Save the Whales?

[SMZ]

Noah had three sons...
Shem, Ham and Japheth
so it stands to reason why there's three damned races
spread across seven continents and even four seas
that's two landmasses and an ocean for each
and even an extra one which could remain untouched
but it doesn't work that way
we got'ta stay fucked
I want what's yours and you want what's mine
starting incessant wars over dust an' grime
encrusting time with feuds built over centuries
black, white, yellow
...colors cause real injuries
wasting energy placing enemies in penitentiaries
it's French to me
I can't understand the hatred
primal and ancient
from the past like cavemen to the future like a Matrix
it doesn't make sense
think racism's dead and gone?
you been fed some lies
take a look at the Pentagon and then the front lines
shipped us all over the globe to kill us in small groups
then they went to our home and destroyed our roots
released a virus and claimed we been fuckin’ monkeys
blood in my iris
not so much hate but the effrontery
'cause in this country they tell us we can jump and run
dance, flow across beats or do something else fun
sounds like a fuckin' dog - feed ME lies?
I’ll bite that hand
beg forgiveness from God but I got to fight the man
it’s just a matter of who’s fitter and I’m sick of this drama
I’m endangered
genus: Nigger species: americana

[SMZ]

I'll get some links:

[Thrust]

i'm really impressed by the piece, by the name of the topic i wasn't sure what to expect what you were going to come out with. i feel your expression on the piece. you pointed out some things that seem all too true. the flow was consistant. kept me reading in a steady pace. overall good work man. hit me up on aim sometime

[Nique.]

Haha@The Title. Fortunately, I saw this on AIM, anyway, I told you I really liked this idea and the approach you took. I was hoping to jump on this, but sense I'm so busy you posted, which was good because your verse stands alone well and maybe even better without mine, who knows? The flow as usual is fluent and your transitions were pulled off very nicely. It's a different style because your lines are a lot shorter than you're used to writing, so it had its weird spots, but they were minor. So minor that it didn't really effect the outcome. I was feeling it. Keep it up.

[Endeva.]

well man i really liked this one, something about the style you used... id like to see more writen like this... the topic too, was handled nicely some really good lines.... yet another good drop

[Chris Black]

This was cool. I did an essay a couple years ago with that same title. It was critisizing the people who spend all this time saving animals when people need saving. Similar piece here. It was more of a ranting piece, not my favorite type but you did a pretty decent job. Nice read. Keep doing you, homie.

[SMZ]

woot! - it's resurrection day!

[Kill.]

nothin too much i can say about this except i liked it

a hit me back plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162356

[spokenoh]

Haha@The Title. Fortunately, I saw this on AIM, anyway, I told you I really liked this idea and the approach you took. I was hoping to jump on this, but sense I'm so busy you posted, which was good because your verse stands alone well and maybe even better without mine, who knows? The flow as usual is fluent and your transitions were pulled off very nicely. It's a different style because your lines are a lot shorter than you're used to writing, so it had its weird spots, but they were minor. So minor that it didn't really effect the outcome. I was feeling it. Keep it up.

That is word. I already told you I liked it when you showed me over AIM like a month ago. Nice flow, some witty lines, and very introspectful. You are a very good wordsworth, Nate, and you know that. Good stuff. Peace.

[Awaken]

lol @ the title. This piece was excellent. I love reading shit with that type of structre, just flows so much better. To be honest, there is racism still going on around my neighborhood, idk bout where every1 else lives, but it still has yet to die. At first, I thought this was going to be about some Noah's Arc mythical shit, but it wasn't, it really capture the moment, good red man, keep it up.