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    The Perfection

    accept it or not, your deflected and blocked
    the bigger, the harder they fall...............
    take a look at the enron stock.................
    causin confusion, refusin the subtilties of your mental
    you die like bravehearted rebels, just a fuckin example...
    kid you'll get trampled, man handled into oblivion
    my souls so dark...
    I only catch reflections in obsidian.........
    cross the meridian, bring women into the picture.
    have em screamin blood red murder...
    like divine words in the scripture.......
    face lifter, sign up for a fistfull of surgery...
    i'll whack just for sayin that you've heard of me...
    commitin purgery, lying to faces of god.....
    the crowd had better feel me..
    cause they don't want me to applaud....
    i've brought sin into the church, convinced an immoral priest
    inject his blood with magics disease, aim at the alter boy and release....

    i got bored... my mics broken... took a few minutes out of my time to bless you...

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    Nice stuff... Keep it nice and short


    kid you'll get trampled, man handled into oblivion
    my souls so dark...
    I only catch reflections in obsidian.........

    Dope

    accept it or not, your deflected and blocked
    the bigger, the harder they fall...............
    take a look at the enron stock.................

    Also pretty nice

    Overall nice... only lines I didn't line, was the "wack for if you heard of me"... It was off in syllables and just sounded bad there.


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    Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you

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    obsidian line was nice - other than that was decent - nothing really to say - ok for just fooling around - peace

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    Good Flow Nice Vocabulary Need More Depth Into Tha Literature Of Tha Piece. I Say This Is Ok

    Return Tha Favor And Check-out My Threads On Open Mic

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    Pretty coo flow, had a few nice lines mostly the ones that Bre quoted... overall decent... one

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