexes the massing of both sexes
    there's no riddles here - electric thoughts and atomic bodies
    conscience is a delusion - so I understand John Gotti
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    Nice vocab..flow..Nice everything.
    Good work.

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    why not? up...

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    Great rhyme scheme. Dope multies. Imagery was great. A few metaphors I liked, and that's about it. Nice ending. This was dope, I enjoyed it. It was really creative too, nice shit man.

    Please hit this up in return:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160309

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    nice vocab and flow interested me good overall writing nice job

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    wow...thats awsome... I'll give a longer thing later.... Got to work

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    Yeah. Amazing. You have a lot of talent, and you have excelled yourself right here. Amazing drop. Your flow didn't fall off anywhere that I could see, you could have came harder with the multies - but I'm glad you didn't - because this would only have subtracted from your message. Great rhyme man.

    Give this a read if you get time:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161104
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    What? This was dope besides the massive vocab..I've never liked that, but you know me, that's how I am always..anyway..your wording was damn near flawless...I was really feeling "Gods" part simply because it seemed so powerful since you bolded it...most of the words were simple yet powerful...dope..

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    hey man this was a real good piece...nice vocab, flow and especially structure. keep it up man...peace

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    Streetcredz, Predatorian and tonguetwista if you want the favor returned please leave a link - there's too much stuff being dropped and I'm lazy - sorry, but I don't feel like just looking through pages of stuff to try and find something by you...

    Ink Thesis and Jekyll - favors have been returned - you both had some pretty good pieces - Jekyll's in particular was notable - anybody reading this thread should think about hitting those links...

    Nique - thnx alot - your opinion is one of few that matters... and I like reading your stuff - so write something dammit...

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    bold and briliant brave in context and over all image this was darign to do and the end result was immaculate structure was the only flaw. 9/10
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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