God vs. unXtatic

[unXtatic]

usual rules...
one verse each, 8-16 lines
BLIND SPIT- verses due 30 min after both check in
no hate or DR votes, no BS votes

aight, checkin in

[God.]

Checkin' in... Good luck, unXtatic.

[unXtatic]

When u was clownin, u were 'losin ya head' like a sexchange/
now yo about to git fucked up like drunk skaters at the X games/
u can underestimate me, but when this black man spit,/
u'll be speechless, yo thoughts be ".........." lookin like pac-man's shit/
dawg, i've got steady aim on whoeva wanna test this/
when hittin, u'll feel Jewish, cuz u'll neva see 'Xmas'/
u shamin God's name, get off the block n hide/
u jus a 'bitch prewriter' coverin ya 'pads' wit whatchyu 'got inside'/
n if that double punch dont put ya back on the mat,/
then i hope dust from ya outdated rhymes gives u an asthma attack/

[God.]

Aight, check it...
God'll shake up this pussy, leave him mixed up and rattled
See, everybody else in unXtatic... when readin' ur battles
& I just can't understand why you'd be callin' out the best
When your lyrics ain't fit to get a vote against all the rest
I'm speedin' past this bitch lyrically, and he'll get whiplash
Call me a sanitation worker cuz I'm just disposin' of ur trash
Son, you talk a lotta shit, but lyrically you're not a threat
I rode ya like a horse to this win, and peeps be placin' bets
Beatin' ya is effortless, kid, and your skills give no response
Have u tryin' to beat da best on RB to da worst on Relaunched
Later

[unXtatic]

aight we need 'em votes, n none of that 'returnin a favor' bullshit

[God.]

Bye bye, unXtatic. Uppin #1.

[God.]

Uppin #2

[Rook-Killa]

i think honestly that this was a close match
god- i expected betta, but u had betta combos, and betta vocab, u ahd the betta punches
unxtatic-u were aite, ur punches were basic and were not as good,ur vocab was also pretty basic.........
v/god

[unXtatic]

....aight, we need some mo votes from yall........

[StraighAce]

god won this ...........

god-better punches opener was pretty good
structure was good personals were good they hit hard

unXtatic-//////............lose those things
some of ya metas were bad......punches werent really hittin hard

u can underestimate me, but when this black man spit,/
u'll be speechless, yo thoughts be ".........." lookin like pac-man's shit/

that line was wack............

v/GOD for better punches

hit up my battle please its gettin slept on

[..Sporadic..]

Very Weak Battle

God Took it

Reason: i didnt particular like any verse actually..i just thought god was slightly better punches were not as weak as the other guy..im hoping god droped that in 5 seeing that his opponent wasnt particulary skilled enuff to drop decent..anyway xatic get rid of the / and read some tutorials they will help ur ass elevate

v/ god: better all round verse

I took the time..now take time with mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&page=1&pp=15

[God.]

^Um... yea, that was not a verse I tried in. Uppin #3.

[Rule.]

Was a pretty one sided, even tho both dropped
weak.. xtatic you had some pretty creative
concepts but you used em all wrong and just
made it filler. God wins for harder punches and
personals.. Like sporadic was sayin man, read
tutorials or other battles or somethin, cus you
might be from a different site with other voting
ways. Keep at it tho..

vote-God

plz check battle in sig

[R. Frost]

V/god

Reason: This was a really one sided battle... God takes it becuse his flow was better his personals was better... his punches was better and everything... UN you really need to evelate your skills and then try commin back to someone with skills because you really got merked this round

[CAMROK]

Yea, no contest..

unX - I don't know if you're new or not, but you actually came pretty nicely for someone i've never seen before. I was surprised. You still definitely need more elevation, sorta seems you tried to hard (if that makes sense). The pacman line was alright, but could've been done slightly different.

God- Eh.. obviously came half assed here. At first i wasn't sure if u were spitting a real verse or not, but by the 6-8 lines I know you must have not been going hard. But you came decent, at the least.. easily enough for the battle. better punches, more direct, harder hitting.. and a personal off his name in the beginning.

vote-god

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145508

can you hit that up, please? thanks.