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  • Dmasta

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  • leaveitto_beaver

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Thread: Dmasta vs leavitto beaver

  1. #1
    leaveitto_beaver
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    Dmasta vs leavitto beaver

    rules are in B slapped

    30 min after checkin
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  3. #3
    leaveitto_beaver
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    DMASTA like tissue..i wipe my ass wit hiz flow 3 times a day
    nasty fuck..yo name gives us a hint of wut the rest might say(BATER)
    punches which cave yo chest and make yo shoulder blades clap
    if i wanted a joker id fire thiz clown for thinkin he could rap
    give thiz bitch a bone..im sick of hearin yo soft ass bark
    dmasta getz molested by hiz own petz when it getz dark
    i spit on u and shit on u kill you in five languages
    J'adore chiens petite who think that they can hang wit dis
    dissin ya in any directionz.. injectin ya wit lethal infectionz
    causin self protection from Beaverz Dam mirror reflectionz

  4. #4
    Dmasta
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    Yo uh, leavito beaver isn't nothing but a two faced cunt
    He is a bitch makin false rhymes like a little ass runt
    Learn this hoe, no one cleans there ass with tissues
    No more of your weak rhymes and there full blodded issues
    In your avatar I see a bitch as ugly as you
    With your thong on not knowing what else to do
    I need you to hear this up and really listen
    you have a small chance of winning
    smaller than the thinnest nitting
    Now, let the people vote and they will do the bidding
    seeing who wins in this battle that was so cheap
    this battle that I am going to win is gonna give me a big leap

    Yo good battle now lets get some votes

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    leaveitto_beaver
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  6. #6
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    im nto voting but both was weak.., levition beaver you did beat me but you wouldent beat me now i elavated to much for you to beat me again...
    ..Battles..

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  7. #7
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    Beaver- Your punches were weak. Although I liked the "make your
    shoulder blades clap" part. Ok setup. The pet line was gay. I mean
    come on, that was corny as hell. The 4th bar wasent even a punch.
    And the closer wasent either. They were just bull shit. Fair attempt
    at punches the first two bars. You were going the right direction.
    Just be more clever. Don't come so obvious if you know what I mean.

    Dmasta- Jesus, your verse was bad. Read tutorials in the help forum.
    Your shit almost made me blush it was so corny. Keep at it though man
    you will get the hang of it. You need to learn what a "punch" is.
    Read some battles in elevated frontlines and legends. You will get the
    idea.


    Overall- Beaver for obvious reasons.
    I took time and left you guys alot of feedback.
    Return the favor.....
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148765
    Thanks, peace

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    leaveitto_beaver
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    uppin thiz.............................................. ...................................2

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    leaveitto_beaver
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    bumbin thiz..............................uppity up..........................................

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    obvious although this wasn't as close as one might say cuz there were hardly any good punches, nothin that really moved me...beaver tried to put some french in his shit ( let me translate: I love little dogs )...that really won me over...lol...no but beaver had better punches and his structure was better so he go this...pz

    vote: beaver
    Hit N Run

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    aight...

    where to start, leavito.. eh.. it wasn't all THAT bad, but it was pretty weak, man. I'm almost positive you can come alot harder then this... maybe I've even seen you come harder then this, I'm not sure. Had some ok concepts, but prob could've been expressed in different ways & flipped. A lil more originality would help, but all in all your punches were okay, could be better..

    Dmasta.. yea, you need to elevate .. i can't really say much good about your verse. Possibly you elevated like you said in your alias. But this battle he just came alot harder then you... simple..

    vote- leavito
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  13. #13
    Dmasta
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    Yo dawg, this wasn't the one where I said I gotten better. Check your info... thanks for the votes. Uppin.

  14. #14
    unXtatic
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    aight,
    Beaver, u definitely coulda come betta than this, your verse was weak here there werent any personals, and the punches weren't very hard hittin, u had a lotta disses that were real basic n not that creative....but i'd say that on the positive side, your structure was good throughout...

    Dmasta, i thought your verse was weak too...it definitely coulda used some work...the structure was aight at first, then it sorta got fucked up near the end...n u made an attempt at a personal (about the avy), but that didnt really work out...n people DO wipe they ass wit tissue cuz toilet tissue = toilet paper dawg, same thing....but anywayz keep doin ya thing n get betta...

    V/ Beaver, fo betta overall verse...

    i need an honest vote here:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=2&pp=15

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    leaveitto_beaver
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    uppin last one
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