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yup.
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Check...
happy 21'st..... loss..
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Heh...your funny
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
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Smoka got it...too bad I can't vote. Want to check out my battle against Domthelord
elwood breakdown...........
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
good opener nice punch
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
decent
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
1st line selfglorifying 2nd was decent
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
good personal and good punch
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
nice punch with wordplay and meta
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
good closer with punch with a good personal
smokajoka666......................
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
kind of selfglorifying but decent punch
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
nice wordplay and decent punch
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
decent
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
decent punch with a personal
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
good punch with wordplay and personal
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
weak and played,should have been more complex like ya otha lines
conclusion.................
elwood came hard and had good punches and personals and wordplay
smoka came hard as well but i wasnt feelin the closer
punches-elwood(slightly)
personals-elwood(slightly harder)
structure-smoka
flow-elwood
multis-smoka(elwood had no multis)
wordplay-smoka
metas-elwood(smoka had no metas)
well as u can see from everything above,in overall i think elwood did better but by a lil bit...good and close battle ya'll
vote/Elwood.............ps.plz hit my sig up with an honest vote,thx -1-
upp..
preferably for people who will understand our personals.
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Elwood
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
Decent.
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
Okay.
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
No.
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
RV punches are very played.
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
Coo.
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
Not really feelin' it.
SmokaJoka666
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
Nice shit, nice flip on that concept too.
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
Lol.
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
Decent.
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
Ehh, for some reason, I wasn't really feelin' it.
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
Lmao, I think this is your best line so far.
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
Cool closer.
V/Smoka
Peace
knocking on Elwood is old Smoka.
I used it too.
its a shame Elwood could of pulled this
off if his wording had been better..
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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Felt this was a decent battle enjoyed it
Smoka Just Shaded It
Reason: After reading both verses a couple of times i just thought that smoka's was less played than elwoods, although elwood came decent his verse wasnt overall as good and as witty. Overall the battle was enjoyable..and elwood lost out this time..no hate
V/ Smoka: For better concepts and punches
I took the time out..now return me the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&page=1&pp=15
sorry wasnt able to poll..coz i havent post 200 yet
Heh, pretty close. Umm....
Both did decent here. I think Elwood took it because his verse was more personal, while Smoka had some wordplay but wasn't very good personally. Elwood, I thikn this is the best I've sen from ya. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Elwood
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146756
Hit this up, thanks. Peace.
If this wasn't the 100th battle with the same personals I'd applaud your verse Elwood....either way...still a good drop....liked the opener...
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