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  1. September 30th, 2004, 12:34 AM #1
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    bonita

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148202


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148487

    what up L somthin out the shoe box
    wild prog rap experimental type love joint


    ever since you opened your heart
    broke in ma part hopen to start
    soakin ma dart
    dirty as you wanna be
    onta me yet honestly
    the brown eye sodamy
    possible the rug burns from thrust earns
    costin me.
    gotta be the climax, and my max
    from rise claps and wise cracks
    the thighs waxed implies acts
    seriously heavenly
    ivory or ebony
    sendin me extacy
    shorty screamin needa enter me
    the type a entity endin me
    energy flux
    double header deluxe
    four in the mornin fucks
    shux, the luckiest man
    with the loveliest tanned
    five six eyes fixed
    nose powdered and nice hips
    drys lips from puttin in work
    wood in a perk should'n of jerked
    knowin you showin a skirt
    even the register clerk
    notices the bonuses
    this lotus is mine what kinda tone is this
    the type replied no other
    so utterly buttered brotherly muttered
    mother cover your eyes child
    cries filed from the bed room
    since midnight to dead noon
    head soon sunlight or blead moon
    candle glares and sex tunes
    tramma donna onna table in the sauna'
    fonda momma onna beach towel in the honda
    fond of my gleam
    inseem seen window steam
    and joy creams deploy screams
    ass fatter then a sacka soy beans
    destroys means for abstanance
    been absent since soild dreams
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  2. September 30th, 2004, 12:39 AM #2
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    sensual sexual poetic a lil odd but still a good drop much talent and such skill
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  3. September 30th, 2004, 12:23 PM #3
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    right
    good lookin kinda perverted but you know....
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  4. September 30th, 2004, 08:14 PM #4
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  5. September 30th, 2004, 08:19 PM #5
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    i need a towel lol jk good spit keep at it do ur thing
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  6. September 30th, 2004, 08:23 PM #6
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    will u return the focour please and hit up my open mic called where are they now
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  7. October 2nd, 2004, 10:12 PM #7
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    right already dropped feed...
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  8. October 4th, 2004, 01:07 PM #8
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  9. October 4th, 2004, 05:56 PM #9
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    i was feelin this piece nice drop good concept u cant go wrong with the ladies nice vocab n multis u got some potential keep doin wat u do....gone

    return the favor : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148846
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  10. October 5th, 2004, 05:26 PM #10
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    up n up, right mayne nah what ya sayin... always elevatin....
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  11. October 5th, 2004, 05:50 PM #11
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    kIND OF DEEP, i liked it otherwise talk about somthing in your life


    Replace My Good Deed


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  12. October 5th, 2004, 07:27 PM #12
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    you didnt have to much metaphores short lines but that makes flow nicely played you need some vocab tho...
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  13. October 5th, 2004, 07:39 PM #13
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    it wasnt really high expectation piece, kinda just wanted to display skill a really well flowed word play type of excell piece..... but right thanks
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  14. October 5th, 2004, 08:07 PM #14
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    right, perverted... but u can tell this joint just flows when u spit it ya know? certainly displays an ability to rhyme.... lookin forward to seein what u can put together with somethin meaningful or clever
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  15. October 5th, 2004, 09:06 PM #15
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    it's not too bad...decent vocab and imagery...

    Your structure definetly needs work...make it easier for us and it you land some of those lines together we take it as multis...

    Not a bad piece though...

    Keep droppin
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