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Thread: First Post! Im Commin' Out Hot!

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    REAL
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    Arrow First Post! Im Commin' Out Hot!

    Check It!
    My Styles So Sick That Im Nautious/
    Before Rappers Battle Me They Better Be Cautious/
    Cuz Im The Type Of Kat To Shoot You Up In Yo' Office/
    An' I Wont Quit Pullin' That Trigger Til' You Beg Me To Stop It/
    Then Ill Drop It, An Smash Out The Back Door/
    Leave Tha' Gun There Cuz Thats Somthin' Im Comin Back For/
    Cuz The Prime Suspect Allways Returns To The Scene Of Tha' Crime/
    And A Real Rapper Allways Returns To Tha' Scene Of Tha' Rhyme/

    An' Ill Rip You Til' You Got Nothin' Left To Say To This/
    An' Leave You Askin "why" Like You Was Jadakiss/
    Cuz Nobody Can Hold Me, Ill Forget Every Word That You Told Me/
    Cuz' Im So Hot You Need Oven Mits To Hold Me/
    An' If You Aint Heard Me Ya' Missed It/
    Ill Eat You Faster Then A Fat Kid Will Eat A Bisquit/
    Ima Keep Rappen Cuz I Cant Get Tired/
    Call Me Denzel Cuz Im A Man On Fire/
    Im Smother Then The Lotion That Ya' Put On Yo Moms Feet/
    Have You Jumpin' Around Like When You Listen To Lil'jons Beats/
    Check It!
    Last edited by Kill.; December 27th, 2004 at 11:19 AM

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    Tell Me What Yall Think. Even If Yall Dont Like It. I Wanna See Some Feedback!

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    Damn Can Someone Plz Post A Reply!

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162366
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162325

    Nice.... U got punch lines 4 days,

    I saw a pic for thys lyric the other day "Im Harder Then A Preteen Boy Gettin A Lap Dance/"
    http://hotghettomess.com/sad.htm (check like the 2nd or 3rd pic)

    Only bad part is smoother is spelled w/ 2 "O's"Im Smother Then The Lotion That Ya' Put On Yo Moms Feet/

    Other than that... hot stuff!
    God Rules Each & Every Nation

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    Thanx 4 Postin Man

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    sTRAIGHT..........aND THIS iS cOMIN fROM a vET, ........ nICE lINES....nICE vOCAB......nICE lIL nEWBE

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    Thanx Pbk And Jrp7452. And For Those That Are Readin It And Not Postin Just Let Me Know What Yall Think

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    Charli Brown
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    you on tha right track

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    Charli Brown
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    you on tha right track

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    The first paragraph was trash.
    Second one was pretty cool though.
    Nice metaphores. But tone down the weak shit...
    like this line: "Faster Then A Fat Kid Will Eat A Bisquit."
    It's corny.

    I still think you could be pretty good at battling.
    Merk a few weak kids and drop a link in the jr league.

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    that shit was aight, sum nice lines, pretty good flow, good structure, ur on the right track dawg.pz.

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Butt Faggot's Avatar
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    this shit was pretty tight,i liked the flow in it,


    word of advice,us newbs gotta stick together,cuz some of these vets be talkin mad shit

    peace

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    Leave Tha' Gun There Cuz Thats Somthin' Im Comin Back For/
    Cuz The Prime Suspect Allways Returns To The Scene Of Tha' Crime/
    And A Real Rapper Allways Returns To Tha' Scene Of Tha' Rhyme/
    them lines of yours i think was hot real nice

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    thanx 4 all tha props keep em commin

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    Cuz The Prime Suspect Allways Returns To The Scene Of Tha' Crime/
    And A Real Rapper Allways Returns To Tha' Scene Of Tha' Rhyme/
    Every thing wuz hot except for^

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162420
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162418

    Plz rate---- 1kailoph031
    --------------- 1 KailoPH031

    Ya dont fuck with SI/BK Coney , 031 ParkHIll
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