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  1. October 23rd, 2004, 07:40 PM #1
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    Life Line

    Elegant Like Peacock Feathers, Better When Sights Ease Off Ether
    The Creed Clots Cleverness, Bless; Wickidly Wheeze From Weather
    Rest Rickidy Structures, Ruptured Vital Help Struck By Wild Wealth
    Nightfall Squelches My Idle Self, Muddled/Puddles Of Thought Ends
    Rubble Reaches Distraught Friends- Troubled How I'll Extort Trends
    Jehst The Fait, I Can't Respirate And I'm Just Here To Test Curate
    Festive Freight Now Less To Make, Happiness- Wackyness Traced
    Must Seem Bizzare, Pleased I'm This Far; Because Apathy's Placed
    To Describe My Life Is Like End Of Night; Reviving Light [ Yeeah ]
    Bold And Brave, And Mould The Maven With Heights Holding Haven
    Thats Below Me Fly My Fishing Rod Into Swirling Mists [ Sl-ow-ly ]
    Hack The Holy; Athiest- Maybe Thus' Being That- Days Combust
    Because When We Slave So Sus, We're Caught Praying; Plus Ages
    Display What, We May Not See, And The Lord Came Off Scot Free
    ' You Got Me Partner ' Shows Companionship, Yet Hands Them It
    Knew Not Departure; But Abandonedment, Bad Fantisist [ Life Line.. ]
    .. Have You A Life Line? If Not Call 0800-120-120 And Fight Time
    With Your Very Own Life Line, Conditions Apply
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  2. October 23rd, 2004, 07:51 PM #2
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  3. October 23rd, 2004, 08:00 PM #3
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    Hhmm Ok, Now to be 5 posts? and you don't think this piece is worth a more detailed and accurate account of your opinion. To me, its an original concept to this site, trying to sell something imagenry. Possibly the multi rhyme scheme is to complex for your comprehension?
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  4. October 23rd, 2004, 08:12 PM #4
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  5. October 24th, 2004, 11:35 AM #5
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    Up On This, I'll be sure to holler back at you if your reply in full
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  6. October 24th, 2004, 12:39 PM #6
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