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DMASTA like tissue..i wipe my ass wit hiz flow 3 times a day
nasty fuck..yo name gives us a hint of wut the rest might say(BATER)
punches which cave yo chest and make yo shoulder blades clap
if i wanted a joker id fire thiz clown for thinkin he could rap
give thiz bitch a bone..im sick of hearin yo soft ass bark
dmasta getz molested by hiz own petz when it getz dark
i spit on u and shit on u kill you in five languages
J'adore chiens petite who think that they can hang wit dis
dissin ya in any directionz.. injectin ya wit lethal infectionz
causin self protection from Beaverz Dam mirror reflectionz
Yo uh, leavito beaver isn't nothing but a two faced cunt
He is a bitch makin false rhymes like a little ass runt
Learn this hoe, no one cleans there ass with tissues
No more of your weak rhymes and there full blodded issues
In your avatar I see a bitch as ugly as you
With your thong on not knowing what else to do
I need you to hear this up and really listen
you have a small chance of winning
smaller than the thinnest nitting
Now, let the people vote and they will do the bidding
seeing who wins in this battle that was so cheap
this battle that I am going to win is gonna give me a big leap
Yo good battle now lets get some votes
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im nto voting but both was weak.., levition beaver you did beat me but you wouldent beat me now i elavated to much for you to beat me again...
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Beaver- Your punches were weak. Although I liked the "make your
shoulder blades clap" part. Ok setup. The pet line was gay. I mean
come on, that was corny as hell. The 4th bar wasent even a punch.
And the closer wasent either. They were just bull shit. Fair attempt
at punches the first two bars. You were going the right direction.
Just be more clever. Don't come so obvious if you know what I mean.
Dmasta- Jesus, your verse was bad. Read tutorials in the help forum.
Your shit almost made me blush it was so corny. Keep at it though man
you will get the hang of it. You need to learn what a "punch" is.
Read some battles in elevated frontlines and legends. You will get the
idea.
Overall- Beaver for obvious reasons.
I took time and left you guys alot of feedback.
Return the favor.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148765
Thanks, peace
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obvious although this wasn't as close as one might say cuz there were hardly any good punches, nothin that really moved me...beaver tried to put some french in his shit ( let me translate: I love little dogs )...that really won me over...lol...no but beaver had better punches and his structure was better so he go this...pz
vote: beaver
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aight...
where to start, leavito.. eh.. it wasn't all THAT bad, but it was pretty weak, man. I'm almost positive you can come alot harder then this... maybe I've even seen you come harder then this, I'm not sure. Had some ok concepts, but prob could've been expressed in different ways & flipped. A lil more originality would help, but all in all your punches were okay, could be better..
Dmasta.. yea, you need to elevate .. i can't really say much good about your verse. Possibly you elevated like you said in your alias. But this battle he just came alot harder then you... simple..
vote- leavito
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Yo dawg, this wasn't the one where I said I gotten better. Check your info... thanks for the votes. Uppin.
aight,
Beaver, u definitely coulda come betta than this, your verse was weak here there werent any personals, and the punches weren't very hard hittin, u had a lotta disses that were real basic n not that creative....but i'd say that on the positive side, your structure was good throughout...
Dmasta, i thought your verse was weak too...it definitely coulda used some work...the structure was aight at first, then it sorta got fucked up near the end...n u made an attempt at a personal (about the avy), but that didnt really work out...n people DO wipe they ass wit tissue cuz toilet tissue = toilet paper dawg, same thing....but anywayz keep doin ya thing n get betta...
V/ Beaver, fo betta overall verse...
i need an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=2&pp=15
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