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Thread: B.L.A. and Ill Game-"As We Pray"

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    B.L.A.
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    B.L.A. and Ill Game-"As We Pray"


    read the whole verse please
    I worked very hard on this...


    ********************************************
    -BLA-

    hook

    another problem occurs as we pray
    a scream for help is not heared as we pray
    we reside here and its not certain we will live another day
    all that we can do is break our knees and pride and pray-x2
    ********************************************
    -Ill Game

    as we pray we lay our heads to the ground unheard sounds
    turn priests into clowns cuz only real homies reerange you frowns
    cuz as we pray we stay up with hope that god exsists and
    he wasnt just a lil joke as we pray we remember all the times
    our heart was broke couldnt cope had to turn to dope smoke

    and coke while we was walking throught the ghetto eyes
    burnt from gun smoke and as we pray our hearts stray to
    the gods what are the chances we go to heaven, what are
    the odds? cuz i havent seen man...

    signs evry day people getting blown up by mines and niggas
    with broken spines it redifines whatever we thougth was peace
    overseas indies pull triggas and release and lead this world to
    a whole new thought of god maybe he doesnt exsist dont it
    seem quite odd

    "as we pray"

    the pain is felt among the family...even those not standing me
    like my monther never surrendered on making a man of me
    the ability god hands me and you is a random need
    the greed defines as if we pleed for what we can do with our feet
    doesn't prove to be a good christian it only states you're week
    you aren't worthy of words be a def mute please don't speak
    and if you say a word we pray that it will be bleeped
    **********************************************

    -B.L.A.

    We lay our heads down and request that the so called test...
    god gives us are strickly religous and not to only depress
    these wonders I cannot neglect...it only creates a anger compress...
    this depression I trigger to raise the bar and make my lrics complex..

    we stay and pray....providing a solution we beg
    maybe we can basically quit waiting and go after instead
    i'm sure god's tired he's not a lawyer for hire
    he will not perform every task you ask or desire
    I'm my own man and to others I'm a minor...
    do not focus on the Prior..just plan to life your spirits higher...

    My face peels and blood trikkles downstream through my face
    I don't scream i'm tightin my musels and brace...my grace
    is distorted and my stamia aborted ad taste isn't poruing
    my nerves are waste...thi is what dependin on another
    indivusual makes..it creates a world with no pace...just praise
    you gotta produce your own success like just blaze...
    work for a car..or forever will be your bus days

    are your best days your worst?do your life resemble a curse
    are living in a horrificir enviorment where theres commingly a hurse
    are "damn it hurts" always quted while listening in church?
    have you been lately...is it fear or you hate that pastor say "pay me"
    even though with my hardships I promise to stay deep...
    I am my own man so no human being can replace me

    peace

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    hey i liked this song alot tell me and bla what u thought of this thanks

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    i liked that shit it was tight and it was deep...BLA keep it up

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    thanks for the feed bruce wayne keep it coming....

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    this was straight genius..i felt Ill Game's verse more....but both of 'em were tight....this is some deep shit...really enjoyed readin it....

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    ya nice B.L.A aka proverse. wink wink haha liked it man check out my open mic when we meet.
    ..Battles..

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    Really emotional shit.. Nice work.. good content, but i didnt get the flow.. i think the post messed up ya structures

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    hey uppin this because i need some feedbakc thanks all

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    uppin for some crits

    It'll be greatly appreciated and returned

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    yo son that was some deep shit kid stay up ^^^^^^^^

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    hey does any one think this is hall of fame material just wondering

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    Yep! my Boy Ill holdin it down for em man, holla at me on a collab yall, u boyz did that on the track bro, BLA ya verse was tight too man, yall keep it up

    Yep!

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    nice verses by both of ya...I think both did a very good job puttin their thoughts to paper...flow was their...vocab wasn't all that present but that's aight cuz u got into deepness...pz
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